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I53: If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

A48:The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement.

"Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. Another advantage is that housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Moreover, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. And best of all, retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

liliudodo 发表于 2014-8-22 23:10
死是清凉的夜，生是闷热的风

Bruceee 发表于 2014-8-22 10:00
根据昨天363759209的建议，我做了一些改进，想让他看看，所以希望今天版主把我和363759209分在一组 ^ ^

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david-ding 发表于 2014-8-22 21:11
Issue就不贴了..史上最烂
Argue倒是快得很，23m新纪录 - -

Bruceee 发表于 2014-8-22 10:00
根据昨天363759209的建议，我做了一些改进，想让他看看，所以希望今天版主把我和363759209分在一组 ^ ^

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363759209 发表于 2014-8-23 22:19
亲的argument写的比我好多了，没办法改啊，当范文哈~

363759209 发表于 2014-8-23 22:19
亲的argument写的比我好多了，没办法改啊，当范文哈~