Argument写作入门-开头段第一步：梳理结论、论据

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argument 1
1.抄写原题：
Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village acrossed the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

2.列出结论：
Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

3.列出论据：
a. Archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village acrossed the Brim River from Palea.
b. The ancient Paleans could have crossed the Brim River only by boat and no Palean boats have been found.

4.写出开头段的一部分，概括原题中的结论和主要论据：
It was believed that the woven baskets characterized by a particular distincitive pattern have been made only by the Palean people. However, the archaologists' new discovery of a "Palean" basket in Lithos leads to a different conclusion. As there were no Palean boats been found and Lithos is unreachable to the Paleans bacause of a deep and broad river, the conclusion is that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

改：
The author concludes that the woven baskets which were believed to have been made only by the Palean people were not uniquely Palean.The archaologists dicovers such a "Palean" basket in Lithos. The deep and broad river between Lithos and Palea makes Lithos unreachable to the Palean people. Plus, no Palean boats have been found.

argument2:
1.抄写原题：
The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a scientific journal.
"A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's level of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels, as do their younger siblings. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations(such as the return of a parent after an abscence). The study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol than did those who had had several offspring "

2.列出结论
A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's level of stimulation.

3.列出论据
a.The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels, as do their younger siblings.
b.Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situations(such as the return of a parent after an abscence).
c.The study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol than did those who had had several offspring

4.写出开头段的第一部分，概括原题中的结论和主要论据。
According to the author, a recent study shows the effects of birth order on an individual's level of stimulation. The study points out that firstborn infant monkeys produce more hormone cortisol than their siblings and so do human. Also, the study found that first-time mother monkeys had relatively higher corisol.

//感觉还是同义转换很难啊，第二个argue的开头部分完全就抄原题了。。。


argument 8
1.抄写完整原题

The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham college.

"To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. Moreover, the average rent for an apartment in our town has risen in recent years. Consequently, students will find it increasingly difficult to afford off-campus housing. Finally, attractive new dormitories would make prospective students more likely to enroll at Buckingham."

2.列出结论
To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories.

3.列出论据
a.Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate.
b.Moreover, the average rent for an apartment in our town has risen in recent years. Consequently, students will find it increasingly difficult to afford off-campus housing.
c.Finally, attractive new dormitories would make prospective students more likely to enroll at Buckingham.

4.写出开头段的第一部分，概括原题中的结论和主要论据。
According to the director, Buckingham College should construct some new dormitories to serve the housing needs of the students. To corroborate this argument, the director mentions the current tendency of the college's growing enrollment and the rising average rent for an apartment. Plus, the director points out attractive new dormitories would appeal more applicants to the college.  

//果然，我同义转换还是差的太远

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zsczsl 发表于 2015-1-8 06:27
练习一

抄写完整原题

感觉真是相当擅长换一种和原题不同的说法来叙述论据和结论，好棒！

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