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本帖最后由 daydreamer_me 于 2013-8-28 23:27 编辑

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daydreamer_me 发表于 2013-8-19 10:31
Your job has greater happiness than your social life.

Marvelous as it looks at first sight, the s ...

Although we can feel happy during work time, it's as little as a piece of paper in a thick dictionnary. I can not find this sentence in Google, this sentence is your original?

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悬念发表于 2013-8-21 15:11
Although we can feel happy during work time, it's as little as a piece of paper in a thick diction ...

really? you can find it ????? I swear i write this sense without checking the Internet or other dictionaries......it just hit my mind when i was writing the essay...

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悬念发表于 2013-8-21 15:11
Although we can feel happy during work time, it's as little as a piece of paper in a thick diction ...

oh, god! i neglect the word "not"......poor reading

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daydreamer_me 发表于 2013-8-21 15:21
oh, god! i neglect the word "not"......poor reading

Thanks for your reply. i like the sentence you used in your essay. when will you take the tofel exam?

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悬念发表于 2013-8-21 15:31
Thanks for your reply. i like the sentence you used in your essay. when will you take the tofel ...

This Sunday...............................

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daydreamer_me 发表于 2013-8-21 16:06
This Sunday...............................

Best wishes for you. Does this is your first time to take this exam? Hoping we can learn from each other in the future.

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悬念发表于 2013-8-21 16:16
Best wishes for you. Does this is your first time to take this exam? Hoping we can learn from each ...

Surely it's my first TOEFL test.......So glad we can be battle companions! As for this writing group, i really feel sorry that i am too busy to minister it...So if you want to write essays or have essays to be revised, you can contact me, and i will recommend some webs for you .........

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悬念发表于 2013-8-21 16:16
Best wishes for you. Does this is your first time to take this exam? Hoping we can learn from each ...

Of course, thanks for your encouragement!!!!

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daydreamer_me 发表于 2013-8-21 16:24
Surely it's my first TOEFL test.......So glad we can be battle companions! As for this writing gro ...

Wonderful to receive your reply and know that you will be happy to help me revise my essay. Honesty speaking, i have take toefl exams several times, the highest score in writting sect is 22, it is a pity. if you have question about the exam , I think you can ask me, as i told you i have take this exam several times.

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悬念发表于 2013-8-21 16:52
Wonderful to receive your reply and know that you will be happy to help me revise my essay. Honest ...

Now the biggest question for me is the listening and speaking.......especially listening. it's quite poor, fluctuate near 20, most times beneath 20 == . One problem is that i cannot distinguish what the lecture is talking about, and another one is i have no time to take notes.......So can you help me with my extremely poor listening? thx very much

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daydreamer_me 发表于 2013-8-21 17:08
Now the biggest question for me is the listening and speaking.......especially listening ...

For TPO listening, how many times have you done ? In listening section, you do not need take notes of every details , if you can keep pace with the lecture, take a little more important notes will be suitable. more notes will be important , when do intergrated writting, take more detils of what the professoe said, especially the examples if have . Last tiem i got good in intergrated writting . As you will take the exams in this sunday, I recommend you light up your pressure, take it easy, this time over-tirred for preparing the listening may not be worth the effort.

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