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Never in history was technology so emphasis as in modern society. Notwithstanding the advent of modern technology opens up the possibility of an efficient lifestyle, they are much busier than before. People start to fear the detrimental effects of these wonderful human contrivances. This inordinate concern is quite groundless.
Mankind can broaden their horizons and enrich their life via modern technological means. One doesn’t necessarily become busy if he spends most of his time in modern technology. Modern technology can be an amazing tool that shortens working length. Every thing is at the touch of the fingertip. As far as efficient is concerned, the modern technology is by no means detrimental.
Every coin has its two sides, and modern technology is no exception. When one is obsessed by his own affections of high-tech, busyness occurs. Nevertheless, busyness must not be defined in a narrow sense. Problems arise not from technological development but from people themselves. Why should technology be singled out as particularly deleterious? The reason of busyness might be caused by social competitions, family stresses and one’ pursuit of perfection. People’s interests in or dedications to modern technology prevent them from trailing behind the era which call for the high-efficiency.
In a larger sense, under no circumstance can we ignore the significance of the high-tech. Mankind’s pursuit of perfection will push them into a busy lifestyle. However, it will be hopeless attempt to wonder the noncausal relationship.


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Modern technology gives people more free time,but actually they are busier than before.Do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.
人人都說對的事、人人都在做的事,不一定就是對的。
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