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TOPIC: ISSUE48 - "The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
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History is the combination of the event, people and surroundings and so on, in which people are the most important elements. But the question rises: who make the predominant influence on the significant events and trends in this element, the famous few or the unknown people? Obviously, above is the author's answer. From my point of view, I agree with him conservatively.

In my opinion, each of them makes the contribution to the development of the history. The function of famous few and the group of less known people to the history could be compared correspondently to the steering wheel and other parts which consist of a perfect car.

Firstly, the influence of less known people must not be neglected from deciding which of them are the most important. Famous few, such as ideologist, politician and even the leader in a country, might not make specific actions without the support of the less known people. It is the question whether a car could work properly if it left a steering wheel only but lucks of other functional parts? And it is ironically that during the World War II the victory of the Britain is the result of the shooting and throwing grenades by the Prime Minister Churchill and his cabinet themselves without their unknown but brave soldiers’ bloody fight against Axis.

However, without the steering wheel, a car mustn't perform exactly, either and the steering wheel controls the driving direction of the car. The famous few are such a group of people that they have the attribute of passionate, precarious and so on. And they are the precursors distinguished from all of other people who own the characters of leadership; the famous few have the ability to unite strewing sand; the famous few make his follows struggling for their same interests. All of the characters of the famous few in this paragraph mentioned above make sure the more important role of the famous few on gearing the trends of the development of history. The breakout of the World War II is the obvious examples to support this kind of view.

Alright, someone might argue that where the famous few come from. They might also shout angrily: do you believe that they come from the less known people and they usually integrate various advanced ideas or characters into his whole brain? Yes, it can not be denied that the famous few are cultivated by less known people and before they became famous they are less known people, too. In expanding definition, the famous few belong to the less known people' column in a long run. But here, the less known people and the famous few are certainly different and the relations between them quite like the fish and the water. There fish lives in water. Here, it is clear that fish and water are different. So do the less known people and famous few.

In sum, the famous few and less known people together make the important event trend of history happens, but the famous few steer them.
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History is the combination of the events, people and surroundings and so on, in which people are the most important elements. But the question rises: who make the predominant influence on the significant events and trends in this element (these elements), the famous few or the unknown people? Obviously, above is the author's answer. From my point of view, I agree with him conservatively.

In my opinion, each of them makes the contribution to the development of the history. The function of famous few and the group of less known people to the history could be compared correspondently to the steering wheel and other parts which consist of a perfect car.

Firstly, the influence of less known people must not be neglected from deciding which of them are the most important. Famous few, such as ideologist, politician and even the leader in a country, might not make specific actions without the support of the less known people. It is the question whether a car could work properly if it left a steering wheel only but lucks (lack) of other functional parts? And it is ironically that during the World War II the victory of the Britain is the result of the shooting and throwing grenades by the Prime Minister Churchill and his cabinet themselves without their unknown but brave soldiers’ bloody fight against Axis.

However, without the steering wheel, a car mustn't (can’t) perform exactly, either and (?看不懂额) the steering wheel controls the driving direction of the car. The famous few are such a group of people that they have the attribute of passionate, precarious and so on. And they are the precursors distinguished from all of other people who own the characters of leadership; the famous few have the ability to unite strewing sand; the famous few make his follows struggling for their same interests. All of the characters of the famous few in this paragraph mentioned above make sure the more important role of the famous few on gearing the trends of the development of history. The breakout of the World War II is the obvious example to support this kind of view.

Alright, someone might argue that where the famous few come from. They might also shout angrily: do you believe that they come from the less known people and they usually integrate various advanced ideas or characters into his whole brain? Yes, it can not be denied that the famous few are cultivated by less known people and before they became famous they are less known people, too. In expanding definition, the famous few belong to the less known people' column in a long run. But here, the less known people and the famous few are certainly different and the relations between them quite like the fish and the water. There fish lives in water. Here, it is clear that fish and water are different. So do the less known people and famous few.

In sum, the famous few and less known people together make the important event trend of history happens, but the famous few steer them.
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