【Daily Writing作文特训小组】by lic158 作业贴

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If I must make a choice, I prefer the job that pays few salaries but allow me staying with my family and friends. Because, for me, my family and friends are more valuable and important than money, not mention to more advantages of working near my family and friends.
First, I want to say that the time with family and friends is much more precious than the time used to make money. I always remember the good time I have had with my family and friends. The currency of money is a cycle. We use money to buy some things and gain some services, and at the same time we earn money via working. There is no end to make money, but the days are gone forever. Some people may argue that they can work harder and make more money when they are young, even though they are required to leave their family and friends, therefore they can live a better life and have more time with their family and friends in the future. But for me, happiness is simple. Just staying with them I have already felt happy and satisfied, no matter how much I can earn.
On the other hand, staying with my family and friends is good for my job. Because I will always keep myself in a good mood with them every morning, so I will have a good spirit to do my work and a high efficiency, too. Besides, I will not feel lonely and they could also help me face and overcome some challenges. When I have a failure, for example, they can give me a comfort and support, and even help me analyze the reasons of the failure. In fact, though they can do nothing in many times, I also have enough courage to meet any challenge just since they stand behind me.
In a word, I would prefer to stay with my family and friends even though I was paid few salaries.

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没事了 明天就考试啦  你也加油

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etako0 发表于 2012-7-7 12:33
坐等作业

      非常抱歉，最近一段时间都比较忙，一个星期没上论坛了，可能要8月份才能回归，我会抽时间补上你的作业修改的，加油~

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坐等作业

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0704作文
It is more important to choose friends that have fun with than to choose friends that will help you when you need them
写的好纠结~也不知道题意有没有把握对，汗~~

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tangrr58 发表于 2012-7-5 00:02
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谢谢，指出的问题很有意义，所以去百度了一下，一起学习啊，哈哈~

if引导的条件状语从句的分类及虚拟条件句的判断

1.可以把条件句分为两类:
1).真实条件句(Sentences of Real Condition):凡是假设的情况发生性可能很大.就是真实条件句.例如:
⑴.If I have time . I will help you with this work.如果我有时间会帮助你做此工作的.
⑵.As long as I say anything wrong. you must point it out.只要我说了什么错话.你一定要指出来.
⑶.If time permits. we’ll go fishing together.(如果有时间的话.我们就一起去钓鱼.)
2).虚拟条件句(Sentences of Unreal Condition):当假设是不大可能实现时.就是虚拟条件句.例如:
⑴.If I were you . I would have attended the meeting. 如果我是你的话.就去参加会议了.
⑵.If he had come here yesterday. he would have seen his old friend.假如他昨天来这儿的话.就会看见他的老朋友.
⑴.If it had rained yesterday. we would have stayed at home.(如果昨天下雨的话.我们就会留在家里.)
2..if条件状语从句中虚拟语气的判断
判断是真实条件句还是非真实条件句.只有在非真实条件句中才使用虚拟语气.通过句子意思.看假设的条件是否能够实现.能够实现是真实条件句.不能使用虚拟语气,假设的条件不能实现则是非真实条件句.要用虚拟语气.
判断这个假设是与哪个事实相反.通常有三种情况:①与过去事实相反.②与现在事实相反.③与将来事实可能相反.
3.[后退一步法"
后退一步法是指在准确地判断了该句与哪一事实相反后.按虚拟语气的后退一步法处理从句谓语动词的时态.即:在非真实条件状语从句中.谓语动词按正常情况[后退一步".也就是:
①与过去事实相反.在从句中用过去完成时形式表示.
②与现在事实相反.在从句中用过去一般时形式表示.
③与将来事实可能相反.在从句中用过去将来时形式表示.
主句中则用情态动词would. should. could 等加一个与从句一致的动词形式.例:
⑴.If I had come her yesterday. I would have seen him.
⑵.If I were a teacher. I would be strict with my students.
⑶.If it should snow tomorrow. they couldn’t go out.
4.注意事项
①if条件句中如有were. should. had.可以省去if.并使用倒装语序.
②在现代英语中if条件状与从句中的谓语动词如果是be其过去形式一般用were.

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lic158 发表于 2012-7-4 22:45
0703作业： which is more important: hiring more teachers or having more facilities. Use specific rea ...

不好意思 晚了 请楼主过目

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0703作业： which is more important: hiring more teachers or having more facilities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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lic158 发表于 2012-7-3 22:35
0702作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The most important problem that af ...

楼主，文章已改好，请过目，错误之处，烦请告知，表示歉意！

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0702作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The most important problem that affects the society today will be solved during my lifetime.

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抱歉，晚了些，请过目。

谢谢祝福，加油~

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shendaisy0702 发表于 2012-7-2 23:03
……谈不上大作。= =我们一起加油才是真的!!

嗯，加油~

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lic158 发表于 2012-7-2 01:38
非常感谢，Daisy同学的建议很有启发性，这么写这种文章确实很耗时，你的大作我一定尽快拜读~加油~

……谈不上大作。= =我们一起加油才是真的!!