我心飞翔6.13 AW作业 issue 30 argument 173

compeUID：3404227

本帖来自"我心飞翔7月组AW作业小组"，欢迎关注！你还可以查看更多小组、创建小组

issue 30

Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

argument 173

The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.

The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months. During the summer, then, the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum number of moped rentals allowed at each of the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day. This will significantly reduce the number of summertime accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians. The neighboring island of Torseau actually saw a 50 percent reduction in moped accidents last year when Torseau's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals. To help reduce moped accidents, therefore, we should also enforce these limitations during the summer months.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

希望大家把issue 时间控制进1小时，argument 40分钟。

argument是篇低频，大家可以试试带读题，构思，40分钟能写成什么样。稍微练一下考试遇到argument低频也能相对从容

sddl 2013.6.14 22:00
rddl 2013.6.15 22:00

---

分组互改
yeungmarc o改zsxlylei 改 HOMIE 改yeungmarco
泠泠曲罢 kekele007
v_apor  Batigoal0611
天薇凉  ynayum
rakusin kashellou
当初的梦想  shimeng

---

  compe  蓝雪舞 violetblood Vannyzhu 请假。
关于我自己。。我最近没什么时间写AW，这几篇AW我也都写过。。就水一下了。

下一次作业开始由 版主foamfly 为大家布置。

zsxlyleiUID：3410008

HOMIE 发表于 2013-6-14 18:18
交上来啦

抱歉~~ 考试周有些忙今天才改完~~~ HOMIE同学收文了~

当初的梦想UID：3430779

shimeng0316 发表于 2013-6-14 21:36
一休~阿狗写不好了~

改好了

shimeng0316UID：3127261

当初的梦想 发表于 2013-6-14 21:00
写完了

学习！

Batigoal0611UID：3300324

v_apor 发表于 2013-6-15 20:12
~~改好啦，有改错的地方还请指出来哦，让我知道自己哪里错了~

谢谢，改得很仔细！arg是我最早写的，大概两个月之前了，所以套用了模版。考试时不能用这个模版，这个模版已经被ETS收了，用它直接2分。

v_aporUID：3392877

Batigoal0611 发表于 2013-6-14 10:38
写的不好。
求狠批

~~改好啦，有改错的地方还请指出来哦，让我知道自己哪里错了~

Batigoal0611UID：3300324

v_apor 发表于 2013-6-14 13:21
~狠~
~拍~

改完了！加油！

泠泠曲罢UID：3252498

这两天出门了没带电脑。。才看到
本次请假  keke  要是分组不变得话我先帮你改了吧~

ynayumiUID：3382325

虽然打卡~不过周末断网路TOT,请假到6.17

kekele007UID：3363572

交文，argu迷茫了
         

shimeng0316UID：3127261

一休~阿狗写不好了~

VannyzhuUID：3012410

啊请假请迟了~
我要脱离组织几天，准备周一的答辩还是各种毕业事宜。

当初的梦想UID：3430779

写完了

yeungmarcoUID：3366325

  不會寫, 沒時間了...尼瑪




查收:

rakusinUID：3418242

issue请假