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发表于 2015-3-1 21:10:13 |只看该作者

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请问博客地址是多少

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本帖最后由点沧于 2015-3-15 18:20 编辑

老师这是看了您的答案之后修改的：
The director believes that more new dormitories should be built in Buchingham College, given the expected rising students and the rising rent of the surrounding apartment.
很多年没写作文了，语法上都不是很确定了，老师有推荐的比较适合新手的论文么？范文单词很多都要查，而且太长了，不是很适合新手参考，老师能推荐论文么？

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点沧发表于 2015-3-15 18:19
老师这是看了您的答案之后修改的：
The director believes that more new dormitories should be built in ...

22) According to a recent report, cheating among college and university students is on the rise. However, Groveton College has successfully reduced student cheating by adopting an honor code, which calls for students to agree not to cheat in their academic endeavors and to notify a faculty member if they suspect that others have cheated. Groveton's honor code replaced a system in which teachers closely monitored students; under that system, teachers reported an average of thirty cases of cheating per year. In the first year the honor code was in place, students reported twenty-one cases of cheating; five years later, this figure had dropped to fourteen. Moreover, in a recent survey, a majority of Groveton students said that they would be less likely to cheat with an honor code in place than without. Thus, all colleges and universities should adopt honor codes similar to Groveton's in order to decrease cheating among students.

According to the author, all the colleges and universities should adopt honor codes which have reported successfully decreased the cheating rate in Groveton College.

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