[口语] [口语小组]copyzero2作业贴(1012&&1102) [复制链接]

Irene1084
UID：3420779

荣誉版主

Rank: 9 Rank: 9 Rank: 9

声望: 1182
寄托币: 7150
注册时间: 2013-3-17
精华: 1
帖子: 2851

143楼

发表于 2013-7-25 10:22:14 |只看该作者

【7.23】
Task 3
这题用了38s解释plan，太多了，最多20s搞定。你不用把plan的原因解释的这么详细，直接说：the school plans to send students daily emails to remind them about campus activities, because campus newspapers are not up-to-date compared to emails, and students check their mailbox very often。顶多两句话就讲完了。真正要扩展的是后面woman的两个理由：
① newspapers only come out once a week, so students may miss the activities they want to attend...but daily emails can always remind them about this. Also, students would know if some events are cancelled so that they won't waste time showing up there.
② students check their emails at least once a day....and if it contains the menu of the school cafeteria, students would definitly check them everyday...
前面实在浪费太多时间了

Task 4
it's Sara, not Sally
这题这样概括可以的。

Task 5
suggestion的第一个理由讲错了吧？she "could't" put everything aside吧？你说的could，第一遍听以为你选的是second solution。第二个理由补充一点，because she doesn't want to disappoint Bill, maybe she can talk to him and give him a deadline...blah blah

Task 6
1. "steam" powered machines, not stream
2. 第二个change的过程是，rural citizens came to factories to work; they gathered around
factories and form small villiages; as more and more people came, small villiages finally
turned to big cities.这里讲的不太好。

zero妹子讲话有点慢，导致你答题的内容被压缩了，所以更要找准答题点。另外就是，答得时候如果前满有个别词讲错了，别更正，keep going.先保证你的思路是连贯流畅的，发音表达什么的慢慢练。

【7.24】
Task 1
1. 第一个点，spend much time with friends，感觉没答出friends的影响作用。你可以说：young adults spend much more time with friends compared to the time they spend with their parents. When young people gather together and chat, their ideas and beliefs can be easily affected by their peers, like their choice of fashion and which actor they like most...
2. pressure讲错了，你读的像pleasure

Task 2
近视眼是myopia。short-sighted指人目光短浅
这题你的意思我懂了，但第一遍听我还以为我留的是关于发明的题……><

感觉Task 1,2 表达的不太好，很多地方你的意思没表达出来，需要别人猜一下。
另外，似乎明显有点生疏啊，好好练吧。
加油妹纸~！

[口语] [口语小组]copyzero2作业贴(1012&&1102) [复制链接]

备考先锋

IBT Zeal

IBT Smart

Cancer巨蟹座

寄托兑换店纪念章

US-applicant

荣誉版主

美版守护者

EU Advisor

分享之阳

Golden Apple

Scorpio天蝎座

IBT Elegance

站长推荐