[口语小组]天薇凉的口语作业帖

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1.语速方面，task1挺好的，task2稍快
2.发音吐字清晰，表意明确。个别词没有听清，task 1中secondly，doctors ？？great responsibility to their patients
3.内容方面，task 1第二点是说doctors owe great responsibility to the patients，理由是adore the doctors who treat illness carefully以及doctors who work on operation for hours，个人认为理由并没有很好地支持论点，建议例子最好是举doctors怎么样undertake their responsibility之类的
task2第二点，when students go to college they have to communicate with people all over the world和后面的so they can learn how to communicate with people through part time jobs的关联性貌似不是很强，建议把两者的关系说得更明确一些；还有建议顺序调过来——students learn how to communicate through part time jobs so that it will benefit their life in college，这样更能扣住题目的问题

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天薇凉 发表于 2013-5-15 17:32
assignment for 5.15
谢谢斑竹的辛勤工作~
Task 1. What do you think about the fact that Rob ...

1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰，语音语调好。有个别词不确定我挺对没，ocean exploration还是ocean explosion？,previously require
3.表意明确。挑一个小小的语法错误，task 1的requires people together work应该是requires people working together吧，虽说语法不是考察重点，但是明显的语法错误还是不要犯
4.内容方面没什么可挑剔的

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