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发表于 2016-6-16 16:00:07 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue 20
Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

开头：我用最近的高考和侄子问我如何选专业引出话题，兴趣重要
第一段，兴趣是最好的老师，讲述兴趣的专业在大学里面的优势
第二段，兴趣的专业可以为工作提升幸福感
第三段，兴趣才可以成就一个人
第四段，兴趣和热门专业事实上并不矛盾，只需要结合起来
结论，兴趣为先，用侄子选择了喜欢的专业收尾。

How do students choose their majors according to interests or popularity is an issue to be discussed and thought of. Three days’ 2016 college entrance exam ended ten days ago and students in China are busy choosing their majors. When my nephew asked me for advice, I got simple answer: firstly choose your interests, and then reality. There are four reasons.
Interests are best teachers. When you choose a favorite major, you have great passion to explore more knowledge in your field. You search for more books in libraries, go to laboratory for teachers’ help and do part-time job in companies. All what you do have the same reason: for interests. Meanwhile if you are academic at your field, you are confidence and charming. Good personality follow with that, more eagerly to take part in group job, kind-hearted to help others with study, colorful life.
The second reason is that you should do a job with happiness. A lot of people choose their job related with their majors. He can be a salesman at medicine field because he studies medicine at school. He is deeply marked with what he has learnt. So choosing a major is so important. When you choose a major with bright future like finance without enthusiasm, you may earn a lot of money but no passion. So will you be happy if you get enough money? Will you think about doing something that you really interested in after retirement? Also, hot major may not be hot anymore, however you interests can last for so long.
Nothing great is ever achieved without enthusiasm. A lot of great people’s stories told us it is sharing and contribution to society that achieve people’s final goal. The establisher of Pixar had great passion in combining animator film with computer science, then he set a new animator world. One famous film named TOY STORIES, our memories of childhood, was the beginning of 3D cartoon. Disney absorbed Pixar’s technology finally to make its films more competitive and created ZOOPOPIA in 2016. It is interests changed the whole world.
To the last point, interests and popular are not opposite. If you want to choose a perfect major, you’d better combine two things together. For example, if you are favor in drawing, also quite good at math, you can consider architecture. But architecture is not a hot major any more in your country, you can turn to choose to be structure designers in airplane field. In this case, you add your interests to your bright major.
To sum up, it is so important for us to choose a suitable major, considering with your strength, interests, as well as its popularity. And interest should be put at the first place. My nephew finally chose to be a doctor cause he liked while his parents thought finance was perfect and he would like to go aboard for further learning. I am so proud of him.

June 16, 2016