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本帖最后由 futureguitar 于 2011-10-29 22:07 编辑
10月29日 20100522NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.
真是不好意思,让你的眼睛受累了,麻烦大家修改,谢谢。
写作时间:50min, 没刻意将就时间,只是一直不停地写
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With the development of technology which enables people to communicate and collaborate more efficiently and quickly, increasing people sometimes will work at home using only computer and telephone. However, when it comes to the question that whether working at home is better than working in the office, I believe many people, like me , will agree that working in the office is better for its efficient communication with bosses and colleagues, an relatively more serious circumstances and
First of all, working at office enables us to communicate with people around more efficiently, especially bosses and colleagues, thus the work performance can be enhanced. And computer and telephone nowadays can never simulate the working situations in office hundred percent .You have to admit that computer is just an alternative method for us to request, report and retouch. Without touching and playing without the primary model of your product, such as a mobile phone, toy, stationary, or something else, your bosses or founding supporters can hardly be convinced that your product will be a shock in the market, let alone they can provide some useful suggestions. Without face to face communication with your supervisor about your manuscript or annual report of your study, you won’t be able to obtain vivid dictation and revision of your paper. Without body language and smile on your face in the office, how can you show your fully confidence and energy in front of your bosses. Therefore, there is always something that the cold computer and telephone can never simulate and reconstruct, and that part happened to be a very important unalienable part and in our daily life and work.
Secondly, the efficiency of working in the office not only comes from the efficient communication, but also comes from the busy atmosphere around you. Yup, the environment of your work also is a crucial factor for your working performance. There are so many distractions at home around you. An telephone call from some company inform you that you have to pay some bills, your neighbor is shaving his garden, your cat is constantly disturbing you by biting your foot and your babies are crying. All of these detractions cannot be avoided even if you close your room’s door, and any of them will deviated your mind from your work in which you have to spend half of an hour to re-concentrate on your progress. All of this horrible experience may exist in almost everyone’s life, let alone even there’s no distraction, you still waste your time to constantly check your email every 5 minutes, browse your friends’ status on facebook every 20miutes and reply them one by one for nearly an hour without even touch your work in a whole day. Therefore, I think a better environment proper for work is also a better enzyme to enhance your work performance, wearers a bad environment will be a demon that inhibit your work progress.
Last but not the least, the culture of a company is a crucial factor to accumulate soft treasure of that company. Nearly every world famous company will have its own characteristic and culture which is known by all of us. Apple is known for its elegant and considerate design of product and even sales store. Image that all the workers including engineers, designers and CEOs in Apple are working at home—they definitely have the technology and equipment to do that—then no one will be impressed by its magnificent office and store. If all the workers in Google are working at home, then on one will be impressed and attracted by its office’s environment which is absolutely a most important factor for young talents to join Google. All in all, office is a most important factor for a company to build up its image and culture which actually is the soul of a company.
From what I have said above, I guess the conclusion can be easily drawn that working in the office is a key point for not only the workers but also the company. The reasons are that working in the office can enhance workers’ performance by effective communications and distractions free environment, and most importantly can determine the image and soul of a company. |
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