[TOEFL 4—6月Dark_Tournament写作小组 icandoitwell 第九次作业

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1.       topic: Technology cause children show less creative than they were in past.

                                                Technology really cause children show more creative than they were in past
People have different opinions regarding whether technology cause children show less creative than they were in past due to their different experiences and backgrounds. In my opinion, I consider technology cause children show more creative than they were in past.
Admittedly, technology brings some side-effects to children. With the development of technology, different technological commodities are brought to people's lives. Besides convenience brought to people by technology, some commodities really bring side-effects to children. For example, in China, many teachers responded in a survey that their students in elementary school often use cell phone to playing game or chatting in classes, which directly affects their study. Also, while Internet is helping people to contact their families and friends, it is also leading children to addict to chatting online or see something erotic and violent which are unhealthy to children. So no one can deny that technology brings some side-effects to children.

However, the development of technology brings much information and knowledge to children today in many different ways, broaden knowledge brought by that advances children's creativities. For instance, there is a program in TV which is liked by many children. It apply flash and cartoon to introduce scientific knowledge to children.
After children understand the knowledge clearly, they often have some ideas about how to put what they learn into practice. One kind of hinge was invented by a middle school after he watched some programs like above. Hence, technology can really help children foster creative quality.
Further, technology indeed cause children show more creative than they were in past. There are more and more inventions from children. For instance, a high school senior program one software which aims to find a "middle ground" of MRSA-one of antibiotics resistant bacteria-infection testing called predictive surveillance. It resolved the problem of expense met by universal surveillance at present, and now this software is sponsored by a company and will be improved and put into practice in the future.
Just due to more and more new ideas thought out by children, almost every country in the world has organizations to encourage and evaluate the inventions from children.
In sum, though incorrect using technological commodities brings some side-effects to children, this is not the reason to deny that technology helps children foster creative character. What is more, evidences show that technology really cause children show more creative than they were in past.

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1# icandoitwell
Technology really cause children show more creative than they were in past
People have different opinions regarding whether technology cause children show less creative than they were in past due to their different experiences and backgrounds. In my opinion, I consider technology cause children show more creative than they were in past.4 G" S7 i  u9 k, g3 \( b9 X/ \3 n
Admittedly, technology brings some side-effects (side effect)to children. With the development of technology, different technological commodities are brought to people's lives. Besides convenience brought to people by technology, some commodities really bring side-effects to children. For example, in China, many teachers responded in a survey that their students in elementary school often use cell phone to playing(play) game or chatting in classes, which directly affects their study. Also, while Internet is helping people to contact their families and friends, it is also leading children to addict to chatting online or see(watching) something erotic and violent (add works )which are unhealthy to children. So no one can deny that technology brings some side-effects to children.

However, the development of technology brings much(more) information and knowledge to children today in many different ways, broaden (it's a verb)knowledge brought by that advances children's creativities?. For instance, there is a program in TV which is liked by （是不是改成is popular in)many children. It apply(applies) flash and cartoon to introduce scientific knowledge to children. (可以介绍介绍这个TV的名字）
After children understand the knowledge clearly, they often have some ideas about how to put what they learn into practice. One kind of hinge was invented by a middle school ？ after he watched some programs like above （add statement). Hence, technology can really help children foster creative quality.. Y; |3 i/ D  R4 }5 _; [  Q
Further, technology indeed cause children show more creative than they were in past. There are more and more inventions from children. For instance, a high school senior program one software which aims to find a "middle ground" of MRSA-one of antibiotics resistant bacteria-infection testing called predictive surveillance(terrific!). It resolved the problem of expense met by universal surveillance at present, and now this software is sponsored by a company and will be improved and put into practice in the future. 2 M+ m+ F$ ]! e8 u
Just due to more and more new ideas thought out by children, almost every country in the world has organizations to encourage and evaluate the inventions from children.
In sum, though incorrect using technological commodities brings some side-effects to children, this is not the reason to deny that technology helps children foster creative character. What is more, evidences show that technology really cause children show more creative than they were in past.

谢谢你来拍我的，我也来了，呵呵

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1# icandoitwell
Technology really cause children show more creative than they were in past.
People have different opinions regarding whether technology causes children show less creative than they were in past (只是个人意见哦~这里是不是这样写show less creativity than they did in past?)due to their different experiences and backgrounds. In my opinion, I consider technology cause children show more creative than they were in past.
Admittedly, technology brings some side-effects to children. With the development of technology, different technological commodities are brought to people's lives. Besides convenience( brought to people by technology参考意见哦~这个我觉得可以省略), some commodities really bring side-effects to children. For example, in China, many teachers responded in a survey that their students in elementary schools often use cell phones to playing（play） game or chatting（chat） in classes, which directly affects（disturbs） their study. Also, while Internet is helping people to contact their families and friends, it is also leading children to addict to chatting online or seeing something erotic and violent which are unhealthy to children（them）. So no one can deny that technology brings some side-effects to children.  
However, the development of technology brings much information and knowledge to children today in many different ways。Broadened knowledge brought by that advances children's creativities. For instance, there is a program in（on） TV which is liked by many children. It apply（applies） flash and cartoon to introduce scientific knowledge to children.
After children understand the knowledge clearly, they often have some ideas about how to put what they learned into practice. One kind of hinge was invented by a middle school （student）after he watched some programs like above. Hence, technology can really help children foster creative quality.
Further, technology indeed causes children show more creative than they were in past. There are more and more inventions from（made by） children. For instance（这个好像有点重复）, （a high school senior program one software which aims to find a "middle ground" of MRSA-one of antibiotics resistant bacteria-infection testing called predictive surveillance）(这个地方好像有点问题). It resolved the problem of expense met by universal surveillance at present, and now this software is sponsored by a company and will be improved and put into practice in the future.
Just due to more and more new ideas thought out by children, almost every country in the world has organizations to encourage and evaluate the inventions from children.
In sum, though incorrect using technological commodities brings some side-effects to children, this is not the reason to deny that technology helps children foster creative character. What is more, evidences show that technology really causes children show more creative than they were in past.
呵呵，感觉有点跑题，有点混乱。只是我的拙见啦~参考意见而已~