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Issue159 "The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
翻译:
人类的智慧将总是高于机器,因为机器只是人类智慧的工具。
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提纲
(1)同意观点。
(2)从技术角度来看,机器是人造的,完全执行人的指令,即使是有些智能机器人,也完全是受人编写的程序控制,现在有些高级的机器人会有表情,但那也是人的指令。
(3)从人和机器的差别来看,人有思考的能力,机器没有;人有情感,机器没有。
(4)但是,目前很多机器被滥用,造成的后果可能使人无法控制的,比如污染、核武器等等。
(第二、三点和我的提纲一样,第四点机器滥用的后果我觉得和题目好像有点偏离)
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I totally agree with the speaker's opinion that machines, as tools of human minds, are made by humankind and never superior to human minds. I will shore up my conclusion by analyzing it from technology view and the difference between humankind and machine view这改成the view of the difference between humankind and machine view as below.amy的开头已经形成模版了吧
From the technology view, we can know that whether common machine or advanced machine请教whether…or…可不可以在陈述句里面用于连接两个名词部分,通常间的是问句里, amy确定的话要告我哦, they are both the output of humankind's wisdom, so they have to obey the human's instructions with no condition这句话后面没有紧接具体的论述,反而在段末有相似意思的展开(玩具娃娃),不如换个位置. As is known to everyone, machines are invented to provide convenience for people's life, such as bulb灯泡不是machine吧?, car, computer and the like. With the fast development of technology, many 'intelligent' machines are invented and produced, which give some people the worry that someday machine will exceed and control human instead. Actually, such worry is absolutely unnecessary. When deep studying the 'intelligent' machines, we can find that they are not really intelligent and have thinking, however这里没有转折的意思,只是单纯的相反,用on the contrary更好一些, they are just very complicated. For example, recently, some advanced toys are found in the market, such as dogs应该是玩具狗 and rag baby. They can even have expressions or laugh and cry, which astonish most customers. In fact, all the behaviors are also controlled by human using complex programs, without which the toys can do nothing.
When comparing human and machine, we can find that human has many advantages that machine does not have, such as critical thinking ability and feelings, which enact important function?? in deciding machine can never exceed human mind. Critical thinking and analysis ability is one the most important difference between human and other animals, so does between human and machine. Just because of such ability, people can invent so many machines to improve their lives. In addition, humankinds have feelings, and they can express their happy, unhappy, and the like, but machines cannot. Just the feelings make people do lots of unexpected behaviors, however machines never can do, and they are perform within people's anticipation all the time. 这句论述的不错,学习
However, we have to admit that since some people's abuse of machines, there are many problems that are hard to be controlled by human, such as pollutions or nuclear weapon issues, but it should not be ascribed to machine and actually it is still problem of humans themselves. Recently, people have realized that pollutions are destroying environment seriously and nuclear weapons are threatening human's safety. And there are many similar problems puzzling human, some of which are even out of control. Is it the machines' fault? The answer is certainly not. All these problems are resulted from people's abuse of machines. Consequently, what to be worried should not be the assumption that machines will be superior to human minds; however, it should be the issue how to control the abuse of machines.还是感觉这一段和superior的关系弱一点
To sum up, the human mind will always be superior to machines whether technically or from common sense用the point of the difference between humankind and machine好一些吧, however, human should make good use of machines and control the bad use of them.
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