【cracking ibt essay互改小组】 cathychan0626 第14次作业

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In general people always make decision by themselves. For instance, which style or color clothes that he likes, and where would you like to go after next trip or which people you would like go with it.
Sometimes you perhaps ask your friends to help you make it, certainly, it's easy to make a choice. Obviously, which choice you make that it not important.
Some days before, when I graduated university in Beijing, I should find a place to live in. I had not a good idea where I should live in. If I want save money, I should live in the ShiJing district, but it need take more time to get to the company than live in HaiDian district. Although living in HaiDian is near the company, it had to addition 300yuan than ShiJing. I found my friends to giving a idea what should I do, he wisely said it's not important whether you live in only if you feel better. After that I make decision easily, I know as long as I feeling better who care add 300yuan or spend one hours to get to company.
However, when people make a significant decision, the situation is differently. For example like me, when I decide buy a apartment in Beijing, the newspaper, TV programmer and some friends give me a lot of decisions, you know, buying house in China is very expensive in big city like BeiJing or ShangHai. After three months I never do nothing except found where housing is better and cheaper for living, it's very tired and boring. When someone told me that a good apartment you should buy it, I will said ok I will buy, however, I did not idea how about the apartment. Finally, this choice belongs to my girlfriend. For like this situation, people may make decision by other people.

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In general peoplealways make decision by themselves. For instance, which style or colorclothes that he likes, and where would you like to go after next tripor which people you would like to go with [it]./ W9 r8 C" }% i: y
Sometimes you perhaps ask your friends to help you make it, certainly,it's easy to make a choice. Obviously, which choice you make that itnot important.
* _+ _3 P+ Z; T* JSomedays before, when I graduated university in Beijing, I should find aplace to live in. I had not a good idea where I should live in. If Iwant to save money, I should live in the ShiJing district, but it need(will)take more time to get to the company than live in HaiDian district.Although living in HaiDian is near the company, it had to addition300yuan than ShiJing. I found my friends to giving(find.. to do??) a idea what should Ido, he wisely said it's not important whether(wherever) you live in only if youfeel better(很不通哦，什么意思啊). After that I make decision easily, I know as long as Ifeeling better who care add 300yuan or spend one hours to get tocompany.???
2 m$ e7 K( E$ f4 ?8 A- }0 k4 IHowever,when people make a significant decision, the situation is differently.For example like me, when I decide buy a apartment in Beijing, thenewspaper, TV programmer and some friends give me a lot of decisions,you know, [buying](买房子不贵，房子贵) house in China is very expensive in big city likeBeiJing or ShangHai. After three months I [never] do nothing except foundwhere housing is better and cheaper for living, it's very tired andboring. When someone told me that a good apartment you should buy it, Iwill said ok I will buy, however, I did not idea how about theapartment. Finally, this choice belongs to my girlfriend. For like thissituation, people may make decision by other people.
至少要有个其实段标明观点啊
而且不少几句很不通顺啊是观点表达得太模糊了