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31"Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial."
TS: I confess that quit a large number of advances in science are due to research of controversial results, nevertheless, subjects with obvious dangers to squander resource or break social ethos should be constrained.
ISSUE1: Advances in science are sometimes unpredictable and controversial.
Evidence: Alchemy
ISSUE2: The obvious squander on research should be constrained.
Evidence: Suviet Union's research against USA's Star Wars Project.
ISSUE3: Research which may break the social ethos should be constrained.
Evidence: Clone tech.
43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
TS: It is true an effective leader should maintain high ethical and moral standards, nevetheless, other characters such as adamancy and caculation are also necessary.
ISSUE1: A leader without ethical and moral standards may bring public to the abyss erring from society, so as to destroy what he leads in the end.
Evidence: Adolf Hitler
ISSUE2: Adamancy is as important as ethical and moral standards since it's what make a leader to hang on his position.
Evidence:
ISSUE3: Caculation makes the leader truely effective.
Evidence: Franklin D. Roosevelt
56"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
TS: The statements is too extreme since it will certainly serves many governments' aims to focus on solving the immediate problems of today, however, anticipated problems can't be neglected since they also decide our world's destiny.
ISSUE1: Hunger, natural calamity, and so forth are starving for governments' attention because they will impact the nation.
Evidence: Ancient China, Yuan Dynasty.
ISSUE2: Anticipated problems will come to be faced in time. Dealing with it before it deteriorates pays less.
Evidence: Environmental problems.
ISSUE3: Some problems don't seem immediate but when they break out, they are impossible to control.
Evidence: Ancient Rome.
59"Too much emphasis is placed on role models. Instead of copying others, people should learn to think and act independently and thus make the choices that are best for them."
TS: It is important of think and act independently and thus make the choice since our world develops on the power of creation, however, to most people, role models can direct them to creative in right way and such emphasis in our society is not too much.
ISSUE1: Creation and independent choice empower the development of our world.
Evidence: Thomas Edison
ISSUE2: Role models may make our way to success more direct and copying can be the best choice in many issues, espacially for children.
Evidence: Educational role models.
ISSUE3: No matter copying or thinking and acting independently, the aim is to make the best choice.
Evidence: Frank Loyd Wright
70"In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
TS: It will surve many entreprises' interests for them to change some of those in power after fives years, as to revitalize its managing personel and thoughts. Nevertheless, such changes should be careful since it could break the enterprises' stablilization and some positions ask for a long experience working in the enterprise, in which people need to stay longer.
ISSUE1: Enterprise needs new blood or it may suffer from lack of creation, five years is a long time for those devote their power to the positions.
Evidence: Suviet Union, Khrushchev
ISSUE2: Revitalization should be careful and stable, espacially when large numbers of leaders are changing.
Evidence: Ancient China, revolutions
ISSUE3: Some people have become the embles of enterprises and they are undispensbale for the enterprises in only 5 years.
Evidence: Billgates, Microsoft
ISSUE4: A company may not develop maturely in 5 years, making their leaders unchangable in such a short perioud.
Evidence: John D.Rockefeller
74"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
TS: Images certainly come as an important method to communicate an idea, however, language is also undispensable. The statement is too extreme to stress images and neglect language.
ISSUE1: Images are more and more used in public propagandizing because of their direct and impressible information.
Evidence: Posters
ISSUE2: Language can provide more detailed information and preciser express.
Evidence: Newspapers
DEVELOPMENT: Both the image and language are required in communicating, especially when they interact together, the information could be communicated more strikingly.
Evidence: TV, Movies
88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
TS: I agree with the assertion that technologies not only influence social customs and ethics, in some ways, it ultimately determine social customs and ethics, since they establish the material basis of human society.
ISSUE1: Technology can influence the social customs when it creat new way to enhance social productivity.
Evidence: Industrial Revolution
ISSUE2: With the enhanced social productivity, the social customs and ethics can be changed basically.
Evidence: Medical technology which change the way we live.
DEVOLOPMENT: Some controversial techonologies may do harm or even destory the social customs and ethics, which must be constrained by social ethics.
Evidence: Clone, Nuclear weapon
121"At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species."
TS: Although many species extincted because of natural causes, with the human society's unpredictable development, many species which can still be adapted to natural environment are dying out. Saving those endangered species are the human's responsibility.
ISSUE1: Because of human's unrestrited invading the natural, environment changes too faster than it was for the wild species to evolve and adapt.
Evidence: Every several years a specy extinted in 19th century, compared with five species every day today.
Dodo, ferret, Indian tiger, African elefants
ISSUE2: Each specy contain a unique gene information and plays an import role in the ecological environment. Once they distinct, there is no substitute, and with the decreasing amount of species, ecological balance will be threatened.
Evidence: Loulan Ancient city, ancient Babylon
DEVELOPMENT: It will be costing for human to compensate the decimated ecological environment, or even impossible.
136"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
TS: I agree with the statement that the circumstance that we don't have choice is very rare, since the human mind can be changed and never extreme. Nevertheless, considering about the situations and conditions while making choice, there is always a best choice, in other words, this made our circumstance absent of choice, in a sense.
ISSUE1: No matter what is the situation, choices always exist, at least two--chose or not to chose.
Evidence: To be or not to be, it's always a question.
ISSUE2: The history and reality is unique, with no assumption existed, which made our world absent of choice.
Evidence: World War II
DEVELOPMENT: Choice is subjective, the possibility of choice is also subjective. What we care is not to make a choice, but to make the best choice.
157"There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires."
TS: I confess that observer's expectations or desires may guide the observation in many ways, however, the statement is too extreme to say there is no such thing as purely objective observation, since the science developed always on base of objective and exactive observations.
ISSUE1: The observations can be guided subjectively, especially when it comes to social investigation.
Evidence: Different people will have different conclusion and data based on the same survey.
ISSUE2: Sientific research needs objective observation.
Evidence: Astronomy, Physical research
ISSUE3: Expectations and desires can do harm to our development of science in many ways.
Evidence: Suviet Union
159"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
TS: I agree that human can dominate the machines since mechines are tools and extensions of human minds and abilies. Nevertheless, machines should be not neglect in such concerns and human mind can be inspired by machines.
ISSUE1: Humanbeings are the operators and they can chose the way to use machines.
Evidence:
Digital Architecture experimented by Neil Leach, Architecture Association School
Industrial Revolution
Laws to restrict abandoning using or machines
DEVELOPMENT1: Machines can inspire human's creation
Evidence: Frank Yang, using digital and physical data to present arts
DEVELOPMENT2: Depending on machines too much may cause problems
Evidence:
Airconditionor Syndrome
Matrix
160"The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."
TS: It is true that leaders should have their own principles and objectives so as to direct his enterprise into a consistent and effective development, however, popular opinion is also important to consider for the leaders which can pretend them from being autocrats and remain level-headed.
ISSUE1: Since the success requires a long way to insist, leaders who change their mind easily may drop their enterprises into confusion and pell-mell.
Evidence:
Billgates, Microsoft
Franklin Roosvelt
ISSUE2: Leaders are public individuals whose actions may have big influences on their enterprises, demanding them to be calculating and care about the popular opinions. Meanwhile, individuals have many weakpoints which may take them toward thinking partially.
Evidence:
Adolf Hitler
DEVELOPMENT: There are many essential quality of an effective leader, including consistency, level-head, affection, credit and so forth. It's too extreme to say which one is the most essential since none of them can be neglected.
177"The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
TS: According to the statement, we will perceive the world with a different perspecitve after study of an academic discipline. In my view it is true, nevertheless, certain risks may exist if we took the academic discipline too seriously and neglect our original effective persepectives.
ISSUE1: The world is complex, with the method learned from academic discipline, we can analyze it more effectively and exactly.
Evidence: Statistics
ISSUE2: We need many background knowledges to understand an issue, which can be learned from academic disciplines.
Evidence: Architecture, history
DEVELOPMENT: Any anticipating individuals should be careful to remember their own ways and keep level-headed not to be confused by learned knowledges, which can constrain creation and may be fause.
Evidence: Galileo Galilei, Aristotle, the gravity experiment
212"If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
TS: According to the statement, we may take any means as justifiable if the goal is worthy. In my views, however, it is too extreme, since whether the goal is worthy or not depends on different personal values and interests. Moreover, such consideration may result in an opposite outcome, when the means are so controversial as to bring unanticipating consequence.
ISSUE1: Whether a goal is worthy depends on personal values, and could be distorted by frantic individuals.
Evidence: Criminals
ISSUE2: A goal might be worthy to take certain measures for somebody, however, individuals with different interests could be harmed by those measures.
Evidence: Japan, World War II
ISSUE3: It is possible that taking any means as justifiable for the goal can result in a slipshod trend into abandoning crime.
Evidence: Return to criminals
221"The chief benefit of the study of history is to break down the illusion that people in one period of time are significantly different from people who lived at any other time in history."
TS: It is true we can compare the people in one period time with people from other periods objectively by studying history. However, learning this is just an ostensible issue, we must know the profundity of consistent people life. Moreover, history can tell us more then this, and the benefit depends on how we use history to anlyze our own society.
ISSUE1: By learning the living situation of ancient people, we can build a consistent theory of humanbeings' life style, which can tell us the basical rules of social development.
Evidence: The ancient Europe compared with ancient Greek
ISSUE2: Learning about the basical rules, using it as a perspective to solve our problems and analyze our society is more important.
Evidence: Experience of Franklin Roosvelt
DEVELOPMENT: History can tell us more then this, aesthetic rules, ethos and customs kept on changing in past thousands of years, which can all be our cultural treasure.
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26The following appeared in a memo from the chairperson of the school board in the town of Saluda.
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Weakpoint 1: Same time does not mean the realities are surely relevant. No evidence has provided Mr. Schade had done anything good for the success. A. For the competitions, maybe there were other reasons, good constituion and good members. B. For the improvements, the school but not a music director can improve facilities, except Mr Schade paid by himself, which is not stated in the statement.
Weakpoint 2: School band's success and music rehearsal facilities and instruments improving can not prove the level of general music education programs. The students' music knowledge, school's music cultural evironment play more important roles.
42The following appeared in a proposal from the economic minister of the country of Paraterra.
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Weakpoint 1: It's a wrong analogy to use different country's experience so directly. No evidence is provided to illustrate that Paraterra has a same evironmental condition to develop ecotourism. Tiny doesn't mean ecological and appealing.
Weakpoint 2: Foreign vistiors increase does surely boost the econony. The per captia income increase may be due to other reasons. No data of tourism incoming is provided.
Weakpoint 3: Whether the advertising of Bellegea is not known. Maybe others direct the National Tourism Office can come to a better result. Bellegea's director may even do harm to Paraterra since he is currently hired by a rival.
48The following appeared in a newspaper article published in the country of Corpora.
....."
Weakpoint 1: Owning computer doesn't mean using computer too much, high computer ownership may be due to a high incoming, which can also be the reason of high overall fitness levels.
Weakpoint 2: Fintness-related products and services are not the only facilities to improve physical fitness levels. Two things happen in the same time are not certainly relevant. No data of survey is given to prove their relevance. Maybe other reasons, high working pression, and so forth, can cause the decrease of physical fitness levels.
Weakpoint 3: Economy level depends on not only consuming. The low expenditures on fitness-related products and services can not be concluded simply due to the economy decline. Maybe people's interests change or the companies which provide fitness-related products and services are not managed well enough.
141The following appeared in a newsletter distributed at a recent political rally.
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Weakpoint 1: The consumers simply refuse to purchas products made with CCC's copper won't solve the enrivonmental problems, then if the company abandons its mining plans, since other copper company's copper will come as substitute, which can also cause problems in other distincts.
Weakpoint 2: No evidence is given to illustrate that pollution and environmental disaster will come because of CCC's mining plans. Especially what CCC's may pollutes will do harm to the endangered animals is not illustrated.
Weakpoint 3:
这里有些疑问:环境灾难就算了,地区是濒危动物栖息地能成为污染的原因么?那里有没有动物一样会有污染。但二者放一块能把中间一个揪出来批么?
237The following appeared as part of an article in a local Beauville newspaper.
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Weakpoint 1: The Dillton's lesson can't be copied simply, since the conditions are different.
Weakpoint 2: There is no evidence to prove that Beauville need to reduce unemployment and there are many unemployees.
Weakpoint 3: Two manufacturing companies moving in is not certainly a success, considering they may origianlly planned to move into Dillton, not apealed by the tax, and they may bring pollution and environmental problems.
57The following appeared in a newsletter on nutrition and health.
....."
Weakpoint 1: First-time ulcers preventing by Zorba is not supported, since only recurrent ulcers are stated in the experiment.
Weakpoint 2: The samples are all first-time ulcer patients, no evidence is provided that recurrent ulcer can be cured.
Weakpoint 3: The side-effect of Zorba as a cure for ulcer is not known, more clinic experiments are needed.
97The following appeared in a memo from the manager of television station KICK.
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Weakpoint 1: nationwide survey's result is not persuading in that area, since the residents may have different interests. More surveys are needed.
Weakpoint 2: The condition of WACK and KICK is different. WACK may do not revise enough sports broadcasts in past while KICK did. Or KICK may not has the resource and audience suitable for sports programs.
Weakpoint 3: The increase of WACK's audience is not surely due to its sports broadcasts. WACk may provide other program at the same time of increasing sports broadcasts.
Weakpoint 4: No evidence is given to state that WACK's profits are increased.
109The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Maple City newspaper.
....."
Weakpoint 1: Whether PC and CC's conditions are similar and comarable with Maple is not stated, so the experience can't be simple anticipation for Maple city.
Weakpoint 2: After 20 years, the market and condition can change a lot, so the situation in PC can not be simply considered.
Weakpoint 3: Altought size of PC and CC is same, their geographic and resident conditions are not stated. Maybe in PC the tranportational condition is good and it appeal many immigrants, while CC is not so attracting. So CC does not needlaws to limit new building construction.
142The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in l....
Weakpoint 1: The detail of correlation between high levels of iron and heart disease is not stated, especailly whether iron does harm or good to heart disease.
Weakpoint 2: The link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease is not detailed, either.
Weakpoint 3: Although red meat is high in iron, whether such iron can be absorbed is not known. Even if the red meat may enhance the risk of heart disease, The fact that red feat is high in iron is not convincing reason. It is possible that the red meat contains other dangerous material, resulting in heart disease directly.
153The following is from an editorial in the Midvale Observer, a local newspaper.
....."
Weakpoint 1: There is no evidence to prove reducing the amount of violence shown during prime time can lower the rate of teenage crime in Alta, since teenagers can watch the programs in other time.
Weakpoint 2: The relevance between violent program and crime is not well established.
Weakpoint 3: Whether the survey is persuading is not known. The amount of sample and whether it is random is not stated.
Weakpoint 4(?): The television programmers may not reduce the amount of violence shown during prime time, as to earn more audience rating.
179The following is a memorandum written by the director of personnel to the president of the Cedar Corporation.
.....
Weakpoint(WHOLE): The suggestion is based on an unfair comparasion, which states different aspects of two companies.
Weakpoint(DETAIL1): Expensive caterer may provide a high qualitied service, and how many ceterer are there in the city is not stated. Maybe there are only two, the Discount comes as the highest.
Weakpoint(DETAIL2): The risen price in past three years might be reasonable, and its rate is not stated.
Weakpoint(DETAIL3): Three people a month who complain may be a small amount, most of the employees may be satified.
Weakpoint(DETAIL4): There is no evidence to prove the hired company should provide special idiets.
Weakpoint(DETAIL5): Whether Discount's menu is more varied than Good-Taste is not stated.
Weakpoint(DETAIL6): The author's personal taste can't stand for the whole personel.
180The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the president of Acme Publishing Company.
.....
Weakpoint1: The benefit from the course is not proved strongly.
A. How the information read could be help for Acme is not known.
B.The former one could be a unique one who obtain the ability to read fast, while others don't. Also how much he could read before he took the course is not stated.
C. The latter one who is promoted is not persuading, since he can do other facilities to enhance his ability and whether he has learned from the course is not stated, either. Moreover, the campany does not need so many vie president.
D. Although the speed of reading is rised, the tire could make the people still read no more than what he did before the course.
Weakpoint2: Whether the $500 is worthy is not analyzed strikingly. Only two of the graduators are stated and no more information is given. And how such investment can be repaid is not illustrated.
Weakpoint3: There is no evidence to persuade Acme to require their all employees to ake the Easy Read course, since in the company many people may not need to read at all.
190The following is a letter to the editor of the Glenville Gazette, a local newspaper.
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Weakpoint1: The amount of people who attendded the concerts in bad weather and the amount of those in good weather are not compared to illustrate bad weather was not a reason.
Weakpoint2: There is no evidence to prove people in Glenville Gazette would like to go to the concerts for modern music.
Weakpoint3: Although Richerts' recordings are popular, whether his songs will be popular in the concerts are lack of survey. Moreover, whether his music can be presented by the concert well enough is also doubtable.
Weakpoint4: Even if the above reasons can make concerts more popular, no evidence can prove advance ticket purchases can be increased, since people may prefer buying tickets at the concert hall.
Weakpoint5: Whether the decline is due to lack of community support is not well stated, the audiences may not be residents in community before.
214In each city in the region of Treehaven, ....
Weakpoint1: Only the number of residents are stated, how many students and which kind of education is not compared to conclude such an unfair statement.
Weakpoint2: The economic dimensions of two cities are not stated, since P may have less incomings to collect taxes of its tax rates are lower.
Weakpoint3: The budgets can not stand for everything, maybe the high budget of B is just a result of bad management and corruption.
205The following appeared in a recommendation from the president of Amburg's Chamber of Commerce.
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Weakpoint1: Vandalism does not contain all kinds of crime, maybe murder and rape rised.
Weakpoint2: Whether the decline of vandalism is due to the lighting is not detailed, Belleville may have other measures.
Weakpoint3: Police patrols may reduce other crimes.
Weakpoint4: The experience of B can't be copied simply. Two citys' conditions may diverse a lot. Maybe in Amburg vandalism does not exist much originally.
Weakpoint5: Even this measure can reduce crime, revitalizing the declining neighborhoods in the city still requires other conditions. And crime may not be a reason for that. |
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