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12.2 It is more fun to see a movie in the cinema with other people than see a movie at home.
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Most people like movies no matter in the cinema or at home. Super movie fans support the idea that seeing a movie in the cinema is much better than at home. However, I challenge this opinion with the following reasons(前两句应该中间加连词,而且三句话结构安排不好, 互相之间都是转折了,建议前两句换顺序)." G+ Z: g& p8 y
First of all, it is convenience (convenient) for us to see a movie at home. At home (去掉重复了)we could do anything that we want, such as eating chips and something ohers when we are watching the film, while we are in the cinema, we must keep quiet to prevent disturbing other audiences】. (加连词)In such a competition(competitive) society, more and more people should be available at any time. Apparently, even if we went out to recall the urgent phone in the cinema, the missing plot in the movie wasn’t played again. Nevertheless, we could answer the phone at any moment with the movie paused.
8 p4 w, B8 l9 p8 Z$ Y# X4 |Another situation is that for most people, there is no cinema in the community, so they have no choice but to drive to a further place in order to see a movie in the cinema. In this case, if the movie ended up at midnight, obviously, it was not safe for people, especially for girls, to return home. Under such circumstances, there is nothing better than watching a movie at home.2 g2 b: y% {: ?
Moreover, we could see any moment of the film and our favorite classic movies. As we all know that, there is a schedule in a cinema, so if we want to see the movie in it, we must make a choice in this certain range. The situation is different when we see it at home. We could find the movie what we like on the internet, and the classical movies, which are not shown in the cinema, could be watched on the computer.
( a! O3 {% p8 V' QAt the same time, seeing a film at home is a way to reduce the life expanse?. It is almost zero cost to enjoy a movie for us and the purpose to have a relax and entertainment has achieved. Why don’t you do this?
1 G5 g% L% b5 A6 H4 |Admittedly, many people bolster the opinion that the atmosphere in the cinema lets people concentrate themselves on the movie easily. However, if we turn off the light to see a movie, we could also immerge ourselves in the plots.
整体来说写的不错,只是开头和第二段的机构中间缺乏必要的连词,另外最后最好有个总结 |
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