issue212 实现目标与手段．．下次一定要限时成功！！

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Issue212If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable.
翻译：只要一个目标是值得去实现的，那么任何手段都是合理的
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提纲 1。着种精神是非常必须的。没有这种精神。人们就会在失败面前止步。任何时候具有了这种不怕失败，竭尽一切可能的不达目的永不停止的精神，就具有了成功最重要的条件。比如爱迪生，filament filament
     2。但这种手段必须限制在法律，道德的前提下。比如想赚钱去抢银行。恐怖分子为了达到某种目的进行的恐怖活动等。
     3。远大的理想，才是值得去坚持的。远大的理想不仅能给人们以动力，而且对社会的发展有帮助。登月者。和诺贝尔
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时间：1小时15分钟 盼限时成功眼睛都盼出血了 哎。。。谁有好办法啊
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I agree the speaker's view that we should try any ways to attain the goal. However, I believe that our behavior should not disobey the laws and consider the moral or ethical standers. Moreover, people should have the spirit of insistence in great goal since great ideality has immense value.


To begin with , we should praise the spirit to try any means to accomplish a goal since it is the only to succeed. We have to admitted that nearly no goal can be attained easily. The spirit of insistence is a necessary character for one's success. Without the spirit, people will be tried after some fails and stop at the front of the success. As a result, their goal will never be taken into reality. Even if they change their goal, their will fall again. The sprit of insistence and try any way to accomplish the goal is a important thing to success. Edison inventing bulbs is a good example. before he finally invented the bulb, he experienced countless time of failure. However, just because of his insistence and effects he lighted our world.


However, we have to emphasize that to attain one's goal should never disobey the laws and consider the moral or ethical standers. We can not damage other people's profits to accomplish our goal. Take a extreme example. IF someone's goal is make a great amount of money. Can he attain it by robbing banks or other people? Of course the method is not justifiable, what is more, If he do it, what he will get is not the money but the imprisonment. in order to achieve some goals, terrorist make the blast, as a result many let people dead or injured. Can we praise these bloody things? Consequently, people should never disobey the laws and damage other people's profits, even if the goal is worthy.


What is more important, people should hold on the great goal in that great ideality has immense value. The great ideality not only give people passion to attain it but also are useful to the development of our society. Armstrong who made the first foot print on the moon said he want to " jump to " the moon in 6 year old. another example, in order to make a safe detonator Nobel was explored with our face blood. Finally, he invented the TNT which greatly proceeding our industry. What is more, he left his money for the Nobel prize for encourage the development of the science. SO we should make a great goal and along with the foot print of our forefathers make more accomplishments.


To sum up. we should have the spirit of try any means to accomplish a goal and never give up. However, our action must not  disobey the laws since we can not other people's profits. What is more, people should  hold on the great goal because great ideality has immense value.

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SUYUE大大，这篇文章我自己还没有写，先不拍

不知大大是不知道写啥而耽误时间呢，还是不知道怎么写自己想表达的意义呢？

一般来说，不知道写什么而超时的多一些。
如果是这样，我觉得大大限时的问题，可以从思路上入手努力
先培养流畅的思路，再写~
我在思路的培养上，除了自己以前的阅历而外，就是有意和老妈聊有关GRE话题的咚咚，比如，风能~外科手术技能~
这两个话题正好都贴在了我的主站每日英语中，大大可以去CC哦~

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1.你对一个新题几分钟可以想出TS来，最多不要五分钟。
2。你的结构没有问题，和我习惯的五段式很像。只是你每段也太苗条了。
3。你每段真是按照你自己说的那个方法展开的。不过就是句子太短了，我觉得要提高字数一个就是写长句，多用排比词汇和副词。当然你这样写也不错，因为ETS范文其实句子也很短。只要你目标不高。这样写也不错。只是还是要有所变化。
4。你的TS是不是有点偏题，其实已开始我也类似你的写法。不过总觉得有点偏。