"为我所用"小组第六次作业issue47

rienziUID: 2402391

TOPIC: ISSUE47 - "Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect-that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills."

WORDS: 442          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2008-3-29 23:19:01



    Thinking logically is an important skill for our humankind. With logic and other scientific tools we can make an objective understanding of our world and our universe and we can also use these tools to reconstruct the physical world around us. But, society in which we live and communicate with other people does not require our logical thinking very much. So, social science and natural science are two completely different fields in our knowledge system. The statement above tells us a truth, but I think it is an inevitable characteristic of our society because the ways to resolve those terms which require logical thingking are invented by us through a very particular process.
    There is no doubt that the most important event for our logical thinking is the appearance of logic. And this great achievement is due to Aristotle. In his logic, he told us how to think logically and how to resolve abstract problems. Many greatest scientific findings are made by an individual. Newton found his gravity theory through an accident in which an apple fell on his smart head and enlighted him. Einstein gave us a better gravity theory through his own thinking. These intelletual achievements do not derive from our society. Normal society in which these great men lives did not provide reasoning and other cognitive skills to them. Only a small society like public schools and colleges can satisfy their knowledge lust. Even more, some of those scientists learned by themselves from books to become a great one. So, for these great findings, the statement is true.
    For normal individuals in the world, societies also do not place enough empasis on logical thinking. We can only do cognitive works through some certain activities like chess or other games which are develope by ourselves to improve our reasoning and cognitive skills. Students spend much time in their schools learning those logical issues but they can only use only a few parts of them in their everyday life. Average people do not like to talk those logical issues in a free talk. And the majority even hate these issues, though most achievements of our humankind are made through them. For normal persons, thinking logically is the privilege of those well-educated people. It is said by many people that mathematics, which is the synonym of logical thinking, can only do a little bit effective function in one's life. Given that most people do not like thinking logically, the society can not provide enough cognitive skills to us.
    The abstract scientific achievements made by those great people may do not interfere much with our everyday life. The statement tells us a truth.

[ 本帖最后由 rienzi 于 2008-3-31 18:59 编辑 ]

bitdxcUID: 2465290

Thinking logically is an important skill for our humankind. With logics and other scientific tools we can make an objective understanding of our world and our universe and we can also use these tools to reconstruct the physical world around us. But, society in which we live and communicate with other people does not require our logical thinking very much. So, social science and natural science are two completely different fields in our knowledge system. The statement above tells us a truth, but I think it is an inevitable characteristic of our society because the ways to resolve those terms which require logical thinking are invented by us through a very particular process.

There is no doubt that the most important event for our logical thinking is the appearance of logics. And this great achievement is due to Aristotle. In his logics, he told us how to think logically and how to resolve abstract problems. Many greatest scientific findings are made by an individual. Newton found his gravity theory through an accident in which an apple fell on his smart head and delighted him. Einstein gave us a better gravity theory through his own thinking. These intellectual achievements do not derive from our society. Normal society in which these great men live did not provide reasoning and other cognitive skills to them. Only a small society like public schools and colleges can satisfy their knowledge lust. Even more, some of those scientists learn by him from books to become a great one. So, for these great findings, the statement is true.

For normal individuals in the world. Societies also do place enough emphasis on logical thinking. We can only do cognitive works through some certain activities like chess or other games which are developed by ourselves to improve our reasoning and cognitive skills. Students spend much time in their schools learning those logical issues but they can only use only a few parts of them in their everyday life. Average people do not like to talk those logical issues in a free talk. And the majority even hates these issues, though the most achievements of our humankind are made through them. For normal persons, thinking logically is the privilege of those well-educated people. It is said by many people that mathematics, which is the synonym of logical thinking, can only do a little bit effective function in one's life. Given that most people do not like thinking logically, the society can not provide enough cognitive skills to us.

The abstract scientific achievements made by those great people may do not interfere much with our everyday life. The statement tells us a truth.

评价：
个人以为开头直接点出自己的观点较好，委婉式的开头容易产生跑题的感觉。
结尾略显仓促，应该再次点题或进一步深化。

usayaUID: 2374023

Thinkinglogically is an important skill for our humankind. With logics andother scientific tools we can make an objective understanding of ourworld and our universe and we can also use these tools to reconstructthe physical world around us. But, society in which we live andcommunicate with other people does not require our logical thinkingvery much. So, social science and natural science are two completelydifferent fields in our knowledge system. The statement above tells usa truth, but I think it is an inevitable characteristic of our societybecause the ways to resolve those terms which require logical thinkingare invented by us through a very particular process.

There is nodoubt that the most important event for our logical thinking is theappearance of logics. And this great achievement is due to Aristotle.In his logics, he told us how to think logically and how to resolveabstract problems. Many greatest scientific findings are made by anindividual. Newton found his gravity theory through an accident inwhich an apple fell on his smart head and delighted him. Einstein gaveus a better gravity theory through his own thinking. These intellectualachievements do not derive from our society. Normal society in whichthese great men live did not provide reasoning and other cognitiveskills to them. Only a small society like public schools and collegescan satisfy their knowledge lust. Even more, some of those scientistslearn by him from books to become a great one. So, for these greatfindings, the statement is true.

For normalindividuals in the world. Societies also do place enough emphasis onlogical thinking. We can only do cognitive works through some certainactivities like chess or other games which are developed by ourselvesto improve our reasoning and cognitive skills. Students spend much timein their schools learning those logical issues but they can only useonly a few parts of them in their everyday life. Average people do notlike to talk those logical issues in a free talk. And the majority evenhates these issues, though the most achievements of our humankind aremade through them. For normal persons, thinking logically is theprivilege of those well-educated people. It is said by many people thatmathematics, which is the synonym of logical thinking, can only do alittle bit effective function in one's life. Given that most people donot like thinking logically, the society can not provide enoughcognitive skills to us.

The abstractscientific achievements made by those great people may do not interferemuch with our everyday life. The statement tells us a truth.

不好意思,我来晚了,呵呵
对你的语法,我纠不出什么错误  主要是建议你的开头不要太罗嗦,简明你的观点就行,结尾又太少了.总体上觉得有点虎头蛇尾了...
根据你的观点,你的论述还是不错的  为了能增加你的字数,我建议你再加段,譬如说关注智力的同时,也要关注下其他方面,譬如心理,道德只类，这样能把字数撑出来


[ 本帖最后由 usaya 于 2008-3-31 23:16 编辑 ]