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发表于 2009-3-4 10:49:12 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

作文小组满了。。。我3月22号的考试

能不能麻烦帮我拍一下啊~感激不尽

17 some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher.Others think that it is always better to have a teacher..Which do you prefer?

If i were asked to choose whether to learn either by myself or with a teacher,I would not hesitate to choose learn with a teacher.There are numerous reasons why I prefer learn with a teacher than by myself as my inclination,and I will explain a few of the most important ones.

The main reason for my propensity is that teacher is one of the critical aspects that ensure the systemization of study.With their sufficient practical experiences,teachers know which is the most effective way to begin a new subject,how to attact students with interest,and when they should give students a hand if students lose the direction.For instance,memorizing the literature of the writer is arduous and difficult,but teachers can help students remember this by telling them some interesting and relevant stories.By comparison,,learning by themselves just like walking in the darkness without a light to show the way.

Furthermore,studying with a teacher is interactive learning.communicating with a teacher enable us to achieve knowledge quickly.Teachers can rise questions to assess how well the students understand immediately,in turn,students can give their doubt to require the answer.In constrast,learning by themselves,students cannot receive the necessary and advisable information.Even though students have confusions about the subjects,they cannot get the answer in time,and they do not have opportunity to discuss deeply.

Last but not least,teachers bring pressure on students.If students study alone,they will easy to lose strong will to go on.However,learning with a teacher who will give some book to read or some homework to do.And you must complete the assignment by due date.In addition,teachers provide methods of studying,which have great influence on students’ further learning.when students.

From what I have discussed aboved,we may safely draw the conclusion that learning with a teacher is more effective and efficient.If I study by myself without teachers or classmates,it would be so dull.So when you want to study,do not forget to get a teacher.

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楼主要参加写作小组才会有人给你拍文

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发表于 2009-3-4 19:53:06 |只看该作者

本帖最后由奔跑蜗牛于 2009-3-4 19:54 编辑

首先说一下楼主说的满了的是1--4月小组吗
你可以参加别的啊
If i were asked to choose whether to learn either by myself or with a teacher,I would not hesitate to choose learn with a teacher.There are numerous reasons why I prefer(to) learn with a teacher than by myself as my inclination,and I will explain a few of the most important ones.(和前面的有些重复)
The main reason for my propensity is that teacher is one of the critical aspects that ensure the systemization of study.With their sufficient practical experiences,teachers know which is the most effective way to begin a new subject,how to attact students with interest,and when they should give students a hand if students lose the direction.For instance,memorizing the literature of the writer is arduous and difficult,but teachers can help students remember this by telling them some interesting and relevant stories.By comparison,,learning by themselves just like walking in the darkness without a light to show the way.

Furthermore,studying with a teacher is interactive learning.communicating with a teacher enable us to achieve knowledge quickly.Teachers can rise questions to assess how well the students understand immediately,in turn,students can give their doubt to require the answer（teachers can explan the comfuse or puzzles）.In constrast,learning by themselves,students cannot receive the necessary and advisable information.Even though students have confusions about the subjects,they cannot get the answer in time,and they do not have opportunity to discuss deeply.

Last but not least,teachers bring pressure on students.（最好把带来压力的益处也在首句说明）If students study alone,they will easy to lose strong will to go on.However,learning with a teacher who will give some book to read or some homework to do.And you must complete the assignment by（before） due date.In addition,teachers provide methods of studying,which have great influence on students’ further learning.when students.（？？）

From what I have discussed aboved,we may safely draw the conclusion that learning with a teacher is more effective and efficient.If I study by myself without teachers or classmates,it would be so dull.So when you want to study,do not forget to get a teacher

有些介词乱用，以后注意.