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6.4作文----Colleges or universities should offer more courses to prepare students for the future before they


I entirely agree that colleges or universities should offer more course for students to preparing future before they enter the society and start working by following reasons.

        In first place, it can benefit the student because of with school being the last stop before they enter society, students urgently need help from the school to prepare them better for the job market. For one thing,these course can help student for making career choice due to students hardly know about what they want to do in the future. If  a universitiy offer different kinds of course ,such as Financial , Business , Technology ,wich has more detail contexts of career prospects and not just  the knowledge in textbook,  will help students clearly recognize the condition of working after they graduating .
        
        A second,it also can benefit the society-to help student make better transition from school to workerplace. Thus provide more qualified workers with both need skills and mental readiness-improve the productivity of the society.It is clear that students who abundance of working experience as a result failure in working place even can not find a job is a usual situation in present So,colleges and universities should offer more social practice courses, internship working and contact with big companies for sutdents to gather experience.

        Third, it can benefit the school. If a school's graduates can find ideal jobs,this will boost the school's reputation among its potential applicants,and can thus attract better students. For example: the statistical data shows that colleges and universities which has these course for student to prepare future with applications high than  the normal universities among the colleges that have equal University rankings. Hence, an excellent example that student get job from famous company also can be a symbol on the university's reputation .to attract more better students.
        
In conclution, those course not only can help students but also are beneficial to colleges and society .So l totally agree with this opinion.

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When we talk about how take care of our family better ,make them happy ,health, comfortable is first thing we think about . Thus, whether live in rural area or a big city for looking after our parents and children is an issue open to debate.In my opinion,living in cities to taking care of our family  is better than live in rural area.
     The social facilities includes that  high quality of medicare and social security ,it can help people take their parents of better. Because advance in medical technology in cities can make it possible for old people to live longer .In addition, many Elderly care facilities developed by government supporting offer sick care and daylily-life care for old people who can't take themselves of well. Furthermore, well established legal system in cities,such as endowment insurance system and pension insurance fund is more complete than in rural area. if old people's late-life in cities, they do not worry about being sick and cost of medical  too much.
      Easy communication with family members is another advantage in cities. Compare with a rural area without telephone or internet, more convenient method in cities like mobile phone ,online chatting , to communicate with our family when emergency .For another ,public transit also a fast way to visit our relitive or take children to school, because  many different means of transportation such as magnetically-levitated trains,subway, bus, taxi couldn't appear in poor rural areas.Thus,we are more close to our family members in big cities.
     I admit there may be have some advantage of taking care family in rural area.Because nice environment with  fresh air, streams through in font of your house,no noise pollution and traffic jam,it can help people relax and good for our health.Even so, going on a journey or visiting our family still spent a very  long time because of terrible transportation facilities.
     In conclusion, i would agree with people who live in the city can take care of their family better than people live in rural area.

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6.2独立写作---------[bDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now are easier to become educated than in the past.]


There are some main reasons for agreeing with the statement that people now access to education easily and it is convenient for people to study than in the past.

In the past,only man has the right to receive education and achieve the success in studies. Fortunately, during the past two decades, the education of women has been booming in practically all countries，which means a level playing field with respect to education has been established.  "For example: since  the founding of the People’s Republic of China in 1949, women have been encouraged into education and careers and instilled with a strong work ethic.What's more,the government has support the programme financially to help people from poor family to become educated.This is a way to broke the traditional concept: only nobility or wealthy family can enjoy the right of receiving education.


On the other hand,the diversification of learning methods is another reason for people to get an education easily.For one thing,if you want to study language,internet has provided a better platform for self-learning online instead of going to the school for studying through tools like academic journals , forums or open courses,internet gives everyone the opportunity to learn or study their foreign speaking skills on an international level.For  example,many public libraries in the country also a good place,which have numbers of book for learning. People can get a wide range of information and materials about any knowledge. Anyway,  educational insititution has developed to enroll many more students than before.


In present time, income and educational achievement are related, which means with economic progressing ,people who are financially rich  can afford more training,and may find higher quality of education more available than in a past poor areas .


For above reasons, we can safely conclude that people in this age can receive education easier than in the earlier age.And i believe that the trend will be more obvious with the development of the society.

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5.30独立写作

   Happiness is not based on external status,  not wishing for what we do not have, not just having lots of money in our hand.That's my understanding of the word"happniess".Thus,i think  that even the world has changed fast， ,people  can not say happier than before.


  Psycological studies suggest that  the result of the  social investigation in some economically developed cities shows the lower levels of happiness.At the same time ，according to the statistics，the incidence of depression in nowadays   is ten times than in the past and an decreasing age at onset of depression has been observed attributable to cases.“Why we are getting richer and still unhappy？”This is a question not only in  China ,but also all of the world.  


    Modern society development is rapid, the life rhythm of people is faster and faster, the lifestyle of people also is changing sadly .People are too anxious is the mainly cause of the lower levels of happiness.They worry about housing purchase ,education for their children, the burden of  old-age pension or  much working pressure, even dealing with the problem of getting along with friends and colleagues  be the cause of press.Furthermore,  eagerness not only for money but also for pleasure drags people too much; some can overcome these desires, others can not.In this materialistic society,  the outside world there are too many temptations.You bought  a house then want to a bigger,you got a job then want to a better, you have money then you want to more.But happiness is not just depend on external statusIf desire full of your heart,  happiness  will slip away.

To sum it up, people along with huge pressure and big desire，they are less happy  is certainly clear .Even though living standards have improve，the scientific and technological level  have raise .With the economic development,  people truly get more than past, but it is not replace that  happiness has promote.