tesolchina 发表于 2016-4-28 08:06 static/image/common/back.gif
目前手头上有其他project 暂时没有新的点评活动
建议你参考我的博客里的示范模仿写作 有具体的问题可以 ...
好的，谢谢~
我不会GitHub，不好意思哈
每当看到这样的帖子，心中除了感谢在屋其他。真的，因为你们的无私奉献，这条路看起来不是那样的孤单和曲折。我想唯一能回报大家的就是全力以赴去奋斗，然后把一点点浅薄的所得再回馈给后来人，就像你们曾经做过的那样。
come on!!!
本帖最后由 hasay 于 2016-5-7 23:37 编辑
Hi Simon, here is part of my template for argument...
请问作文应该写多少字合适呢？半小时内我只能写450上下，要是准备不太充分的题目就只能写400出头？够吗
支持老师！感谢！
太谢谢老师了，请问《留美英语写作手册》出来了没？想着赶快买回来学习写作呢~
shalunrose 发表于 2016-5-9 13:42 static/image/common/back.gif
太谢谢老师了，请问《留美英语写作手册》出来了没？想着赶快买回来学习写作呢~
感谢关注
手头上有其他project 这个不是目前的重点
不过版友整理的两份PDF 可以参考一下
hasay 发表于 2016-5-6 14:53 static/image/common/back.gif
Hi Simon, here is part of my template for argument...
模板其实没什么用
内容才是王道
祝你好运
王老师的资料完全可以出书了。。。用这种无偿的形式分享给大家真的万分感谢！虽然距考试没有多久可能按老师的资料练习没有时间了，但是学习一遍您的资料还是感觉思路清晰很多！再次感谢！
T作文24,6月17考G
谢谢分享
tesolchina 发表于 2014-11-18 18:38 static/image/common/back.gif
2) To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
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王老师你好，看完你的这的这篇issue2 并且仿写完成了，感觉收获很大，不过有个困惑就是你的这篇（用白色隐去的这遍）感觉没说hold true 的这种情况吧。就想问下，碰到这种题可以只说一面么？
王老师 仔细阅读了您的ISSUE 指南
按照你的范文写了ISSUS 15
烦请多多批评改正
I strongly agree with the statement that educational institutions should encourage students to study in lucrative field for two reasons.First,students can better suit their emplyer’s demand,moreover,the universities,in return, can receive a plausible amount of donation from them so the university can put these money in places to cultivate more students.While someone may argue that occasionally the students are lacking interest in lucrative fields of study thus may not show perfect performance in related courses,actually,in my point of view,it’s not because their lack of interest,but due to lack of some acquired personality.
To begin with,nowadays college graduates now facing more severe job market and it’s not so easy for them to find a suitable jobs largely due to the economy downturn,so the university has the incentive and responsibility to prepare their students.Through specified courses,job session,communication activites with large corporation,the students can acquire some basic skills needed so they won’t feel so much panic once they entered the job market and trying to find a proper job.More than that,the students will feel motivated to engage themselves in doing necessary preparation once the university has created a promoting and job-friendly environment for them.And all these work will definite boost the fame of the univertity since the parents of every single students are happily to see their children had find a place in lucrative industries.
Another reason is that the successful alumni of specific university would donate money to the university.Consequently,the university will worry less about financial pressure,as we can always hear from newspaper and TV reporting how much a billionaire has donated to the research department of his college school.Having enough money,the university can put them to buiding libraries,hire prestigious professors and introduce advanced research facilities for scientific purpose.And these would also show edge in enrollment work,because large parts of students would pleasely choose those school which can provide adequate financial aid.
Some people may argue that students may find them in a tough spot once they found them show little interest in the lucrative fields of study.However,I agree that this situation can occur,but in a very low probability.Because in most cases,it’s a deniable excuse.Thinking wisely,no course are naturally boring and mediocre since all knowledge and assumptions are made by humans,the real defference between courses is the degree of difficulty to acquire,not the degree of vapidty.And the more diffuclult a course ,the more happiness you will gain once you worked through it.
In conclution, while it’s undeniably understandable that some students may find the lucrative hard to acquire even though nothing is absolute easy to be done,this policy is still helpful due to it can provide proper preparation for students to help them better suit in a severe job market and the univerty can worry less about the financial status .
luoyuhuits 发表于 2016-5-26 17:52 static/image/common/back.gif
王老师 仔细阅读了您的ISSUE 指南
按照你的范文写了ISSUS 15
烦请多多批评改正
建议你参加这个活动https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1966347-1-1.html
看上去基本思路挺不错 句子语法的小问题要注意