本帖最后由 yunvbujimo 于 2009-12-9 14:19 编辑
With the development of varied implements,we can broaden our horizon by diverse methods nowadays, like television,radio,or internet. However regardless of those fresh inventions, there is stilla large group of people hold the opinion that the traditional ways ofinformation spreading, the book, have greater effect on society. I agree thatstatment with following reasons.6 \) n5 `,R _0 h
$ v1 k, C8 J, c9 cN; Z7 `/ g$ e$ m First, it isobviously(obvious) that printedbooks have enjoyed an extraordinary status in the society for a long time. Theadvent of printed books offers human with(offer with?吗) a wonderfulmethod to save and spread thoughts and knowledge. This effect has lastedfor thousands of years, which, with no doubt, has profoundly changed oureducation form, our lives and our world. However, comparing to books,televisions are relatively new so that the impact should be relatively limited.
The higher reliability and lower cost also make booksmore available for most of people. The characters in a book could stain(这是什么意思?) for a quite long time,which enable people the possibility to refer to it once they have questions.Contrary to that, the information provided by the television is quitetransient, which deprive of the possibility to review.(时间短跟不能复习因果关系貌似不太直接,可以说时间短学到的东西少,再说复习是不是可以看重播呢?) In addition, thehigher cost of a television set disables many people, especially the peoplecoming from undeveloped countries, to gain information from it. As a result, abook is much cheaper and can be read over and over again, as well as passedfrom person to person, which meets the requirements of a excellent access toknowledge.
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It should be admitted that a TV program appears much moreactive and interesting than a book, but the influence of book should also (去掉好点)not be ignored.Despite of the great contributions done by books in passing down our ancestors'thoughts and wisdom, printed books are still affecting our world greatly. (这段有点不太像结尾,跟前两端说的内容不太同,是不是另一个分论点呢?)
第一次改作文。。。。语言方面我实在没什么挑错的地方,因为我这方面也有问题,楼主用词方面很好, 只能找点论述方面的问题。。。。评的有问题 可以一起讨论一下 |