《12.20冲刺》IBT写作小组作文贴 by cckkll1994

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改11.30日综合 TPO5
The lecturer raises serious counter argument against the reading passage concerning the useage of Chaco “great houses” by providing drastically divigent evidence

To begin with,while the author claims that the houses might be used for residential purpose because of the similarities between the “great houses” and later “apartment buildings” at Taos,the lecturer points out the fact that there are so few fire places and individual rooms that it is unlikely the houses are function as apartment buildings. 楼主换成和总结的功夫很厉害，这样子简洁而有力，要想楼主学习。

Secondly,contrary to the hypothesis mentioned in the reading passage that the houses are possibly for food storage,such as maize,the sperker argues that this case is contradicted by evidence that excavations showed there is no sign of maize remain or other food traces基本点也听出来了，最后还有一个小细节就是maize container那个，不知道那个细节是不是可要可不要的？

Lastly,another argument raised in the lecture directly refute the possibility from the reading material that the “great houses” served as a ritual role in Chaco society in the sense that massive of pots found in mound around these houses suggests that Chaco people feasted in the ceremonies and dropped those dished later.The lecturer explains that many other things that have no relevance with ceremony have also been found at the mound,such as building material,tools and other trash。强大的听力+强大的总结力。楼主真的很强就是了，这样也不会超时间。。。真的要努力，我也跟楼主一样要冲刺了，加油

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不过楼主我还是有疑问的，到底综合是应该总结浓缩好还是越多细节越好？

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12.01独立

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.



In contemporary era,it is universally accepted that advertisment has played an increasingly in-ignorable part of our daily life and indispensable role of commercial system.Yet,as more and more people tend to live with a unhealthy life style,we begin to ask whether advertising has left a major influence on people , which lead to unhealthy ways of life.Some individuals tend to agree with the assumption, while other believe otherwise.Speaking for myself,I am side with the later view.

Concerning advertising,it,indeed, is cast a vital intermediate in conveying information include those about junk food and other unhealthy habits.Yet,in the meantime, this also demonstrate that advertisements function on more than messagers who provide us options,and the real options are still depend on us.

Moreover,in spite of advertising, there are numerous factors remain.One probable course of unhealthy eating habits is believed to be the unawareness of the potential consequenses of bad life styles,in the sense that those side-effects seems to be too miner to notice.Therefore, people might not take their unfit habits seriously and pay more attention on them.

Besides,according to recent researches conducted by teams of China Medical University, it apears that the blood type also has a close connection with person’s assimilation tendency.For example.People of blood type tend to favor more on sugars and food tasted sweet,while people of blood type ,on the contrary, will more likely to eat less sweet food.

Of course,the advertising has its impacts on people’s unhealthy eating habits,However,if all the factors we have and have not mentioned compile,it is not hard for us to reach the conclusion that advertising is merely one of the causes that lead to unhealthy eating habits.

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In contemporary era,it is universally accepted that advertisment has played an increasingly in-ignorable part of our daily life and indispensable role of commercial system.Yet,as more and more people tend to live with a（改为an） unhealthy life style,we begin to ask whether advertising has left a major influence on people , which lead to unhealthy ways of life.Some individuals tend to agree with the assumption, while other believe otherwise.Speaking for myself,I am side with the later view.
Concerning advertising,it,indeed, is cast a vital intermediate in conveying information include （改为including）those about junk food and other unhealthy habits.Yet,in the meantime, this also demonstrate that advertisements function on more than messagers who provide us options,and the real options are still depend on us.
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Moreover,in spite of advertising, there are numerous factors remain.One probable course of unhealthy eating habits is believed to be the unawareness of the potential consequenses of bad life styles,in the sense that those side-effects seems to be too miner to notice.Therefore, people might not take their unfit habits seriously and pay more attention on them.与上段形成递进关系很有说服力，写的非常好，学习了。: j8 Y4 G- \# t
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Besides,according to recent researches conducted by teams of China Medical University, it apears that the blood type also has a close connection with person’s assimilation tendency.For example.People of blood type tend to favor more on sugars and food tasted sweet,while people of blood type ,on the contrary, will more likely to eat less sweet food.与上段并列，调查很有说服力。
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Of course,the advertising has its impacts on people’s unhealthy eating habits,However,if all the factors we have and have not mentioned compile,it is not hard for us to reach the conclusion that advertising is merely one of the causes that lead to unhealthy eating habits.
楼主写的非常好啊，文章结构严密，很有说服力和论证效果。向你学习。加油！. A+ [2 X*

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你的独立我晚点再改哦好么，刚刚从学校回来，参加了一个ERP沙盘比赛还要整理复赛资料。所以，不好意思了，明天给你改好，加油！

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12.02
综合

   The lecturer raises serious counter argument against the reading paragraphs by providing drastically divergent perspectives regarding whether american wood companies would catch the international standards of conserving resources recycling materials to acquire the ecological certifications.

     Firstly,while the author claims that there has been so much advertising in americans’ life that people might pay little attention to those ecocertification, for they generally cast doubts on advertisements, the lecturer points out the fact that consumers do not treat all advertisements the same, in the sense that they are able to distinguish certifications for independent agencies with international authorities from normal advertisments.Therefore,it is unlikely for the certification to be ignored.

      In the next stage,contrary to the author’s statement that wood companies have to pay extra fund to examining agencies in order to acquire ecological certification,which lead to a higher prime cost of their product----since many people prefer to buy cheaper goods, those company will be in a lower han,the speaker argues that this case will never happen. Because, according to research, it is only under special circumstances when a products’ price is much higher or lower than another products’, would consumers alone depend on the price exclusively.Undoubtedly,the price distance about only 5% cause by certifications will never reach that hight.

     Lastly,another argument raise in the lecture directly contradict to what is state in the reading passage that most american wood companies focus their targets within the U.S, and subsequently,it is rather not essential to match the international standards.The professor explans that the issue is not about orientation,but competition---if domestic companies fail to catch up with their opponents, many foreign wood producers would soon swarm into american land.


速度啊速度啊，又超了五分钟

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12.03 TPO8
The lecturer raises serious counter argument against the reading paragraphs by providing drastically divergent evidence concerning whether Chebanller de Llstenning’s memoir is accurate.

To begin with,while the author claims that evidence showed Chebanller had borrowed large amount of money from a Swiss merchant,which indicate he could hardly be a rich man-----for if he was,consequentlly, he would not need to borrow the money, the lecturer points out the fact that even a very porsperous person will have to wait several days to convert his possessions into cashes in order to hold parties and participate in gamblings. In the process,he might need to borrow money.Therefore,it is unlikely that this evidence or accuse is a reasonable

Secondly,contrary to the critics’ doubts that there is no way for Chevalier to remember the conversations happened years ago as they were written on his memoir, the speaker argues that according to Chevalier’s word,he had written down most of his conversations with Voltaire on notes .Undoubtedly, during his writing of memoir, he refered to his note several times.

Lastly,another argument raised in the lecture directly contradict to what is sate in the reading material regarding the Venetian prison that instead of escape he was “bought” out by his friends , in the sense that he has a wide and infuluential connection web.The professor explans that many people in the person who have even more powerful acquaintance did never escape.And refering to the Venetian official log, soon after his escape the celling had to be repaired and this could be another evidence suggesting what he told is accurate.
这篇按时写完的

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作文改好了，抱歉晚了

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10.12.03 独立（综合在前面）
In contemporary era, it is universallyaccepted that parents treat their children more and more “considerate”.Yet,inthe mean time,whether children should study or play only and don’t have to dohousehold chores has sparked much debate.Some individuals assert that by doinghousing activities children could learn and benefit more, while others believeotherwise.Speaking for myself, I am side with the former perspective.


At the first glance,it seems that choresand daily housework can never be associated with children for it ,indeed,takesa lot of time from children which might be spent on other things like studying,playing,reading or something else.However, it also demonstrates that in thisway,children may gradually become bookworms without concerns or actualexperience of life.Taken me as an example,when I was at the age of thirteen,Iwas sent to a board school for my high school study.Since I never have anyexperience about household, I went although a really hard time to make do on myown.And suddenly I realized how hard it would be for my mother to handle thedouble job before.Moreover, children would fail to understand how hard theirparents are and think as if everything is what it should be.In the sense theydo not understand and realize the difficulties of even daily housing works, itis possible that children become reckless or even worse.


Housework and chores,on the other hand,willcast a subtle influence on children which with sense of responsibility ,gratitude for their parents dedication and practical skills of life, none ofwhich could be read on book or taught at school.Besides,by doingchores,children can alleviate their parents’ pressure. Regarding children, asmembers of family it is rather reasonable to share the daily tasks with their parents.


Of course,hours will be spent if they choseto do so, it might a little waste of time from our perspective, yet, we shouldalways remember that children are doing this for a good reason.And from all wehave and have not yet discussed,it is not so hard for us the draw theconclusion that hosehold and chores played a important role in children’s development.

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没有找到12月3日的独立作业，上传后PM我一下吧

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12.04
综合 tpo 9

      The lecturer raised serious counter argument towards the reading paragraph by providing drastically divergent evidences,regarding whether hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines will become the most ideal substitution of current internal-combustion engines.
      Firstly,while the author claims that compared with internal-combustion engines, the fuel-cell engines have much wider ranges of resources in the sense that hydrogen can be acquired in many renewable ways, the lecturer points out the fact that even with today’s technology, it is rather difficult for people to purify the hydrogen to a level which is suitable for automobiles, and the cooling tech-requirements are too sophisticated to be mass applied.So,it is unlikely that the fuel problem will be ever solved.
      In the next stage,contrary to the author’s statement that Hydrogen fuel-cell engines emit less pollution than internal-combustion engines, the speaker argues that this case will not happen,at least not now. Because during the production of purified hydrogen, the factory will have to use more carbon and oil, which leads to---heavier pollution.
      At last,the another argument raised in the lecture directly contradict to what is state in the reading material that the efficiency of fuel-cell engines is nearly double than that of nowadays engines, which may save people a lot of money.The lecturer explains that if people take the expanse of the engine itself into account then, it will not be so optimistic since the engines consist of component made of a rare metal known as Pt.

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12月3日独立 已改， 请查收

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1203综合

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1204
People always seek success no matter when or where they are.Recently,a saying raised by some people claims that it would be much easier for them to reach success if they were in the old world.It is not a simple complain in their perspective,since they believe that with less population,there would be less competitions in the old world.Yet,speaking for myself,I disagree with this statement.

Regarding the past,there,indeed,were less competitions than today,however they failed to count on the unstable global situation including the two World Wars and twentieth century’s financial crysis which severley struck economy in most of world and led to serious consequences.Moreover,the rather basic technology and exchange of information in the past could be another obstacle for their success.

Contemporary era,on the other hand, is obvious at a more peaceful state in general,in spite of few regional conflicts in middle-east.Therefore,people today,will able to pay more attention to their own career without distraction of the “outside environment”

The rapidly updating technology also plays a vital role in one’s success nowaday in the sense that it provides us plenty of information and even opportunities.For example,with the emerging and popularization of internet,online shopping has become quite common amount people.One could easily open a shop on the internet and then set his first step towards success.Also,had Evan Williams（the creator of "twitter") not taken advantages of modern technology,such as internet ,he would not have been one of the most distinguished person in the world.

Of course,the old world has its advantages,such as sufficient space of potential value,the less competitions.But if all the factors compled,the advantages of nowadays circumstance carry more weight than those of the past.Accordingly ,from what has and has not been  discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that today’s world can be a better environment for us to achieve success.

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已改好~~