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5.29 作文特训小组作业：
题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Does advice given by older people more valuable than from people your age?

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose advice from older people rather than from my peer friends. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for older people is that they have more experience and knowledge than me. They often have experienced the problem that I am facing to. Before I finish my undergraduate courses from university, I have two choices in front me: going to work or continuing my graduate study. People that are same age as me may have the same bother. So I asked my cousin for advice who is three year older than me. He analyzed both the advantages and disadvantages of the two choices for me, and at last he said to me "Take it easy, just follow your heart". Although he didn't give me the final decision, but after his analysis I suddenly cleared what I really want in my deep heart at that time. Thanks for his guiding, I made the proper choice, and now I am pursuiting my Master's degree.

There is another factor that deserves some words here. People that are older than us, such as our parents and teachers, can give us devices more advisable and strategically. Grown under their education, they are familiar with the current circumstance around us, knowing what is beneficial to us, so they can give us the valuable advice that we will prove to be right in the future.

Although the peer friends that we study and play together can also give us some advices, comparing to the older people, their thought are not mature, sometimes their devices may even direct us conversely. For example, two students are competing for one thing, such as a scholarship. On the way to the final end, one student may tell the other a wrong theory or method related to the course they are taking selfishly, which will lead to his success in the competition.

In a word, comparing to the friends in my age, older people can give me more advisable devices. They are more experienced and involved in our personal behalf, so the advices they given are more suitable for us.

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