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发表于 2010-8-7 16:09:24 |显示全部楼层 |倒序浏览
第一次写,请狠批!!  (等级太低,不能上传附件,见谅)

8月7日作业 BY  zyxr90
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.

In the current tough world we have to face, reluctantly, some hard-to-make judgment, among which is the question about whether students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in university. Devoted advocates of disagreement are those people who hold their idea that part-time jobs can bring some money to them. On the contrary, there are also some people, including me, capture the opinion in their minds that it is unnecessary to take part-time jobs, especially for university students.

First of all, it is obvious that students must spend much time on those jobs, and it will have a bad influence on study and life. For instance, my friend Tom, who had taken several jobs in university period, is very compunction in doing it since he is too busy to study. So he has neither a good academic record nor a happiness life in his collage, all of things he has is just exhaustion. In contrast, if he has no jobs, he can concentrate on his science research and enjoy a pleasurable campus life.

In the second place, it has minor effect on finding works after graduate. Since students want to take part-time jobs just because they think it has some advantages for obtain employment. But the jobs that they can find are none association with their major. So the experience they gained through the part-time jobs how to help them?

Yet, each coin has two sides. While we are enjoying the life in university, simultaneously, it may also bring some slight malice effects. The university is so expensive, and it may cause financial issues.

In conclusion, despite the fact that to take part-time jobs does provide some money, the advantages of it easily surpass the minor default when we take the view to scan the whole event. Thus, I support the idea that students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities. Additionally, in order to figure out the financial issues, the scholarship is the best choice.
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8月10日作业 BY zyxr90
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.

Currently with the development of the globalization, bringing to our attention in the process a lot of movies and TV programs which come from other countries. So here is a question, is it true movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. Some people agree to this opinion argue that it is easier to understand. This idea is strongly opposed by numerous people, including me, who hold the attitude that we can obtain a broader world outlook from other culture and learn plenty of knowledge.

First of all, movies and TV programs made in other countries are interesting too, and we can get a deeper understanding of the society around us from them in some degree. For example, I had saw a move named The Shawshank Redemption, the smile in Andy’s face, the happiness when he get away from the prison in the movie, give me a different inspire that I have never feel.

In the second place, we can learn a lot of knowledge from the movies and TV programs made in other countries. They give us a chance to realize the world, and learn other cultures. For instance, a lot of people come to understand that what is American life from a TV program named Friends. What’s more, it can also help us to study. For me, who want to study abroad, and the foreign movies and TV programs can practise my English.

Nevertheless, movies and TV programs made in our own country are easy to comprehend, and we can see some familiar star which we like.

In conclusion, despite the fact that foreign movies and TV programs does provide some inconvenience, the advantage of it easily surpass the minor default the when we take the view to scan the whole Picture. Thus, I support the idea that it is not true movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life

There is a public debate nowadays about that whether it is indispensable to make sure other people, especially influential people or your employers, know about your strengths and accomplishments if you want to have a successful life. Some people disagree to this idea. But this opinion is strongly argued by numerous people, including me, who hold the attitude that it is essential to let your boss know about your strengths and accomplishments because it can help you.

First of all, it will make a deep impression on your employers if you let them know about your ability. When you come to the company first, there is no one realize you since they want you just depend on your achievement in the university. So there is no thing will be gave to you, although you are accomplished in your job. But, if you show your talent to your boss, everything is possible. For instance, my friend Tom who is a freshman in a multinational company, have grasp every chance which can project himself. Then he gets a success in a short time.

Second, your employers will put you in an important position if they were realized you are a competent person. For example, my company had faced with an emergency, and nobody could find a solution but me. I have become a vital people just following him after that.

Nevertheless, assert yourself may be get jealousness from a few people, but it is inevitable.

In conclusion, despite the fact that make sure other people, especially influential people or your employers, know about your strengths and accomplishments provide some inconvenience, the advantage of it easily surpass the minor default when we take the view to scan the whole Picture. Thus, I support the idea that
it is indispensable to make sure other people, especially influential people or your employers, know about your strengths and accomplishments if you want to have a successful life.
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哎,这作文怎么办啊,写的太烂了
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