Issues153 @@A DREAM @@小组第5次作业 bynicoleq(廿廿)

nicoleqUID: 2626973

Education is under discussion in present time. On most occasions our classroom climate is inanimate. What do we do to fix the boring classroom? In my own opine we should encourage students to accept what they study with skeptical and creative thinking rather than accept it passively.

For one thing, we should encourage students to skeptical think which is the basic driving force for science advance. The development of nature of science is , to a certain extent, a history of challenges to so-called "scientific facts" that have paved the way for scientific progress. For instance, it is just because doubt the theory of the geocentric system of astronomy which is claim that the Earth is a fix position at the center of the universe in that present time, Copernicus brings up "De revolution bus orbium coelestium". In his theory he discuss that the earth whirls on its axis; the moon revolves around the earth and the earth and other planet go round the sun.
No other than Copernicus' skeptical thing lay the foundation of modern science depends. How important the skeptical thinking is. For a student, he or she will ask "How could this be" or "Is it right surely", this doubtful problems force them to dive into the knowledge which their teacher teach them or solve the problems by consulting a source or authority. This must help for thorough understanding the knowledge and enhance the ability of independent learning of the student. Thus, we should train up the student skeptical think.

At the same time, encouraging students to accept what they study with creative thinking rather than accept it passively is equally important. The creative thing is basis for the area of art, commerce, education, chemistry, physics, and so on. In art realm, great artist create valuable piece because all of them have superexcellent creativity. Vincent Van Gogh dare to innovate for have his own unique artistic features, pure and strong color contrast of his works make eidetic memory for one glance. In the commerce area, having creative thinking can improve competition ability of company. The most successful company Wal-Mart carry innovations in technique to use the product-marking codes first which lead to improve half of the working efficiency of cashier. For the student, it is important for them to creative think, as creative thinking can impel them to divorce form dogmatism and characterized by quickness and ease in learning. Therefore, encourage students to creative think is the most meaningful task.

Besides, the student is not just student forever--they will be businessman, artist, or scientist and etc. They will benefits of encouraging skeptical and creative thinking for all their lives. What is more important is that Education is an activity which benefits society in a long term. We should shift our focus from the myopia of restricting study to receiving and reciting to the long range view that we are cultivating the student skeptical and creative think for the future of our society.

Finally, we should linking theory with practice to seek the better way with correct theory for improve our education.

小小amyUID: 2541111

Education is under discussion in present time. On most occasions our classroom climate（atmosphere）is inanimate. What do we do to fix the boring classroom? In my own opine (opinion) we should encourage students to accept what they study (studied) with skeptical and creative thinking (creative thinking是一个约定俗成的词组，and前面的建议改成并列词组skeptical thinking) rather than accept it passively. For one thing, we should encourage students to skeptical think（think 是动词，形容词不修饰动词，think skeptically） which is the basic driving force for science advance（scientific advancement）. The development of nature of science (累赘修饰，the develop nature of science) is, to a certain extent, a history of challenges to so-called "scientific facts" that have paved the way for scientific progress. For instance, it is just because doubt the theory (语法错误，it is just because of the doubt on theory) of the geocentric system of astronomy which is claim (claims) that the Earth is (in) a fix position at the center of the universe in that present (erstwhile) time, Copernicus brings up "De revolution bus orbium coelestium". In his theory he discuss that the earth whirls on its axis; the moon revolves around the earth and the earth and other planets go round the sun. No other than（用在这里转接很怪） Copernicus' skeptical thing lay（laid） the foundation of modern science depends. How important the skeptical thinking is. For a student, he or she will ask "How could this be" or "Is it right surely", this（these） doubtful problems force them to dive into the knowledge which their teachers teach them or solve the problems by consulting a source or authority. This must help for thorough understanding the knowledge and enhance the ability of independent learning of the students. Thus, we should train up the student to skeptical think. At the same time, encouraging students to accept what they study with creative thinking rather than accept it passively is equally important. The creative thing is basis for the area of art, commerce, education, chemistry, physics, and so on. In art realm, great artists create valuable pieces because all of them have superexcellent creativity. Vincent Van Gogh dares to innovate for have (upon) his own unique artistic features --pure and strong color contrast of his works make eidetic memory for one glance. In the commerce area, having creative thinking can improve competition ability of a company. The most successful company Wal-Mart carry (carries) innovations in technique to use the product-marking codes first which lead to improve half of the working efficiency of cashier. For the student, it is important for them to creative think (think creatively), as creative thinking can impel (这个词有点强迫的意思，promote) them to divorce form （去掉） dogmatism and （and前后谓语形式要一致，这里加个be） characterized by quickness and ease in learning. Therefore, encourage students to creative think is the most meaningful task. Besides, the student is not just student forever--they will be businessmen, artists, or scientists and etc. They will benefit of (from) skeptical thinking and creative thinking for all their lives. What is more important is that education is an activity which benefits society in a long term. We should shift our focus from the myopia of restricting study to receiving and reciting to the long range view that we are cultivating the students’ skeptical and creative thinking for the future of our society. Finally, we should linking theory with practice to seek the better way with correct theory for improve our education.

本文的逻辑关系清晰。语法有待提高^-^ 但是看了题目感觉文章有点跑题嫌疑。题目侧重点在于是否该怀疑所学的东西，这里谈的是如何改进学生教育。其实也还好啦……批的不好，见谅哦~~欢迎回拍

小小amyUID: 2541111

:funk:怎么发出来变成这样了啊。。。。哭。。。

nicoleqUID: 2626973

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哈~谢谢！！！改了我poor的语法~~在谢下~~