TOEFL暑期集结号作文 第10次作业 by weflx

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It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?(08.5.31)?

In terms of recent survey that shows most of people always ask others for advice when they are in trouble. This is a natural characteristic, since human being’s potential psychology tends to convenience while they confront some problems. However, human beings’s brain contantly develop for a long time due to they are often operated. Thereby, in my view, I believe that using own knowledge and experience to solve issues is better for us. The reasons for my views go as follows.

The first obvious reason I support is that it will be benefit for individual knowledge acquirement and intelligence development. Because knowledge and experience accumulation is a long term progress, which requires one after one failure and study to be succeed. For instance, at present, computer technology is changing day after day, we always encounter some problems on hardware or software. Admittedly, asking some professional people is a good way to solve them as soon as possilbe. However, you will lost a chance to strengthen your knowledge, since the problem possiblely relate to C programme,Labview, a virtul simulate system and so forth. Actully, if you handle it by yourself, you can learn a lot of know-how and experience through solve the problem which is not obstacle when it is coming next time.

Another important reason I advocate is that solving problems by ourselves bring up the independence ability for future career. As we known, the competetion in career is becoming more and more cruel, everyone wants to possess a unique skill to rival with others. Such as, in one high-tech corporation, each employee has a their own core competiance. When you meet some issues regarding sensitive technic and ask your colleagues, it is likely that they do not tell you. As a result, you must search professional documents and look up some archives concerning the realms to done the problems. Of course, when you succeed to kill it, you will be rewarded more than you pay.

Finally, own knowledge and experience is more effective to take care of problems than acquiring other’s advice. Even if you consult some professional people, it will kill much time, Because, experts are always busy to deal with lots of work and do some researches, they may put aside your consultaion for a long time, even forget it. Furthermore, different people will result in different views as to the same problem, so you have to balance and think deeply which one is right, or which one is effective. Even sometimes, over more advices confuse you and make you lost in jungle with no clear direction. Contrary to, depending on your knowledge and expirence, you can promptly and precisely locate key of problem and solve it.

In sum, as what we disscussed above, depending on knowledge and experience to solve problems benefits for knowledge and experience accumulation. Also, wen can build up the independence ability for future vie. Besides, know how and expericen is more effective to done problems than gaining other’s advices.

  

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蓝色的部分不用在意，是我觉得应该学习的
In terms of recent survey that shows most of people always ask others for advice when they are in trouble. This is a natural characteristic, since human being’s potential psychology tends to convenience while they confront some problems. However, human beings’s（换成people吧，也显得词汇量大，也好写） brain contantly develop for a long time due to they are often operated. Thereby, in my view, I believe that using own knowledge and experience to solve issues is better for us. The reasons for my views go as follows.（没必要，08版主曾经教导我们，如果你觉得你的作文里有一句话可有可无，那他就是可无的）However，以后，感觉首先brain那应该是个被动，而且感觉没什么逻辑性：因为我们的大脑发展了，所以我们应该用我们自己的知识和经验？

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The first obvious reason I support is that it will be benefit感觉有语病，貌似是两个动词 for individual knowledge acquirement and intelligence development. Because knowledge and experience accumulation is a long term这是不是加个of？ progress, which requires one after one failure and study to be succeed. For instance, at present, computer technology is changing day after day, we always encounter some problems on hardware or software. Admittedly, asking some professional people is a good way to solve them as soon as possilbe. However, you will lost a chance to strengthen（这个形容konwledge不太好吧） your knowledge, since the problem possiblely relate to C programme,Labview, a virtul simulate system and so forth. Actully, if you handle it by yourself, you can learn a lot of know-how（又学了个新词，不过我查词典，貌似是个口语用词） and experience through solve the problem which is not obstacle when it is coming next time意思明白了，但是觉得这个从句不对 倾向于自己解决问题，可以让我们获得知识，变得更有智慧。大侠的例子感觉用的很好，赞！

Another important reason I advocate is貌似又是两个动词的错误 that solving problems by ourselves bring up the independence ability for future career. As we known, the competetion in career is becoming more and more cruel, everyone wants to possess a unique skill to rival with others. Such as, in one high-tech corporation, each employee has a their own core competiance. When you meet some issues regarding sensitive technic and ask your colleagues, it is likely that they do not tell you. As a result, you must search professional documents and look up some archives concerning the realms to done the problems. Of course, when you succeed to kill it, you will be rewarded more than you pay. 培养独立能力

Finally, own knowledge and experience is more effective to take care of problems than acquiring other’s advice感觉不是经验有效率，而是用自己的经验做事会更有效率. Even if you consult some professional people, it will kill much time, Because, experts are always busy to deal with lots of work and do some researches, they may put aside your consultaion for a long time, even forget it. Furthermore, different people will result in different views as to the same problem, so you have to balance and think deeply which one is right, or which one is effective. Even sometimes, over more advices confuse you and make you lost in jungle with no clear direction. Contrary to, depending on your knowledge and expirence, you can promptly and precisely locate key of problem and solve it.自己的比别人的更有效率，观点不错，但是感觉论据给的偏了，不如说自己的经验来的更直接，更有印象，所以做起事来会更有效率。

In sum, as what we disscussed above, depending on knowledge and experience to solve problems benefits for knowledge and experience accumulation这个句子感觉缺成分. Also, wen can build up the independence ability for future vie. Besides, know how and expericen is more effective to done problems than gaining other’s advices.

大侠的思路很开阔，很有想法，聪明的孩子
但是感觉有些细节也需要注意：比如一个句子不要有两个动词（谓语？其实这也是我经常犯的错误）；标点的使用，比如because后边，such as后边就不在用逗号了；单词的拼写，把作文发上来之前自己先检查下
以上仅仅是我的一点看法，大侠加油！