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本帖最后由 okqishi 于 2012-5-12 21:32 编辑
写了很久,因为感觉这个题目真的很难写。有很多点很模糊,比如great,到底什么才算great nation。还有welfare,指的是living standards,还是像加拿大那样一个完整的医疗教育系统。
写这篇文章的时候,有时自己也把自己搞糊涂了。感觉不能只赞同其中一个观点(achievements)而反对另外一个观点(general welfare),因为两个都有可取之处,但写成balanced view的话又要有好多解释。
例子也不知道用得是不是relevant。
请大家狠拍这篇文章,不管是语言上(包括标点符号,我用了很多分号,不知道有没有用对),结构上,思维上。谢谢了:)
The surest indicatorof a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers,artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Which of these defines a great nation, the achievements ofits rulers, artists and scientists, or the general welfare of its people?
I personally think that welfare, defined by societalsupport for basic housing, education and medical system, weighs more as one ofthe many indicators of a great nation, because it concerns the life of each singlecitizen of that country. Yet these two aspects are not entirely unrelated; theachievements of spectacular individuals also contribute partly to the generalwelfare, while a society with good standards of living allows artists andscientists to focus more on their career aspirations.
Admittedly, a nation’s prosperity always accompanies withgreat achievements of its rulers, artists and scientists. One who knows historywould not deny the greatness of ancient Roman Empire: there were the famouswriters such as Horace and Cicero; there were the sagacious rulers who set theRoman law, which was influential to European legal system for thousands ofyears; there were the ingenious engineers and architects who built greatconstructions such as the Colosseum. Even though there were numerous slaves whohad lived in dire conditions in Roman, we still remember the Empire as a greatnation for its contributions to modern politics, arts and science. In fact,from a historical perspective, when one is asked how he defines an ancient empire’sgreatness, his first response would probably be listing out the achievements ofits rulers, artists and scientists appearing in that era. This indicates thatpeople have unconsciously regard great achievements of spectacular individualsas one important barometer of a nation’s greatness, regardless of how we argueagainst it.
However, in modern terms, if a nation has great achievementsin these realms, yet leaves its citizens living with poor welfare, it cannotbecome, or remain as, a great nation. For example, the Soviet Union hadremarkable achievements in the space technology and weaponry in the 20thcentury; but the living standards of its average citizen lagged far behind ofthose of the average citizen of a Western state. The nation’s collapse in 1991indicated that the government’s pursuit of cutting-edge technology isdefinitely insufficient in ensuring a nation’s survival, let alone greatness.Even the Roman Empire in previous example also declined gradually due to theloss of civic virtue throughout society. If each average citizen is facingdifficulty in obtaining basic needs, on a large scale there would be a majorityof people who feel unhappy and insecure about their lives. This would damage thenation’s whole well-being and thus rule it out from the list of great nations.
Last but not least, the two indicators are influencing eachother: a nation who does well in general welfare provides a platform foraspiring artists and scientists to attain achievements, while the achievementsof political leaders contribute to the general welfare of people. If each citizenis receiving a well-financed education, he would be given opportunity todevelop his own talents and ultimately he may choose a career in arts orscience. If each citizen can easily afford housing or medical treatment byusing earnings of their own hard work, he would feel secure about his own lifeand thus concentrate more on his work to contribute to the society. On theother hand, great rulers also help in improving the welfare of its populace. Itis through the government’s good economic, diplomatic and social strategies canthe citizens be guaranteed to live in a well-protected and stable society.
In the final analysis, among a myriad of indicators whichmeasure a nation’s greatness, general welfare might be a more important onebecause it determines a nation’s general well-being. However, it is supportedand influenced by the achievements of rulers in the nation. At the same time, agood living standard also allows people to focus on arts and science developments.Altogether they make a great nation. |
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