被删题目：Most of the people we consider heroic today were,i

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“Most of the people we consider heroic today were,in fact, very ordinary people who happened to be in the right place at the right time.”(孙远书上的38题)

People who perceived as heros,as known to us all,should have made certain great achievements or some significant contributions conducive to the society before they receive such a honorable name.While a question arouses:with what preconditions these people become heros and what are the paticular mutual charateristics belong to them comparing with the majority of common people?.An old saying that ‘it is the time that makes a hero’reflect that that people happened to be in right place at right time is a momentous essence to generate a hero.What’s more,I think that heros themselves have extraordinary abilities and talents which is superior to ordinary people is a  more important necessity.
  Admittedly,a lot of elites attain people’s respect and honor in the right place at right time,otherwise they would not have been so outstanding.For example,an apple falling down from an apple tree to the ground set Newton into thinking and finally he proposed the famous theory of gravity of the earth ,which,to some extent,is a matter of coincidence. Supposed that he had not stayed in the place where that apple were falling,then it was very likely that not Newton but other
scientist at first time formulated that famous thoery.Also,newton might not have achieved so great accomplishment in his field had he been born on the day when the thoery of gravity of the earth and his other mechanics theories had already found out by others.Consequently,a certain person may turn to be a hero in one century while he may not have any contributions if he lived in another century.the situation is similar when referring to change the right place.
  However,is it the mere condition that people happen to be in a right place at the right time directly lead the outcome of a hero?The answer is certainly negative.If this were true,anyone those who had ever had the experience of seeing an apple’s falling in the period exactly same as when Newton lived would have become famous ,since they were in the just place and time like Newton was.Undoubtfully,it is ridiculous and unconvincing.The reason why these people could not be distinguished is that they are not Newton who has much more talents of creativity,thougtfulness,meditation and more important intelligence,with which he can think more carefully and deeply and then gets more information which is indispensable to his conclusion.so apart from owning a extraordinary intelligence,it will be very difficult to go access to success and become a eminet person.Furthermore,Having a intellegent talent is more important than meeting suitable opportunity for with the former people can seek the right chance more easily and efficiently.It is the people that clinch the opportunity activately rather than the opportunity comes to you spontaneously.
   In conclusion,most hero or great people are those who have acute insight to seize opportunities
at right time and in right place and meanwhile show great potence in his field of contribution.Neither of the two aspects can produce a hero solely.

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