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发表于 2011-11-2 10:41:42 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

11月1日独立作文Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? The best way toimprove the quality of education is to increase teacher’s salaries.

Howto improve the quality of education is a very complicated question.It could not be worked out easily just by a single way because it isaffected by a lot of factors, such as the requirements with students,the quality of teachers, effects of parents over students, school'scurriculum for students, and etc. There is no doubt that money wouldbe very helpful to improve some of these factors, but it can notsolve all problems or finally decide the quality of education.

Tobe honest, it is true that the quality of teachers especially inelementary schools has been becoming worse and worse partly becausethe pay to teachers is not good enough to attract good teachers withhigh quality. Through increasing teacher's salaries, the career ofbeing a teacher would be more attractive than it was before, andwould be one choice of more outstanding people. So increasingteacher's pay can really improve the quality of teachers.

However,even if the quality of teachers gets better through increasing theirsalary, it is not guaranteed that the quality of education will beimproved. As we know, teachers only teach classes in school'scurriculum, and what and how deep they teach mostly is up to school'srequirements of each class. If the quality of education is limited bysuperficial and limited curriculum, improving teacher's quality isfar not enough to make the quality of education better.

Oh,we should not forget parents who are the people affecting studentsthe most. For many parents, the most important thing is that theirchildren get A in class, however what their kids learn from classesnever bothers them. Once kids get good GPA in school, they can spenda lot of time playing with their parents' permission. Is it right totreat kids' study and future like that? And do you think theseparents really care the quality of education? What will kids get fromtheir parents' opinion about education and school?

Sothere are a lot of factors affecting the quality of education. How toimprove the quality of education is really complicated. To improvethe quality of education, increasing teachers' salaries is helpfulbut far not enough.

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发表于 2011-11-2 15:14:35 |只看该作者

嗨，11月1日独立在下水平有限，修改若有不当之处，还望见谅

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发表于 2011-11-2 18:38:06 |只看该作者

改好了~我是拖沓王……顺便我的11.1 的作文也贴上了……欢迎批改

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发表于 2011-11-3 13:50:47 |只看该作者

11/03 独立 by GreanLeaf
Do you prefer to finish a project completely then to another one or do two or several projects at a time?

For most people, project is not a strange thing in their lives. From elementary school to walking into career, people's life is filled with all kinds of projects to finish, sometimes people even have to deal with two or more at a time. Some people may feel frustrated, however the others handle them very well and enjoy it. For me, if I can choose, I prefer the former way to do my work.

On one hand, I believe which way people choose to do a work depends on people's ability. Some guys are good at dealing with different things at a time and they enjoy the various conditions. However, the others like to devote their whole attention and energy to do a single work at a time instead of struggling to keep balance in various projects. I am one of the later. When I was a kid, I have found I loved to paint pictures in a whole day until I got a satisfactory one, or I could spend a few days on sewing an awkward doll for myself. When I did that, I felt peaceful and confident, and I was creative and did my work very well. Once I was bothered by other things, I would lose my patience and be nervous so that I could not pay my attention on my work then I felt frustrated and sometimes confused. In this way, I have the ability to finish one project at a time very well and I enjoy the process so I prefer this way.

On the other hand, doing one project at a time helps me to do my best, then ensures the success of my project. Have you ever felt tired to always try to keep balance in different tasks? Have you ever regretted your failure caused by incomplete devotion? Believe me, I know your feeling. I ever got three projects with the same deadline at a time. Every day, I had to remind me again and again that I had three projects to do, and I also made a detailed schedule to divide my time into three parts in each of which I forced myself to do the appointed project. That was total suffering, and I even was waked up by nightmare in which I forgot one project and messed it up. Then in order to do each project well, I stopped two projects temporally and focused on only one. Finally, I finished my projects very efficiently and smoothly before deadline. So complete devotion to one thing leads to success, however distraction causes failure.

In a nutshell, I prefer to finish one task at a time not only because I am good at and enjoy doing things in this way, but also because in this way I can focus on it the most which increases the efficiency and guarantees success.

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