【欢迎拍文小组】2010/07/08-----issue131

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提纲：1. 在真相被掩盖的时代，艺术可以间接的表达人们对社会的感受。
                  毕加索的作品为我们揭示了二战期间备受压迫的西班牙人民对死者的祭奠
        2.  艺术反映了当时的主流思想
                  中世纪和文艺复兴时期的绘画与建筑，有很深刻的宗教含义
                  文学著作也体现了这一点
        3.  不仅如此，艺术还体现了大师们的个人情感与独特的人生经历
                   中国古诗人，写诗的灵感无一例外都是来自各色的生活阅历
                   梵高绘画的浓郁色彩也宣示着他对生活的达观心境
        总之，在艺术这艘大船上，不仅承载者对于社会的潜在思想与脉动，也搭载着艺术家们对生活的感悟
TOPIC: ISSUE131 - "The arts (painting,music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of asociety."
WORDS: 457
TIME: 00:50:00
DATE: 2010/7/8 11:11:44

The author asserted that the arts reveal theotherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society. I generally agree with the assertionto some extent that arts do have such effects on our society, whereas, wecannot overlook the individual emotion and inspiration contained in the arts, whichshow not only the reality of the world but also the artists’ authentic life tous.
Admittedly, when people are suffering harshtimes, the true mind reflecting the present is abandoned to exhibit, artsalways show its great power in proclaiming the hidden ideas. Consider, forinstance, during the Second World War, under the dark reign of Nazi, thebombing that claimed many lives in Spain was going on, but no one dared tospeak out their hatred and sorrow towards the dead. But Picasso drew anabstract painting of the bombed city to express the public hidden ideas. Wereit not for his painting, nobody can know the masses’ feeling. In this way, thepainting transcended the art itself and became the prolocutor of the publicvoice.
Furthermore, prevailing ideas and attitudes ofthe society can easily be discovered from the arts. One sees according to the Medievaland Renaissance arts, the Christian theme can never be so obvious. Manypaintings were created aiming at expressing the public respect to the deity,many configurations of the church (often high and slim as the CologneCathedral) represents the awe and the power of the deity and the believers’respect to god. This phenomenon exists in the literature similarly, focusing ontelling us about experiences and thoughts of people in society while in turnsociety makes us more aware about its own impulses.
Nevertheless, personal moods coexist with thesociety reflection in arts. We cannot deny that every great works are born by themakers’ inspiration. Common sense and daily life teach us that it’s so hard toseek for an inspiration that we can only rely on the emotions from our life. Inthis way, painting and music, two particular art forms, tend to representpeople’s emotional responses to life, such as hope, happiness, serenity, etc., whichare clearly shown in the ancient poems of those poets like Li Bai, Du Fu andBai Juy. All of these poems were rooted in the incidents they came across. Thestrong colors in Van Gogh’s painting reveal his enthusiasm attitude toward lifelikewise. In all these cases, it seems that the art reflect the artist as wellas the society.
On the whole, art is a boat sailing on thetime sea bearing the passenger products of the era. Accompanying the hiddenideas and impulses of the society, major passenger of the art boat, individual andother affairs are also travelling.
新手，参考了较多的提纲。

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The author asserted that the arts reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society. I generally agree with the assertion to some extent that arts do have such effects（如果仅仅是reveal，便谈不上影响） on our society, whereas, we cannot overlook the individual emotion and inspiration contained（它们不是组成成分） in the arts, which show not only the reality of the world but also the artists’ authentic life tous.

Admittedly, when people are suffering（harsh time能suffer吗） harsh times, the true mind reflecting the present is abandoned to exhibit, arts always show its great power in proclaiming the hidden ideas. Consider, for instance, during the Second World War, under the dark reign of Nazi, the bombing that claimed many lives in Spain was going on, but no one dared to speak out their hatred and sorrow towards（没有分开hatred 和 sorrow的对象） the dead. But Picasso drew an abstract painting of the bombed city to express the public hidden ideas. We reit not for his painting, nobody can know the masses’ feeling. In this way, the painting transcended the art itself and became the prolocutor of the public voice.（great！）

Furthermore, prevailing ideas and attitudes of the society can easily be discovered from the arts. One sees according to the Medievaland Renaissance arts, the Christian theme can never be so obvious. Many paintings were created aiming at expressing the public respect to the deity, many configurations of the church (often high and slim as the Cologne Cathedral) represents the awe and the power of the deity and the believers ’respect to god. This phenomenon exists in the literature similarly, focusing on telling us about experiences and thoughts of people in society while in turn society makes us more aware about its own impulses.（Chinglish）

Nevertheless, personal moods coexist with the society reflection in arts. We cannot deny that every great works are born by the makers’ inspiration. Common sense and daily life teach us that it’s so hard to seek for an inspiration（不明确） that we can only rely on the emotions from（in）
our life. In this way, painting and music, two particular art forms, tend to represent people’s emotional responses to life, such as hope, happiness, serenity, etc., which are clearly shown in the ancient poems of those poets like Li Bai, Du Fu and Bai Juy. All of these poems were rooted in the incidents they came across. The strong colors in Van Gogh’s painting reveal his enthusiasm attitude toward life likewise. In all these cases, it seems that the art reflect the artist as well as the society.

On the whole, art is a boat sailing on the time sea bearing the passenger products of the era. Accompanying the hidden ideas and impulses of the society, major passenger of the art boat, individual and other affairs are also travelling.(汉语提纲不错，但Chinglish严重，让人不知所云)

思路清晰，但语言还不够地道，不能充分的表达自己，有些地方Chinglish严重；
受他人思路影响严重，可以尝试先自己写再去参考别人的


也是新手，提了些个人的意见，欢迎回拍！
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