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标题: 9.9小木互改战队！（十六天计划专版） [打印本页]

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-24 11:15:59 标题: 8.24题目

issue:
36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."

41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

185"Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-24 11:21:06 标题: 8.24题目

117The following is a memo from the business manager of Valu-Mart stores.

"Over 70 percent of the respondents to a recent survey reported that they are required to take more work home with them from the workplace than they were in the past. Since Valu-Mart has not seen impressive sales in its office-supply departments in the past, we should take advantage of this work-at-home trend by increasing at all Valu-Mart stores the stock of home office machines such as printers, small copy machines, paper shredders, and fax machines. We will also increase stock of office supplies such as paper, pens, and staplers. With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores."

17The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Walnut Grove town newspaper.

"Walnut Grove's town council has advocated switching from EZ Disposal (which has had the contract for trash collection services in Walnut Grove for the past ten years) to ABC Waste, because EZ recently raised its monthly fee from $2,000 to $2,500 a month, whereas ABC's fee is still $2,000. But the town council is mistaken; we should continue using EZ. EZ collects trash twice a week, while ABC collects only once. Moreover, EZ—which, like ABC, currently has a fleet of 20 trucks—has ordered additional trucks. Finally, EZ provides exceptional service: 80 percent of respondents to last year's town survey agreed that they were 'satisfied' with EZ's performance."

作者: childrenq 时间: 2005-8-24 12:15:46 标题: 我第一个~哈哈~

issue41, 修改过
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=325569

argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=325571

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-24 15:27:50

修改过的 argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1778329

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-24 15:40:41

今天的作业：
argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=325671

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-25 12:51:35

8月24号的作业

issue36
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326174

作者: davidjacky 时间: 2005-8-25 12:54:47

参考下其它战队的情况，固定人员列表互改。

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-25 12:54:56 标题: ：（

对不起各位了，这两天遇到了麻烦的事和人，不过我一定会努力把这两天补回来的，也希望大家能有好的心态，不被不相关的事情所打扰

一会把今天的题目贴出来

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-25 13:58:54 标题: 8.25题目

issue
7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

154"Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."

144"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-25 14:04:47 标题: 8.25 argument

163The following is taken from the editorial section of the local newspaper in Rockingham.

"In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockingham's century-old town hall should be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter and cool it in summer. The new, larger building would be more energy efficient, costing less per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall. Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out some of the space in the new building, thereby generating income for the town of Rockingham."

131The following appeared in an environmental newsletter published in Tria Island.

"The marine sanctuary on Tria Island was established to protect certain marine mammals. Its regulations ban dumping and offshore oil drilling within 20 miles of Tria, but fishing is not banned. Currently many fish populations in Tria's waters are declining, a situation blamed on pollution. In contrast, the marine sanctuary on Omni Island has regulations that ban dumping, offshore oil drilling, and fishing within 10 miles of Omni and Omni reports no significant decline in its fish populations. Clearly, the decline in fish populations in Tria's waters is the result of overfishing, not pollution. Therefore, the best way to restore Tria's fish populations and to protect all of Tria's marine wildlife is to abandon our regulations and adopt those of Omni."

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-25 15:42:15

请问请问,我也参加可以吗?我9.14的

作者: 朽木白哉 时间: 2005-8-25 16:31:39

挖啊！！
每天三I二A么？！！

天啊！！

作者: davidjacky 时间: 2005-8-25 18:11:58

Originally posted by 木紫000 at 2005-8-25 14:09
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=324973

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... 3Dtype%26typei ...

两个链接错误更改下:)

作者: muzi1003 时间: 2005-8-25 18:43:44 标题: issue 154

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作者: muzi1003 时间: 2005-8-25 18:45:58 标题: issue 144

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作者: muzi1003 时间: 2005-8-25 18:47:52 标题: argument 163

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作者: muzi1003 时间: 2005-8-25 18:50:13 标题: 回复 #21 muzi1003 的帖子

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作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-25 19:08:32 标题: 回复 #18 davidjacky 的帖子

ok,这就改：）

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-25 20:27:46

今天的argument 作业：
argument131
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

argument163
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

作者: childrenq 时间: 2005-8-25 20:34:15 标题: 今天作业~~~

issue7
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

argument131
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-25 20:41:40 标题: argument17迟到的作业

argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326454

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-25 20:47:02 标题: argument117&issue185

昨天断网发不了啊,不好意思了,麻烦组长给加上,我一定在寝室努力改文!
argument117https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326456
issue185https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326460

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-25 20:53:02 标题: issue144

issue144https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326468

作者: linuaries 时间: 2005-8-25 20:53:22

算我一个，9月7号，上海，明天开始改＋写，征服GRE.........

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-25 23:01:03 标题: To：#26ciulei 简单修改了一下

argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1783969

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 01:05:06 标题: 回复 #29 linuaries 的帖子

欢迎！

大家一起加油

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 01:12:32 标题: 回复 #15 朽木白哉的帖子

是给大家提供多一点选择，每天写一篇issue，一篇argument

战队里的朋友们，肯定选择的题目不一样，这样你可以改你没有写的题目

作者: aaaa2209 时间: 2005-8-26 02:05:55

issue 36
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326608

作者: tjhhdldut2005 时间: 2005-8-26 02:42:14

申请加入。
9.9大连
我会努力的！

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 10:48:38 标题: 回复 #32 aaaa2209 的帖子

好早哦，加油！

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 10:49:26 标题: 回复 #33 tjhhdldut2005 的帖子

欢迎，战胜9.9！

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 10:55:22 标题: 8.26 issue

38"In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."

48"The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."

[ Last edited by 木紫000 on 2005-8-28 at 00:10 ]

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 10:57:55 标题: 8.26 argument

38The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.

"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."

140The following appeared in a report of the Committee on Faculty Promotions and Salaries at Elm City University.

"During her seventeen years as a professor of botany, Professor Thomas has proved herself to be well worth her annual salary of $50,000. Her classes are among the largest at the university, demonstrating her popularity among students. Moreover, the money she has brought to the university in research grants has exceeded her salary in each of the last two years. Therefore, in consideration of Professor Thomas' demonstrated teaching and research abilities, we recommend that she receive a $10,000 raise and a promotion to Department Chairperson; without such a raise and promotion, we fear that Professor Thomas will leave Elm City University for another college."

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 11:13:03 标题: 回复 #32 aaaa2209 的帖子

已列入修改集锦

作者: 我的世界我做主 时间: 2005-8-26 11:27:35

楼主能加偶一个么
偶9.9

作者: 我的世界我做主 时间: 2005-8-26 11:38:01

偶9.9广州
希望能与大家共同努力
可惜刚考了8T
今天才开始第一篇
SIGH....

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-26 12:38:45

我申请加入哈.我914的..有固定组员和互改吗?这是我26号作业.大家一起加油.嘿咻嘿咻:p:p:p
ARGUE https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326738
ISSUE https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ Last edited by 咯噔 on 2005-8-26 at 13:44 ]

作者: childrenq 时间: 2005-8-26 13:14:58

今天的作业还没布置哦~

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-26 13:24:15

我改了这篇
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1785789

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-26 13:41:28

改了的ARGUE117
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1785952

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-26 15:48:57

今天作业:
issue121
issue131
issue147
都是本月高频
我替组长出issue吧，兄弟们都等不及了，建议以后第二天要写得iissue前一天晚上给出

作者: muzi1003 时间: 2005-8-26 15:57:25 标题: 回复 #45 cuilei_1985 的帖子

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作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 23:17:14 标题: 回复 #39 我的世界我做主的帖子

欢迎，加油哦

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 23:18:17 标题: 回复 #42 childrenq 的帖子

早上就贴出来了阿

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 23:21:57 标题: 回复 #45 cuilei_1985 的帖子

太好了，以后你来出吧，我属实时间不多，嘿嘿，3Q

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-26 23:24:43 标题: 回复 #41 咯噔的帖子

作文已收录

作者: 我的世界我做主 时间: 2005-8-26 23:31:36

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1787734
偶的作业

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 00:46:47 标题: 迟到很久的了：（

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1788023

我的issue51

我要一点一点的赶上来，请帮助偶，万分感谢

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 00:47:16 标题: 回复 #53 我的世界我做主的帖子

已收录

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 01:04:11

Originally posted by muzi1003 at 2005-8-24 15:32
我决定考明年的6G
也去新加坡
到时候去找你玩哦:$

这里是作文互改重地，请珍惜这里每个人的学习机会，此类帖子请勿发，多谢合作！

作者: tjhhdldut2005 时间: 2005-8-27 01:26:23

刚改过#53 我的世界我做主的帖子
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1787734

[ Last edited by tjhhdldut2005 on 2005-8-27 at 01:39 ]

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 11:14:53 标题: 8.27 issue

10"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated."

11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

87"In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 11:17:22 标题: 8.27 argument

42 The following appeared in a proposal from the economic minister of the country of Paraterra.

"In order to strengthen its lagging economy, last year the government of the nearby country of Bellegea began an advertising campaign to promote ecologically sound tourism (ecotourism). This year the number of foreign visitors arriving at Bellegea's main airport doubled, and per capita income in Bellegea increased by ten percent. To provide more income for the population of Paraterra and also preserve the natural environment of our tiny country, we too should begin to promote ecotourism. To ensure that our advertising campaign is successful, we should hire the current director of Bellegea's National Tourism Office as a consultant for the campaign."

143The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a national newspaper.

"Your recent article on corporate downsizing* in the United States is misleading. The article gives the mistaken impression that many competent workers who lost jobs as a result of downsizing face serious economic hardship, often for years, before finding other suitable employment. But this impression is contradicted by a recent report on the United States economy, which found that since 1992 far more jobs have been created than have been eliminated. The report also demonstrates that many of those who lost their jobs have found new employment. Two-thirds of the newly created jobs have been in industries that tend to pay above-average wages, and the vast majority of these jobs are full-time."

*Downsizing is the process in which corporations deliberately reduce the number of their employees.

作者: muzi1003 时间: 2005-8-27 11:19:26 标题: 回复 #60 木紫000 的帖子

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作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-27 11:49:16

25号作业,ARGUE140.https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327252
ISSUE 48 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327254
:):)写完后看了哈其他的觉得自己挑了最简单的两道.呵呵谢谢大家!

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-27 12:30:40

改了一篇ISSUE. https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1789357

改了一篇ARGUE https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1789456

[ Last edited by 咯噔 on 2005-8-27 at 13:00 ]

作者: childrenq 时间: 2005-8-27 12:39:30 标题: 这几天写的

issue43
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

issue48
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

argument51
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

argument117
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

argument147
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

argument174
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

如果我没回拍,麻烦大家等一等,我是晚上改作文的

谢谢

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 12:43:23

Originally posted by muzi1003 at 2005-8-27 11:36
哎？
问个私人问题啊？

你和张建是不是和好了啊？
这是他说的哦，可不是我说的
呵呵，又能吃到他送的饭了吧，幸福死了~~~

再次提醒，这里非私人社区，请珍惜这里每个人的时间，不要让大家看到这些无聊的东西
，多谢合作，不要出现第三次

ps:您若是考6G，请自动离开这里，找个合适的团队，好好努力一下。

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 12:50:38

Originally posted by 咯噔 at 2005-8-27 11:49
25号作业,ARGUE140.https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327252
ISSUE 48 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327254
:):)写完后看了哈其他的觉得自己挑了最简单的两道 ...

已收录:)

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 12:50:58

Originally posted by childrenq at 2005-8-27 12:39
issue43
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

issue48
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=
...

已收录:)

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-27 13:02:12

木紫, 那个需改文件里好多都已经改过了.要不要整理一下啊.看起来那么多压力好大哦.呵呵;P;P

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-27 13:04:26

问大家一下,大家这几天除了写作有没有干其他的了啊?比如猛看题库?猛背提纲?我这几天在准备阅读了,也背论据.但不想看题库了.因为觉得都记不到反而弄的多晕的.大家大家呢?:eek::eek::eek::eek:

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 13:49:33

Originally posted by 咯噔 at 2005-8-27 13:04
问大家一下,大家这几天除了写作有没有干其他的了啊?比如猛看题库?猛背提纲?我这几天在准备阅读了,也背论据.但不想看题库了.因为觉得都记不到反而弄的多晕的.大家大家呢?:eek::eek::eek::eek:

我也在想这个问题，正在分类狂看范文，着急啊:L

ps:今晚我会整理收录的文章，保证完成任务:)

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-27 14:46:58 标题: 8月26号的作业

Issue38
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327316
argument38
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327318
argument140
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327319

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-27 14:49:07 标题: 求教本组的战友们！！

现在issue写了6篇了，还是至少2个钟头，我该怎么办呀！！

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-27 15:32:57 标题: issue87

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/forumdis ... type&typeid=100

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-27 15:34:20 标题: issue87

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D100刚才链接错误，从发一次

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-27 15:36:39

to amanda2005 : 用那个限时网页强迫自己!

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-27 16:54:45 标题: issue157

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327385

作者: 我的世界我做主 时间: 2005-8-27 20:17:30

交今天的作业
ISSUE 208
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

作者: 我的世界我做主 时间: 2005-8-27 20:39:41

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1791031
amanda 的这篇偶改过了

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 22:14:37 标题: 回复 #82 zhuzhu2005 的帖子

muzi1003和zhuzhu2005都是一个人吧，你这样太无聊了吧。用不着个人崇拜吧！

我给cuilei改了一篇，还有在这里没有什么组长组员的！

你这样影响的是我们的战队，若继续这么无聊的话，我就只好采取措施了，后果自负！！

作者: childrenq 时间: 2005-8-27 22:23:52

改了这些:

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1790875

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326608

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326468

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

ps:强烈支持组长, 请那位同学自重, 不要再在这里说无关的事

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-27 22:27:52

8月27号的题目有没有放上来呀? 我翻了好几页都没有看到呀，还是自己写自己的。

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 22:31:23

Originally posted by amanda2005 at 2005-8-27 22:27
8月27号的题目有没有放上来呀? 我翻了好几页都没有看到呀，还是自己写自己的。

8.27 issue

10"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated."

11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

87"In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-27 22:32:06

Originally posted by amanda2005 at 2005-8-27 22:27
8月27号的题目有没有放上来呀? 我翻了好几页都没有看到呀，还是自己写自己的。

8.27 argument

42 The following appeared in a proposal from the economic minister of the country of Paraterra.

"In order to strengthen its lagging economy, last year the government of the nearby country of Bellegea began an advertising campaign to promote ecologically sound tourism (ecotourism). This year the number of foreign visitors arriving at Bellegea's main airport doubled, and per capita income in Bellegea increased by ten percent. To provide more income for the population of Paraterra and also preserve the natural environment of our tiny country, we too should begin to promote ecotourism. To ensure that our advertising campaign is successful, we should hire the current director of Bellegea's National Tourism Office as a consultant for the campaign."

143The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a national newspaper.

"Your recent article on corporate downsizing* in the United States is misleading. The article gives the mistaken impression that many competent workers who lost jobs as a result of downsizing face serious economic hardship, often for years, before finding other suitable employment. But this impression is contradicted by a recent report on the United States economy, which found that since 1992 far more jobs have been created than have been eliminated. The report also demonstrates that many of those who lost their jobs have found new employment. Two-thirds of the newly created jobs have been in industries that tend to pay above-average wages, and the vast majority of these jobs are full-time."

*Downsizing is the process in which corporations deliberately reduce the number of their employees

作者: linuaries 时间: 2005-8-27 23:09:46

强烈要求，每日的题目，木木在第一页编辑出题，只要标明题号和新老题库就可以了。大家应该都有题库的吧

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-28 00:04:31

Originally posted by linuaries at 2005-8-27 23:09
强烈要求，每日的题目，木木在第一页编辑出题，只要标明题号和新老题库就可以了。大家应该都有题库的吧

ok,今晚如有时间就按您说的做:)
这样也方便大家查询
:handshake

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-28 03:01:14

Originally posted by amanda2005 at 2005-8-27 14:49
现在issue写了6篇了，还是至少2个钟头，我该怎么办呀！！

是因为打字速度　还是因为思考的时间多了点？

作者: childrenq 时间: 2005-8-28 08:17:20

那如果是思考时间多，有什么建议呢？

Originally posted by 木紫000 at 2005-8-28 03:01

是因为打字速度　还是因为思考的时间多了点？

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-28 12:06:59

打字方面的问题应该小点，现在argument 限时还可以，就是issue，应该是思考的时间占太多！

PS:木紫，建议你跟斑竹反映一下我们这里有位行为反常的家伙。

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-28 13:35:05 标题: argument4

偶也积极一下，谢谢大家先，请求拍

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327836

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-28 13:44:54

改了一篇：https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-28 13:52:37 标题: issue36

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327846

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-28 14:26:47 标题: 回复 #92 amanda2005 的帖子

斑竹们正在处理这件事情呢，感谢他们的公正，热心

ps: 大家，出现这种事情，真是对不起各位了，不过我们都是身经百战的勇士，考试第一，我们一定会成功的对不对？我们都要加油哦！！

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-28 17:54:59

中午停电了.现在才发昨天的作业:p:p
ISSUE11 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327951
ARGUE 42 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327953

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-28 18:08:45 标题: 回复 #85 amanda2005 的帖子

其实我觉得你不用急拉．首先呢，才六篇可能你对自己的思路还不是很熟悉，写时会不停卡壳．根据我个人经验，写时的顺畅很重要哦．不怕大家笑话，我现在把自己的论据归成几点，那到题就从这几点想，现在正在实验中．再呢会不会你字数太多？４００多好象就够了．自己看一下应该没问题的！＾－＾呵呵，会不会太罗嗦？

[ Last edited by 咯噔 on 2005-8-28 at 18:12 ]

作者: amanda2005 时间: 2005-8-28 18:51:46 标题: 回复 #99 咯噔的帖子

谢谢指点，我练习得还不够，会努力写下去的。
我想你说得对，对每一段文字要有个把握，不用写太多，总共450字就足够了，只要把意思说清楚

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-28 18:59:15 标题: issue50

贴了一篇，虽不是今天作业，但也满高频，而且觉得是教育类不太好写的，如果大家有空的话也帮我改改，leilei不胜感激！https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101

作者: linuaries 时间: 2005-8-28 19:26:48 标题: 终于从头到尾坚持写完一篇了，木队，把我加到站队名单里好么？

argument4
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=327987

狠狠地拍，不要留情，下次偶一定不留情面地拍还。

PS:木队，把我加到站队名单里好么？

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-28 20:04:15 标题: 今天作业issue54

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=328014

作者: 木紫000 时间: 2005-8-28 21:45:22 标题: 回复 #102 linuaries 的帖子

欢迎您，一会整理的时候，就加进来

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-29 12:22:11

改了两篇.一篇是CHILDREN的,还有一篇是cuilei_1985 的.
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1796457
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1796539
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... ;page=1#pid1796819(看大家那么努力又改了一篇哈,LUNARIES的)

昨天作业
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=328290
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=328293

[ Last edited by 咯噔 on 2005-8-29 at 13:58 ]

作者: 咯噔 时间: 2005-8-29 12:50:21

另外问大家一下，我那篇写ＣＲＩＴＩＣ的提纲是：
１．艺术家创造作品，有价值
２．但批评家鼓励了批判思维，这对社会发展意义重大
３．批评家鼓励了从不同角度看问题
４．所以，批评家也创造了永恒价值．这样算不算偏题？

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-29 13:32:11

改了一篇咯噔的
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1796741

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-29 13:33:16

回复咯噔：我觉得这样写可以的不偏题，关键看论述

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-29 14:13:19 标题: argument2

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=328353

作者: linuaries 时间: 2005-8-29 14:41:41 标题: Argument2

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=328368

作者: cuilei_1985 时间: 2005-8-29 21:05:10

8-28homework argument4
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=328542

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