[习作点评] 【NINE小组】第十二次作业-by me [复制链接]

Politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensus ratherthan elusive ideals.

The speakerapproves that politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensusrather than elusive ideals. I partly agree with the speaker's opinion. But maybe in some circumstances ideals of the politicians have their significance.

I must firstly saythat politicians should satisfy most people's needs. That means they mustpursue common ground and reasonable consensus as the speaker says because thepolitics of a nation is to ensure the nation runs with a minimum of contention.Take China as an example, the politicians of China excessively emphasize therapid development of the nation in recent twenty or thirty years. Nowadays, thestrength of the country is improved rapidly and the international position ofChina has also enhanced a lot. China has become a country with powerful abilityon industry and agriculture. But it is a serious problem that the gap betweenrich and poor also becomes very big which makes most people's life quality verylow. If the politics of China cannot resolve this problem, the development ofChina must be influenced significantly in the long run.

But may besometimes, some ideas cannot be admitted with most people of a nation, butthese ideas are totally right and reasonable. In the history of American, theposition of black people is very low; they usually discriminate by othercitizens. The white man or woman may have reach a consensus that the blackpeople should earn less money and do the labor work which is more toilsome.These circumstances change little until the civil rights movement which is ledby Martin Luther King. He recommended the idea that black people should enjoythe equal right with other citizens. But these ideas cannot be accept by mostcitizens of American in that time. Nowadays with the improvement of the positionof black people, the society of American has become more harmonious which provethe idea of Martin Luther King is right.

In conclusion, thepoliticians should satisfy most  people of their nations to ensure thestability of the nations but at the same time accept some ideas to guaranteethe development the their nations.

The speaker approves that politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensusrather than elusive ideals. I partly agree with the speaker's opinion. But maybe in some circumstances ideals of the politicians感觉这么表达不好 have their significance.

作者观点：部分同意；在一些情况下政治家的理想也重要。

I must firstly say that politicians should satisfy most people's needs. That means they mustpursue common ground and reasonable consensus as the speaker says because the politics of a nation is to ensure the nation runs with a minimum of contention.我觉得政治的目的可能有待商榷Take China as an example, the politicians of China excessively emphasize therapid development of the nation in recent twenty or thirty years. Nowadays, the strength of the country is 加being improved rapidly and the international position of China has also 加been enhanced a lot. China has become a country with powerful ability on industry and agriculture. But it is a serious problem that the gap betweenrich and poor also becomes very big（改成significant感觉更好） which makes most people's life quality verylow.(which lowers XXX 感觉更好) If the politics of China cannot resolve this problem, the development ofChina must be influenced significantly in the long run.

政治家应该先满足人们的需求。 题目中是 共同点/共同基础和理性的一致，我觉得这一段没有体现出来；或者说 缺少相应叙述表明 人民的对XX的需求是 共同点/共同基础和理性的一致？

举例说虽然中国现在国力强大，但是贫富差距很大，大多数人的生活水平很低。从段落上说感觉例子和主题句联系不够，需要改写或补充叙述。

But maybe sometimes, some ideas（题目是ideal ）cannot be admitted with(by) most people不被人民承认？我觉得这个和题目的表述有差别 of a nation, but(一句有两个but) these ideas are totally right and reasonable. In the history of American(America), the position of black people is very low; they 加are usually discriminated by other citizens. The white man or woman(复述) may have reach a consensus that the black people should earn less money and do the labor work which is more toilsome.These circumstances change little until the civil rights movement which is ledby Martin Luther King. He recommended the idea that black people should enjoy the equal rights with(like好点？) other citizens. But these ideas cannot be accept by most citizens of American(American citizens) in that time. Nowadays with the improvement of the position of black people, the society of American(American society) has become more harmonious, which proves the idea of Martin Luther King is right.

马丁路德金不是政治家吧，他应该算activist。。所以这个例子感觉不恰当。

In conclusion, the politicians should satisfy most  people of their nations to ensure the stability of the nations but at the same time accept some ideas to guaranteethe development the their nations.

政治家应该满足大多数人民的需求来保证稳定(我觉得这个和题目表述差距有点大），同时接受一些想法来保证国家的发展(题目是追求理想)

主要觉得第一点那里表述有点问题；第二点的例子不恰当

个人观点，不对的请指正~欢迎讨论~