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In the current tough world we have to face, reluctantly, some hard-to-make? judgment, among which is the question about whether students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in university. Devoted advocates of disagreement are those people who hold their idea that part-time jobs can bring some money to them. On the contrary, there are also some people, including me, capture the opinion in their minds that it is unnecessary to take part-time jobs, especially for university students.
First of all, it is obvious that students must spend much time on those jobs, and it will have a bad influence on study and life.最好再阐述一两句再举例 For instance, my friend Tom, who had taken several jobs in university period, is very compunction in doing it since he is too busy to study. So he has neither a good academic record nor a happiness life in his collage, all of things he has is just exhaustion. In contrast, if he has no jobs, he can concentrate on his science research and enjoy a pleasurable campus life.
In the second place, it has minor effect on finding works after graduate graduation. Since students want to take part-time jobs just because they think it has some advantages for obtain? employment. But the jobs that they can find are none association with their major. So the experience they gained through the part-time jobs how to help them? 这样没问题吗?
Yet, each coin has two sides. While we are enjoying the life in university, simultaneously, it may also bring some slight malice effects. The university is so expensive 应该是学费贵吧?, and it may cause financial issues./ ]3 n7 q9 T9 p% q
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In conclusion, despite of? the fact that to take part-time jobs does provide some money, the advantages of it easily surpass the minor default when we take the view to scan the whole event. Thus, I support the idea that students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities. Additionally, in order to figure out the financial issues, the scholarship is the best choice.
我的水平比较菜,也是刚开始写。看这楼上改得已经很详细了。
确实是 语法还需加强。
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