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It is widely accepted that the arts including painting, music, literature and so forth are impressive reflections of humanity and society. Moreover, some arguers believe that this kind of reflection is significant as the art reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society which cannot be discovered in normal life. In my point of view, I content to the issue that the arts partially help to release the hidden opinions of the artists. However, it is possible that the reflection is not representative of the whole society.
很流畅，很舒服的开头
Scanning all the impressive artists and their work around the world over the several centuries, surely you will admit that the majority of the works reflect the artists' humanity which comes from the hidden side of the society and represents the hidden ideas. The hardship Beethoven experienced is the best example of the misery of the poor artists who cannot be supported by the government. Thus his sublime Fate Symphony which is filled with his effort to struggle indisputably becomes the best appealing to the hidden ideas that (they) 主语是ideas么？好像说不通 are eager for a better life. Pablo Picasso showed his various styles of paintings and created a lot of valuable works which are the most precious pictures now. 感觉这里用，比较好And it is widely admitted that the changeable style reflects his idea of freedom for which exactly the society fights. In summary, in many cases the artists are the representations of the civilians so they reveal the otherwise hidden ideas of the society in their works with braveness and enthusiasm. 论证比较充分，但因为限时的原因，作者的例子和语言都不够细腻，承接的不是流畅
What's more, the concealed impulses of a society can also been found in many excellent works. Different from the arts which reflect the humanity, the works which represent the hidden motivation may play a more vital part in the society and the history. Take the novel which changes the overall society of America and the history of the whole world---Uncle Tom's Cabin by Stowe--as the example. The fiction showed the world the miserable life of black slavery in the South America in a unique (eye) perspective and ignited the spark of the freedom in the hearts of the black people. Since Abraham Lincoln supported the book, it was widely spread and eventually to some extent leaded to the Civil War, a war changed the life of slaveries and even the fundamental ideas of Americans. Just like the Uncle Tom's Cabin, many other books, paintings, even songs reflect the concealed impulses of a society and some result in a breakout which is powerful enough to change a society and the history.
However, it is obvious that not all arts and all works cause this effect. We cannot neglect that there are still many artists whose works are not from a deep comprehension of the society so that they are not able to reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. For instance, Jules-Verne's science fictions are much based on his own imagination so it is unfair to assert that the fictions reflect the hidden opinions of the society. Another example is from some nonmainstream singers such as some rock stars. Their songs sometimes intentionally fight against the trend of the society or the history to bring (them) them是指？ a feeling of destruction. You can hardly claim that these arts which are from their unique or even crazy minds represent the mainstream ideas of civilians and society.
To sum up, no matter what the works are--songs, literature, paintings and so on, some of them reveal the concealed opinions and impulses or motivation of a society. Indisputably, they are precious and important in the history. On the contrary, no one can deny that there are also some odd works which simply reflect the artist's unique mind or characteristics as I mentioned above therefore they hold different value from the former ones.
结尾承接的很好，但有点仓促，对全文的总结并不是很到位，不过，小白同学依然很厉害了～～已经开始限时了
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