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45, Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your
position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

1,分数是一个衡量学习的标准,可以鼓励学生
2,过度了不好,能力教育,培养学生的能力,要不就会高分低能
3 给学生压力,作弊,不爱学习,恶性循环。

Would pursuing high scores influence the quality of learning for students? In my view, high grades itself is not harmful to students. It could also encourage students to study hard. However, extreme competition for high grades would lend students into
wrong direction, so that the growth of students would be destroyed seriously.

Scores is a proper standard of measuring learning and teachers can incite students to learn knowledge diligently. Children, who are born to play games, could be regulated by scores. Only by studying hard can they achieving enough scores to enter into a higher level of education. For example, a research in china in 2010 that counted students’ studying time reveals that students having score pressure from 10 ages to 13 ages would learn 2 hours more than students who does not need to take exams.
Likewise, students can acquire delight and satisfaction by pursuing scores. This is a way to encourage students to study diligently.

However, undue pursuing high grades would be harmful to students. Firstly, the destination of education is to improve and culture students’ ability, but not teach students how to attain high scores. Score is not equal to ability. Ability has many aspects, such as speaking and practice. A student, if costing his all time to gain high scores and tackle with exams, could be reluctant to improve real ability by which the student could keep a foothold in the society. For example, Wang lei, my university student, have gained high scores on the exams. However he is not skilled at speaking and handing, he could not find a job up to now.

In addition, students must sustain enormous pressure from high scores. Maybe some students can overcome mass pressure to improve themselves. But if a student could not defeat the score pressure, he would be self-abased in studying. Slowly he would discard learning knowledge. He will cheat exams and enter into a vicious circle. In modern society, some people for this reason abandon studying, so they have no jobs to support themselves. At last they become criminals and also hurt society.

In sum, score is a good tool to help students improving themselves. If people utilize it reasonably, they benefit a lot from this. However, excess pursuing grades brings many disadvantages to students.
在荆棘道路上,惟有信念和忍耐能开辟出康庄大道.
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