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本次直播课的主要目的是帮助大家养成刷题、列提纲、选例子的习惯,争取做到每天花15分钟刷题,锻炼自己的思维能力、梳理和拓展自己的知识结构。  如果活动反响好,我们会尝试每月开展一次刷题活动。

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Essay topic 1


A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:
1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
Which plan do you think is better?

Essay topic 2


Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topic 3


At some universities, students take part in making decisions about the issues that affect daily life of everyone on campus, such as how many hours that the libraries should be open each day or what kinds of food should be served in the cafeteria. But at some universities, experts are hired to make this decision, students almost never involved. Which approach do you prefer and why?

Essay topic 4


A lot of high school students now cheat in homework assignments, by asking other students for answers. Which of the following do you think is the most efficient way to stop?
-asking parents to help stop the students from cheating
-penalty or punishment to the students
-asking teacher to create homework assignment that cannot be easily cheated


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Template for writing an outline

本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2017-10-9 12:15 编辑

Essay topic:
(copy and paste the essay topic here)
Thesis statement: (write a sentence to summarize the main points to be further developed in the essay; optional if you want to focus on developing one middle paragraph)

Middle paragraph 1 (adopt the PIE model to plan your middle paragraph)  
Point: (state the main point in response to the essay topic)
Information (examples): (describe the example(s) you plan to use as information to support the point)  
Elaboration: (state the value principle you would refer to for elaborating the point and the information)  

Middle paragraph 2 (optional; you may add one more paragraph here)  

Middle paragraph 3 (optional; you may add one more paragraph here)  



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2016 US-applicant

发表于 2017-10-8 11:49:04 |显示全部楼层
哈哈! 王老师又来拯救我们啦!

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能不能早点啊! 10月21  太难等

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huangjinjin 发表于 2017-10-8 11:49
能不能早点啊! 10月21  太难等

以后每个月都会做一次

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发表于 2017-10-9 19:46:18 |显示全部楼层
老师不能早几天么qwq
刚好21考托福

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FALL祈福章

发表于 2017-10-9 20:52:57 |显示全部楼层
10.14考试的默默路过表示支持(万一二战呢。。。

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qyyyyy26 发表于 2017-10-9 20:52
10.14考试的默默路过表示支持(万一二战呢。。。

其实 这个直播课强调的是批判思维与分析能力 所以即使考完了也可以考虑来听一下  

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发表于 2017-10-13 21:55:17 |显示全部楼层
请问直播课在哪看呢?
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发表于 2017-10-15 08:30:25 |显示全部楼层
同求直播课链接!谢谢~~
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寄托兑换店纪念章 US-applicant

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E.W. 发表于 2017-10-19 01:13
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期待王老师的写作课,希望同时能找到GRE和TOEFL写作的共性

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发表于 2017-10-19 13:56:36 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 破吉他 于 2017-10-19 14:52 编辑

Essay topic:
Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Thesis statement:
It is advantageous for students to focus on only one subject rather than juggle numerous courses of various subjects.

Middle paragraph 1  
Point:

Balancing classes, tests, projects as well as extra-curricular activities is enough to make any college students feel overwhelmed, let alone coping with courses among different disciplines.

Information (examples):
Students majoring in computer science in Harvard University serve as a persuasive example. Not only do they have to frequently stay up whole nights to write codes, but also they have to take internships to find a well-paid and decent job, such as working in Google or Facebook, after graduation. With this crammed schedule, hardly can they allocate time to other disciplines.

Elaboration:
(不知道怎么写,上完课了再补充。)

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FALL祈福章

发表于 2017-10-19 15:05:03 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 charlienzw 于 2017-10-21 15:43 编辑

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14mod4+1=3
题目:
At some universities, students take part in making decisions about the issues that affect daily life of everyone on campus, such as how many hours that the libraries should be open each day or what kinds of food should be served in the cafeteria. But at some universities, experts are hired to make this decision, students almost never involved. Which approach do you prefer and why?
正文:(直接完整写了一篇,用了40分钟)
Talking of the problem that who should decide the issues concerning about everyday life in the campus, I think choosing the experts to make this decision will be better. Although the students are more familiar with their own lives, the experts could consider this problem in an objective position. Besides, experts have more experiences to provide what the result of one specific decision will be.

Admittedly, students really know more details of the daily life than experts. Students live in the campus every day, so they can easily find the things that can make their lives inconvenient. The decisions of the students will easily make it more comfortable to live in the campus. For instance, students are the major users of the library. Only students know the complex tasks they have which are had to be done with the library every day, thus if they decide the open time of the library, no students will be bothered.

However, experts can objectively consider this problem. Experts don’t affect by any benefits of the decision, what they must do is just for the development of the university. As a result, they won’t give a decision that just has some superficial benefits. For example, most students can just want the foods that seem delicious but ignore whether they are healthy. So If the students make the decision, they may not consider about the nutrition of the food, which might lead to some health problems. Conversely, experts will decrease the number of junk food to keep the students healthy.

Moreover, the experiences of the experts can help them see the potential aftermaths. Generally, experts have helped many universities make this kind of issue. Consequently, they have seen the results of some decisions that seem good and won’t use them. Specifically, students may think that it is better for the time of closing the dormitory at night to be later, which will make the students more convenient to have fun outside at night, yet experts can have the experience that students will have a large possibility of suffering from safe problems if the dormitory closes too late.

To sum up, I agree that experts should decide the issues of students’ everyday lives. Students know accurately how they feel, but it is more significant that experts have a more objective position and more experiences.

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