2009美利坚作文 9.4

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

The passage demonstrates that fewer Americans read literature will bring dire consequence for the American culture and society. However, the speaker casts doubts in the lecture with more details and evidence.

To begin with, the author mentions that people would be influenced by literature in their minds and feelings. Hence, it brings the perspective that people should choose what they prefer to read instead of only literature books. As humans with different characters will have distinctive reading material, for instance, some may like fiction and others may not; but cannot prove that they are lack of interests in literature.

The passages argue that culture level of the nation will decrease if fewer people have interest in reading literature. The speaker refutes that presently the American culture is blooming and expending. People may develop their culture by watching TV program or films. In modern society, people have more choices and should not be limited in literature.

Finally, even if fewer Americans read literature books, the writers in this field should be responsible for this situation. The reason is that what they wrote is hard for people to comprehend, which leads to the losing of literature readers. Nevertheless, the lecture totally refutes the main views of the reading passages.

goback211UID: 2419259

The passage demonstrates that fewerAmericans read literature will bring dire consequence for(是用for么，我也不是很清楚) the American culture andsociety. However, the speaker casts doubts in the lecture with more details andevidence.
To begin with, the author mentions thatpeople would be influenced by literature in their minds and feelings. Hence, it brings the perspective that people shouldchoose what they prefer to read instead of only literature books(这个不是listening里面的么). As humans with different characters will have distinctive readingmaterial, for instance, some may like fiction and others may not; but cannotprove that they are lack of interests in literature.(我怎么觉得不是这个意思)
The passages argue that culture level ofthe nation will decrease if fewer people have interest in reading literature.The speaker refutes that presently the American culture is blooming and expending(expanding). People may develop their cultureby watching TV program or films. In modern society, people have more choicesand should not be limited in literature. (很好)
Finally, even if fewer Americans readliterature books, the writers in this field should be responsible for thissituation. The reason is that what they wrote is hard for people to comprehend,which leads to the losing of literature readers. Nevertheless(这个怎么是转折呢), the lecture totally refutesthe main views of the reading passages.（这段最好提一下reading，哪怕就半句话）
写的不错，能把听力的句子转换成自己的句子，而且句型用的很好。
最后加个总结就好了

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

对的, 怎么是转折..应该是因此的..咳..就20分都反应不过来 2# goback211

volksrenUID: 2189399

The passage demonstrates that fewer Americans read literature will bring dire consequence for the American culture and society. However, the speaker casts doubts in（学习了~） the lecture with more details and evidence.

To begin with, the author mentions that people would be influenced by literature in their minds and feelings. Hence, it brings the perspective that people should choose what they prefer to read instead of only literature books. As humans with different characters will have distinctive reading material, for instance, some may like fiction and others may not; but cannot prove that they are lack of interests in literature.（这段话好像不是这个意思，应该是我们社会整体的思考能力不会下降，因为我们有除了literature以外的东西去读）

The passages argue that culture level of the nation will decrease if fewer people have interest in reading literature. The speaker refutes that presently the American culture is blooming and expending(expanding). People may develop their culture by watching TV program or films. In modern society, people have more choices and should not be limited in literature.5 M5 k# p8 o7 w" E
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Finally, even if fewer Americans read literature books, the writers in this field should be responsible for this situation. The reason is that what they wrote is hard for people to comprehend, which leads to the losing of literature readers. Nevertheless（应该是in sum之类的吧）, the lecture totally refutes the main views of the reading passages.

总的来说，lady姐文采不错，学习了很多词汇的用法。然后，第一个观点的听力上有小的疏漏。