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There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in the value of a movie. Some people claim that only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth to watch. Tempting as such claim might be, it is not always the case, for it simply overlooks some important factors which make a movie valuable. (最后一句这个句型没见过。。。在google上搜索也没见有国外的网站上用过。俗点的 The reason why they claim this is that they simply overlook …)
Despite my disagreement with this statement, I have to admit that movies which teach us about real life do play a pivotal role in shaping our understanding of life. It is apparently that a good movie always related to some controversial issue debated heatedly. With moveable stories and innovative point of view, it is more likely to have a profound thinking. For instance, the famous movie born on July 4th makes people cannot cease to think (can’t help thinking that) whether a war is justice or worthwhile from the aspect of an individual who devote everything of him to support the alleged justice war. Also a movie about real life can exhibit us much more about our society regardless of our limited outlook. the godfather can exemplify it perfectly, which tell (tells) us a touching story about an illegal empire and the tragedy life of this family, making people understand better on a previous unfamiliar lifestyle of the real word.
On the other hand, it is really superficial to simply say that only real life related movies are worth to watch, ignoring that there are great amount of movie (movies), such as science fiction, animated cartoon, are all (are all 替换成 which) make some sense in different field (fields). Take harry potter ,which has been popular among children for ten years, as example. It has become an essential ingredient of our childhood memory because it not only accompany (accompanies) with us for such a long time, but also tell (tells) us an amazing story about justice, courage and the long lasting friendship. Even though it is happen (it happens )in magic world, it is the spirit (that) the movie try (tries) to express rather than its relationship with real world that is important.
Furthermore , there are circumstances that a movie attract lots of audience just because of its unreality .with the mounting pressure from the real word, people are more likely to seek ways to be away from these troubles .consequently, people take sanctuary in watching a movie, which is just a product of people’s imagination, like Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. ,feeling relieve from the burden of heavy pressure.
In conclusion, I would argue that, for the reason that the role of movies play (plays) various from type to type, we are supposed to value their importance from different aspect.
建议:
1. 文中出现大量复杂句,大量从句。长短句结合的方式给人读来感觉会更好些。
2. 虽然每个观点都用例子支撑,但是感觉例子很宽泛,不够specific。
3. 麻烦也改改我的作文,我们分在了一组 |
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