很抱歉看到你被拒签,这种失落的感觉我懂。
下面这一段我是复制官方的。前面的回复已经很详尽了,权当给你参考下。
"In addition to a copy of your letter of acceptance from the institution or university in
Canada, please include a study plan describing clearly and in detail your proposed studies
and related activities in Canada. Your study plan must include the following:
the purpose of your studies;
your overall educational goal and how this program will enhance your employment
opportunities in your country of residence or citizenship;
your itinerary; and,
the names and addresses of any persons and institutions that you will be visiting."
感谢回复,你的建议是对的,我也觉得要加强说一下回来的羁绊,已经不同课程的。关于课程,我的专业是计算机网络,offer是Master of Telecommunication and Information Security。 然后我可以说自己对计算机网络的细分领域:网路安全更感兴趣,但是因为基础不好,自学也遇到很多困难,所以选择再读一个网络安全的master。你觉得说服力高吗?