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Issue 13
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题目翻译
世界上许多不被人们所知的语言因为越来越少的人们说而逐渐消失了，该国家政府需要采取措施去阻止这些语言濒临灭绝。
2、
提纲 （大正小负）
1）
一些不为所知特殊的语言能够让说同种语言的人们形成一个集体，这个集体可以让这些居民找到自己的地位和社会等级，这些同样可以促进他们形成认知感和爱国心。
2）
一些不为人知的语言携带着这些团体独有的文化，保护这些文化也是保护祖先留给我们的文化遗产。
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充满神秘的语言能够吸引其他语种的人来学习认识改语言，当然学习语言的最好的环境就是在语言的发源地，这样给当地的经济肯定起到了促进的作用。
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然而，政府在面对社会福利以及棘手的社会问题的时候不应该利用大量珍贵的资源和设备区保存那些语言，同时，一些语言的灭绝是不可以避免的，语言障碍在当今社会会引起一系列的问题。
3、正文
In contemporary society, numerous linguists claim that many of the world's distinct and lesser-known languages are being disappeared because fewer and fewer citizens tend to speak them. I fully sanction that the impact of the lesser-known languages have positive on many aspects, such as individuals' identity, culture and economics .On the other hand, it is unnecessary that the governments of countries have mandatory obligations to prevent such languages from becoming extinct and a multitude number of languages in the world might set into a chain of commotions in the world.

It is evidently that almost every language plays a significant role in
Individuals' identity of all walk at the lesser-known languages would help foster unique communities s of the life, and especially the less-known languages. What is meant by this is that the residents who speak the same languages would be gathered for this case. Furthermore, after the development of the specious groups, citizens could recognize their own status and strategies in the communities easily which promotes their cognitive minds and patriot. Consquencely, it seems to be reasonable that the continents of the world divide into different countries, different regions and different communities.

In terms of the unique culture, the lesser-known languages carry tremendous gem of the communities' originality culture. Therefore, by learning the traditions, mores and beliefs of the communities' culture, a sense of dignity, pride and self-worth can be founded in residents' minds which is heighten great influence on the lifetime of people. What's more, speaking the lesser-known language has a direct correlation with the reservation of the cultural heritages from ancestors. Consider, for instance, it is universally known that Chinese people in different regions in China speak different dialects, like Cantonese. These dialects---lesser known languages stem from different parts of Chinese citizens and
the main result from it is that the customs in a particular region are not alike any others .Another example----in Canada, the French Canadians would like to speak French tenaciously as their official language instead of English for the purpose to protect their originality culture.

The next is the interests of economy of countries. Such lesser-known languages are mysterious which can fascinate other language-speaking person and stimulate their desires to learn and understand these languages. Over the same period, what will happen is that quantities of people tend to learn a language in its originality environment which could attract much attention to the country and finally will promote the rapid growth of the economy by the prosperous tourism and educational industry.

Notwithstanding, even if the governments of the countries have responsibilities to protect the extinct languages, many of the worlds' lesser-known languages which are being lost is inevitable. Moreover, the governors should prefer to utilize many precious resources and equipments in society's welfares and pressing problems rather than the reservation of a lesser-know language. Similarly, with the rapid urbanization occurring everywhere, language barriers become the most stunts in the communication and commerce in the world. The United Nations regards French and English as its official languages so as to diminishing the barriers between the members in the organization as well as in the EU and OPEC. What is worthy mentioned is that languages can set into a chain of commotions, like wars and discord between different countries for the misunderstanding about languages. After all, the governments should take proper measures to protect those distinct and unique languages.

In sum, on the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to maintain the originality and distinct culture and communities by protecting many of indigenous languages, in addition, the economy of countries can be accelerated and promoted positively. However, because of some conundrums about languages in real world, the government should deal with their pressing responsibilities and the protection of lesser-known languages.

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In contemporary society, numerous linguists claim that many of the world's distinct and lesser-known languages are being disappeared because fewer and fewer citizens tend to speak them. I fully sanction that the impact of the lesser-known languages have positive on many aspects, such as individuals' identity, culture and economics .On the other hand, it is unnecessary that the governments of countries have mandatory obligations to prevent such languages from becoming extinct and a multitude number of languages in the world might set into a chain of commotions in the world.(一方面，这些语言能带来好处，另一方面，政府没有保护他们的义务，感觉你连词用的不对，而且和下面的内容有点差别)

It is evidently that almost every language plays a significant role in
Individuals' identity of all walk at the lesser-known languages would help foster unique communities s of the life, and especially the less-known languages. What is meant by this is that the residents who speak the same languages would be gathered for this case. Furthermore, after the development of the specious groups, citizens could recognize their own status and strategies in the communities easily which promotes their cognitive minds and patriot. Consquencely, it seems to be reasonable that the continents of the world divide into different countries, different regions and different communities.

In terms of the unique culture, the lesser-known languages carry tremendous gem of the communities' originality culture. Therefore, by learning the traditions, mores and beliefs of the communities' culture, a sense of dignity, pride and self-worth can be founded in residents' minds which is heighten great influence on the lifetime of people. What's more, speaking the lesser-known language has a direct correlation with the reservation of the cultural heritages from ancestors. Consider, for instance, it is universally known that Chinese people in different regions in China speak different dialects, like Cantonese. These dialects---lesser known languages stem from different parts of Chinese citizens and
the main result from it is that the customs in a particular region are not alike any others .Another example----in Canada, the French Canadians would like to speak French tenaciously as their official language instead of English for the purpose to protect their originality culture.

The next is the interests of economy of countries. Such lesser-known languages are mysterious which can fascinate other language-speaking person and stimulate their desires to learn and understand these languages. Over the same period, what will happen is that quantities of people tend to learn a language in its originality environment which could attract much attention to the country and finally will promote the rapid growth of the economy by the prosperous tourism and educational industry.

Notwithstanding, even if the governments of the countries have responsibilities to protect the extinct languages, many of the worlds' lesser-known languages which are being lost is inevitable. Moreover, the governors should prefer to utilize many precious resources and equipments in society's welfares and pressing problems rather than the reservation of a lesser-know language. Similarly, with the rapid urbanization occurring everywhere, language barriers become the most stunts in the communication and commerce in the world. The United Nations regards French and English as its official languages so as to diminishing the barriers between the members in the organization as well as in the EU and OPEC. What is worthy mentioned is that languages can set into a chain of commotions, like wars and discord between different countries for the misunderstanding about languages. After all, the governments should take proper measures to protect those distinct and unique languages.

In sum, on the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to maintain the originality and distinct culture and communities by protecting many of indigenous languages, in addition, the economy of countries can be accelerated and promoted positively. However, because of some conundrums about languages in real world, the government should deal with their pressing responsibilities and the protection of lesser-known languages.

我感觉你得开头和中间内容不搭调，开头说这种语言很重要，但是保护他们不是政府的义务，然后下文是语言的，好像没有太论证政府没有保护他们的义务，而且我觉得你说举得哪些less-know language不算是真正的less-know，因为中国的方言照样有n多人去说，我觉得不能算。
你得单词和语言很不错，但是感觉逻辑不清晰，另外你事例很多，赞一个~