进军美利坚作文-Mia

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It has been and always been a hot topic about which is more important for success good looks and dresses or good ideas. Many people consistently emphasize the later is more important, but(别用这么强的转折，however, nevertheless) for me, good looks and dresses actually play a more critical role in nowadays because services industry is core business of the society.

First, good looks and dresses present professional work, and they bring people more convenience which do help people get success. This point view is practical in various fields. Take a restaurant called “Grandmother’s Kitchen” as an example. The same like other western food café, Grandmother Kitchen serves the same food as sandwich, pizza, salad and so forth. But why Grandmother Kitchen is one of the most popular restaurants here in Beijing?(这种问句不怎么好啊。 The success of the Grandmother Kitchen becomes a mystery, which many people pursue an answer) According to a survey conducted by Review magazine, 80% customers think the smile and suitable clothes of the waiters/ waitresses make them feel at home. In contrast, some other cafes which try to attract customers by so-called innovation can not(cannot) keep popular due to lacking a comfortable atmosphere.

Second, good idea is important, but it will only be helpful when it is practical and can be done with good execution(and good execution is still necessary). We human never lack of good ideas, but only few of them are practical and can be conducted well. Everyone works in the event agency must always attend internal brainstorms. Good ideas were generated almost every 5 minutes, but most of them are denied by tight budget or unpractical, and finally we follow the routine process to prepare a project.

In addition, good idea even ruins one’s success sometimes. I knew one story about this. Once a foreign designer was asked to design a hotel in a Moslem country, he really did a very great job with creative ideas. But he was banished and forbidden to go that country any more. The consequence was not understood by many people. A lawyer finally unlocked the secret: the designer offended one of the Moslem taboos which is fatal.

In conclusion, good looks and dresses are more important than good ideas. I do not deny the importance of ideas, but to some extent, it needs more other factors help to make people achieve success, while, the former is an independent element

其实我觉得写两个理由就好了，多了先不完，而且不够深入

wawabjUID: 2536676

10.2作业
To solve the problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past

People always argue whether it is necessary to understand the past when solving the problems present and future. Some think life changes, society is developed, to know the past is not that useful. However, in my opinion, there is always a connection between the past and the present, to learn more about the past the history will be very helpful when handling problems.

First, knowing more about the past helps people have a whole picture about the situation, which makes problems can be controlled and solved easily. That’s why people always do a lot of homework and investigations before they start addressing issues. Take my Uncle Alex’s experience as an example. Alex was appointed to help realize
informatization in a small city of west China. When he was first there, he was shocked for nobody seemed interest in computer or internet even these young students, and this problem became a big obstacle for Alex to fulfill his duty. After talking with many citizens including teachers, students and others, Alex found there was a big misunderstanding about computer- computer will lead to cancer. One man has died of that. Finding out the final problem, Alex started publicizing the advantage of computer and cleared the misunderstanding. Situation got better.

Second, the past the history is a wonderful resource which provides us numerous experiences and intelligence, which makes us easy to handle problems. Everyone who learned philosophy must know that things presented variously actually own the same nature. As a result, once we know how to deal with one of them, it would not be a problem to solve others. Apparently, our ancestors left us lot of lessons about that. That’s why history is so important, and it has been a required course in every country. What’s more, some of them even organized their knowledge into a book, like “The Art of War” which is popular among the world.

In a conclusion, obviously, the past which is the accumulation of facts and lessons not only helps solve the problems but also teach people to deal with it in a better way. Just like Alex’s example, what if he didn’t try to learn about the past but just forcing people to use computer?

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

lIt has been and always been a hot topic about which is more important for success:加个分号 good looks and dresses or good ideas. Many people consistently emphasize the later is more important, but for me, good looks and dresses actually play a more critical role in nowadays because services industry is core business of the society.哇人不可貌相..开头不错很简洁也很点题.

First, good looks and dresses present professional work, and they bring people more convenience which do help people get success. This point view is practical in various fields. Take a restaurant called “Grandmother’s Kitchen” as an example. The same like other western food café, Grandmother Kitchen serves the same food as sandwich, pizza, salad and so forth. But why Grandmother Kitchen is one of the most popular restaurants here in Beijing? According to a survey conducted by Review magazine, 80% customers think the smile--service比较合适吧 and suitable clothes of the waiters/ waitresses make them feel they are at home. In contrast, some other cafes which try to attract customers by so-called innovation can not keep popular due to lacking a comfortable atmosphere.

Second, good idea is important, but it will only be helpful when it is practical and can be done with good execution. We human never lack of good ideas, but only few of them are practical and can be conducted well这个好. Everyone works in the event agency啥子地方 must always attend internal brainstorms. Good ideas were generated almost every 5 minutes, but most of them are denied by tight budget or unpractical, and finally we follow the routine process to prepare a projec

ddition, good idea even ruins one’s success sometimes. I knew one story about this. Once a foreign designer was asked to design a hotel in a Moslem country, he really did a very great job with creative ideas. But he was banished and forbidden to go that country any more. The consequence was not understood by many people. A lawyer finally unlocked the secret: the designer offended one of the Moslem taboos which is fatal.这个段落貌似跟题目不搭配. 你再看看..也没怎么提到good idea的问题, 只是说明设计师水平不错, 穆斯林太小气.
In conclusion, good looks and dresses are more important than good ideas. I do not deny the importance of ideas, but to some extent, it needs more other factors help to make people achieve success, while, the former is an independent element. 第一次改mia的作文, 语言很简练,我喜欢,读着舒服. 有些表达很好的. 内容不够强度. PS. 我昨天写作文时候到最后基本是一边睡觉一边写.困不行了, 你很厉害哇就读出了我赶着写.

joyceliuUID: 2477232

Peoplealways argue whether it is necessary to understand the past whensolving the problems present and future. Some think life changes,society is developed, to know the past is not that useful. However, inmy opinion, there is always a connection between the past and thepresent, to learn more about the past the history will be very helpfulwhen handling problems.
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2 ?3 {) L6 R$ i, j& |9 HFirst,knowing more about the past helps people have a whole picture about thesituation, which makes problems can be controlled and solved easily.That’s why people always do a lot of homework and investigations beforethey start addressing issues. Take my Uncle Alex’s experience as anexample. Alex was appointed to help realize
6 o" e4 g! M$ w; a+ E6 Tinformatizationin a small city of west China. When he was first there, he was shockedfor (by the fact that )nobody seemed interest in computer or internet even these(those) youngstudents, and this problem became a big obstacle for Alex to fulfillhis duty. After talking with many citizens including teachers, studentsand others, Alex found there was a big misunderstanding about computer-computer will lead to cancer. Just since One man has died of that before. Finding out thefinal(oringinal) problem, Alex started publicizing the advantage of computer andcleared the misunderstanding. Situation got better. (Eventually, people began to aware that computer is a beneficial instead of detrimental to their daily lives.)+ q! j  L. L4 ], ^( [6 L

1 v8 s7 d! X; P( ?$ E1 H$ mSecond,the past the history is a wonderful resource which provides us numerousexperiences and intelligence, which makes us easy to handle problems.Everyone who learned philosophy must know that things presentedvariously actually own the same nature. As a result, once we know howto deal with one of them, it would not be a problem to solve others.Apparently, our ancestors left us lot(lots) of lessons about that. That’s whyhistory is so important, and it has been a required course in everycountry. What’s more, some of them even organized their knowledge intoa book, like “The Art of War” which is popular among the world. 5 H; n' e/ H+ b. e: j
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In aconclusion, obviously, the past which is the accumulation of facts andlessons not only helps solve the problems but also teach people to dealwith it in a better way. Just like Alex’s example, what if he didn’ttry to learn about the past but just forcing people to use computer?

joyceliuUID: 2477232

可以这样用么？the past the history

wawabjUID: 2536676

entertain movie 还是serious movie好
（补之前的作业）


Along with the development of society, we get more choices to spend our leisure time: traveling, doing exercise, reading books, watching movies. In recent years, movies especially become a very popular method for people to enjoy their life. While, there are many kinds of movies: entertain movie, serious movie, horrible movie and so forth. For me, I prefer the entertain movie because it can help me well relaxed.

First of all, the major reason for me to watch movie is trying to get rid of the pressure, have a moment for relaxation. Compared to serious movie, the entertain one will bring us more fun. In the modern life, there is a great improvement for our life. However, accompanying the raised quality of life, the high competence is everywhere. Every day, from the morning to the afternoon, we work hard to prove our value and fight for a higher goal. Working over time is so common. As a result, once there is a time for rest, it should be the time for release our pressure. I agree these meaningful serious movies do make us learn something, but what we want for the spare time is to relax. With the big laughers, the troubles, the pressures can be left ways at least for one moment.

Second, entertain films are always full of interesting things which effectively helped us have fun, and make us not bored by the business society. According to a survey conducted by a lifestyle magazine, nowadays a similar thought happens to many people: the older we are, the fewer interesting things we can feel. Therefore, we do need some entertainment to make up for the blank. Entertain movies turn out to be the easiest and cheapest method to everybody. I still remember a movie called “Baby’s day out”, it was very interesting, and even made my parents laugh a lot.

To sum up, both serious movie and entertain movie are useful for their own roles. But for us, who live under heavy pressure with keen competent, entertain movie will be a better choice to give us a space to take a deep breath and a rest.

doubledianUID: 2661760

10.2作业
To solve the problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past
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People always argue whether it is necessary to understand the past when solving the problems present and future. Some think life changes，society is developed, to know the past is not that useful. However, in my opinion, there is always a connection between the past and the present, to learn more about the past the history will be very helpful when handling problems.
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First, knowing more about the past helps people have a whole picture about the situation, which makes problems can（can提前或者去掉） be controlled and solved easily. That’s why people always do a lot of homework（work比较好） and investigations before they start addressing issues. Take my Uncle Alex’s experience as an example. Alex was appointed to help realize. T0 O" Q9 Q/ U3 d0 o1 Y
informatization（拼错了吧） in a small city of west China. When he was first there, he was shocked for（是by吧） nobody seemed interest in computer or internet even these young students, and this problem became a big obstacle for Alex to fulfill his duty. After talking with many citizens including teachers, students and others, Alex found there was a big misunderstanding about computer- computer will lead to cancer. One man has died of that. Finding out the final problem, Alex started publicizing the advantage of computer and cleared the misunderstanding. Situation got better. 9 Z. k; a3 p. L
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Second, the past the history（这地方有点别扭，是in the past the history吧，不太懂） is a wonderful resource which provides us numerous experiences and intelligence, which makes us easy to handle problems. Everyone who learned philosophy must know that things presented variously actually own the same nature. As a result, once we know how to deal with one of them, it would not be a problem to solve others. Apparently, our ancestors left us lot of lessons about that. That’s why history is so important, and it has been a required course in every country. What’s more, some of them even organized their knowledge into a book, like “The Art of War” which is popular among the world. 8 Y% D$ B7 m7 W# K0 g
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In a conclusion, obviously, the past which is the accumulation of facts and lessons not only helps solve the problems but also teach people to deal with it in a better way. Just like Alex’s example, what if he didn’t try to learn about the past but just forcing people to use computer?

wawabjUID: 2536676

The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. Do you agree or disagree?

Along with the rapid development of the society, environment gets worse and worse. It became a hot topic on every significant summit of the leaders. Meanwhile, many individuals are also fighting for their whole life to solve this problem. However, in my opinion, this issue is too complex for them. We should cooperate with government or other organizations address the environment issue together.

First, to solve environmental issue requires large amount of resources including technology, budget, expertise and so forth. Nevertheless, each of these elements is not easy for individual to afford. Thus we need an organization to handle this problem. Take the air pollution as an example. There are many methods to help address this problem, like planting trees, regular the toxic air piped by the factory, limit the trees’ cutting and so forth. Except planting, it’s hard for individuals to take any other actions. Even about planting, organizations will work more effectively than our individuals. With the help of helicopters, millions of seeds can be spread every day. Comparing to that, with our individual own wealth, it’s pretty clear the rather small amount of trees we can buy and plant.

Second, to solve the environmental issue needs solve the problem from the original reasons which actually is increasing our human being’s awareness about protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. Thus education plays an important role to help people realize the harmful consequence of environmental problems. Nowadays, many individuals are taking efforts to educate citizens, however due to the scope and management, the effects are limited. But if we cooperate with government and make this lesson as a regular course for students, I’m sure the situation will be different.

To sum up, it is our duty to prevent the homeland from becoming a desert. We should work with the government or other organizations to address the current issues and avoid new problems generating. Through the education, law enforcement, professional technology and so forth, the issues will finally be solved.

LRXSSUID: 2695903

Along with the rapid development of the society, environment getsis getting worse and worse. It became a hot topic on every significant(感觉多余  峰会本来就是领导人本来就很重要) summit of the leaders conferenceMeanwhile, many individuals are also fighting for their whole life to solve this problemsolving this problem in their lifetime .However, in my opinion, this issue is too complex for them. We should cooperate with government or other organizations to address the environment issue together.
First, to solve environmental issue requires large amount of resources including technology, budget, expertise and so forth（感觉include 可以改下  include 一般只举一两个例子）. Nevertheless, each of these elements is not easy for individual to afford. Thus we need an organization to handle this problem. Take the air pollution as an example. There are many methods to help address this problem, like planting trees, regular regularing the toxic air piped by the factory, limit limiting the trees’ cutting and so forth. Except planting Besides, it’s hard for individuals to take any other actions. Even about planting, organizations will work more effectively than our individuals. With the help of helicopters, millions of seeds can be spread every day. Comparing to that, with our individual own wealth, it’s pretty clear the rather small amount of trees we can buy and plant.
Second, to solve the environmental issue needs solve the problem from the original reasons which actually is increasing our human being’s awareness aboutthat protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. Thus education plays an important role to help in helping people realize the harmful consequence of environmental problems. Nowadays, many individuals are taking efforts to educate citizens, however due to the scope and management, the effects are limited. But if we cooperate with government and make this lesson as a regular course for students, I’m sure the situation will be different.
To sum up, it is our duty to prevent the homeland from becoming a desert. We should work with the government or other organizations to address the current issues and avoid new problems generating. Through the education, law enforcement, professional technology and so forth, the issues will finally be solved.

结尾结的好  我只有一句话  汗  看来 托福作文要比高中作文写的多得多

wawabjUID: 2536676

104作业
Agree or disagree: it is more important to have the rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to work and school.

It’s has always been a controversial topic about the rules of employees’ clothing. Even companies have build up related strict disciplines, people still keep complaining, and argue that these rules make them uncomfortable. However, to my point view, the rules actually bring us more benefits rather than the inconvenience.

First, besides looks, clothing is the only factor effect people’s judgment at the first look. It represents both our professional skill and even the corporate image. Thus, rules on clothing will help us build a good impression at the beginning, which is also proved to be important in our daily life. Take the bidding for a new client as an example. Suitable dresses always help agencies get more advantage. Once our client shard their experience with us about how they choosing a vendor, he told us, those in jeans and t-shirts were the first to be washed out. These casual dresses showed that they did not value the chance to work together, as a result, he lost the confidence to do the business with them.

Second, due to the long-term regulation of clothing in some industries, this tradition has build up a trust-worthy relationship, which illustrated the importance of the clothing rules. Take the uniform as an example. Government has a discipline on the officer’s wearing. Policeman, soldiers, doctor and so forth. By these clothes, our populace can easy to figure out whom they should ask help from and what kind of help they can get. Apparently, these uniforms bring us a lot of convenience. Meanwhile, the position and role these clothes represented will help these officers to do their job.

To sum up, it’s necessary and important to have some rules on the clothes. Although, jeans and t-shirts can make us feel more comfortable, the special requirements on our dress actually help us gain more trust and work more efficiently.

lupiscesUID: 2231942

103作业

E* g+ z* ?( o6 i 4 P, x; F9 `& m5 D* W Along with the rapid development of the society, environment gets worse and worse. It became a hot topic on every significant summit of the leaders(我们都用了summit 好默契). Meanwhile, many individuals are also fighting for their whole life to solve this problem. However, in my opinion, this issue is too complex for them. We should cooperate with government or other organizations to address the environment issue together. First, to solve environmental issue requires large amount of resources including technology, budget, expertise and so forth. Nevertheless, each of these elements is not easy for individual to afford. Thus we need an organization to handle this problem. Take the air pollution as an example. There are many methods to help address this problem, like planting trees, regular（regulate） the toxic air piped by the factory, limit the trees’ cutting and so forth. Except planting, it’s hard for individuals to take any other actions. Even about planting, organizations will work more effectively than our individuals. With the help of helicopters, millions of seeds can be spread every day. Comparing to that, with our individual own wealth, it’s pretty clear the rather small amount of trees we can buy and plant. # l% L1 m% C- W3 R Second, to solve the environmental issue needs solve the problem from the original reasons which actually is increasing our human being’s awareness about 应该是that protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.（这句话开始说的不太好） Thus education plays an important role to help people realize the harmful consequence of environmental problems. Nowadays, many individuals are taking efforts to educate citizens, however due to the scope and management, the effects are limited. But if we cooperate with government and make this lesson as a regular course for students, I’m sure the situation will be different. To sum up, it is our duty to prevent the homeland from becoming a desert. We should work with the government or other organizations to address the current issues and avoid new problems generating. （good！！）Through the education, law enforcement, professional technology and so forth, the issues will finally be solved. 最后一句不如再直接点题，说下individual不行？ 其实我不觉得你作文很口语啊，其实还不错啊。 或者用一些长一点的单词，感觉可能就比较正式？

kimtopUID: 2375291

It’s has always been a controversial topic about the rules of employees’ clothing. Even though companies have build(built) up related(relevant) strict disciplines, people still keep complaining, and argue that these rules make them uncomfortable. However, to(in)[/b] my point (of) view, the rules actually bring us more benefits rather(rather 去掉) than the inconvenience.
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First, besides looks, clothing is the only factor (加上that) effect（s） people’s judgment at the first look. It represents both our professional skill and even（去掉） the corporate image. Thus, rules on clothing will help us build a good impression at the beginning, which is also proved to be important in our daily life. Take the bidding for a new client as an example. Suitable dresses always help agencies get more advantage. Once our client shard their experience with us about how they choosing（choose） a vendor, he told us, those in jeans and t-shirts were the first to be washed out. These casual dresses showed that they did not value the chance to work together, as a result, he（指代不明） lost the confidence to do the business with them.
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Second, due to the long-term regulation of clothing in some industries, this tradition has built up a trust-worthy relationship, which illustrated the importance of the clothing rules. Take the uniform as an example. Government has a discipline on the officer’s wearing,　such as(否则后面这句话不通) Policeman, soldiers, doctor and so forth. By these clothes, our populace can easily to(to　去掉) figure out whom they should ask help from and what kind of help they can get. Apparently, these uniforms bring us a lot of convenience. Meanwhile, the position and role these clothes represented will help these officers to do their job.
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To sum up, it’s necessary and important to have some rules on the clothes. Although, jeans and t-shirts can make us feel more comfortable, the special requirements on our dress actually help us gain more trust and work more efficiently.

LRXSSUID: 2695903

It’s has always been a controversial topic about the rules of employees’ clothing. 感觉片面了  题目中还有school Even companies have build built up related strict disciplines, people still keep complaining, and argue that these rules make them uncomfortable. However, to in my point view, the rules actually bring us more benefits rather than the inconvenience.
First, besides looks, clothing is the only factor 感觉有点片面 用外观 appearance 比较好effect affectpeople’s judgment at the first look 感觉first impression 要好些. It represents both our professional skill and even the corporate image. Thus, rules on clothing will help us build a good impression at the beginning, which is also proved to be important in our daily life. Take the bidding for a new client as an example. Suitable dresses always help agencies get more advantage. Once our client shard share their experience with us about how they choosing choose a vendor, he told us, those in jeans and t-shirts were the first to be washed out. These casual dresses showed that they did not value the chance to work together, as a result, he lost the confidence to do the business with them.

Second, due to the long-term regulation of clothing in some industries, this tradition has build up a trust-worthy relationship, which illustrated the importance of the clothing rules. Take the uniform as an example. Government has a discipline on the officer’s wearing. Policeman, soldiers, doctors and so forth. By these clothes, our populace can easy to figure out whom they should ask help from and what kind of help they can get. Apparently, these uniforms bring us a lot of convenience. Meanwhile, the position and role these clothes represented will help these officers to do their job.
To sum up, it’s necessary and important to have some rules on the clothes. Although, jeans and t-shirts can make us feel more comfortable, the special requirements on our dress actually help us gain more trust and work more efficiently

wawabjUID: 2536676

10.5 作业
一年至少上课11个月，可以更好更有效地学习。同意这种说法吗？

There is phrase in China, keep studying until you die. That means learning is so important that we human being should keep studying as part of our life from born till death. But how to study more efficient is controversial. The idea that more time students spend in class, the better achievements they will get is very popular, and some parents or teachers even argued students should spending at least 11 months in their school. I confess they all wish their students or children have a bright future, however, I do not agree with this point of view.

At the first place, to study efficiently requires many elements, while enough time in the classroom is just one of those. First time can not ensure students to focus, think proactively or work hard, but those factors are critical for students to understand their courses. Meanwhile, enough time does not mean long time. To different students, the time they need to read books or understand a theory is various. Therefore, the 11-months school studying proposal will not work as people supposed. Take my classmates Lily and Shawn as an example. When taking the same class, Lily can get to understand the teacher very quickly, and always do the exams very well. In contrast, Shawn almost spent twice time as Lily did to learn the same thing. However, she can not achieve the same good result. As a result, it’s not objective to overstate the importance of long-time study.

Second, besides courses, we still have many other things need to do and learn. For a bright future, we not only need the knowledge from school, but also out of school. People only spend time in the school may not how to live by himself, not to mention get well along with his job after graduation. Like an old saying, life is an encyclopedia. In fact, we can also learn a lot from daily life like how to cook, how to keep ourselves health, how to manage the relationships with others. Those things could not be learned by school courses, even there is some knowledge, practice are still needed to better understand it. The required special term for internship illustrate how meaningful the out of school knowledge and experiences are.

In a conclusion, I do not deny the importance of time for studying, just would like to clear that long time does not equal to efficient study. What’s more important, a good management on time in fact will not only help us gain the knowledge from school, but also equip us with skills from out of school exercises.

wawabjUID: 2536676

106作业
Government should pay more attention on health care issues than on environmental issue

Along with the rapid development of technology, our human beings started living a better life which could not be imaged decades ago. However, accompanying with the various convenience, problems came also, especially about health care and environment. Issues should be addressed, but which should be paid more attention on is controversial. Someone argued that health care is more important, and deserved more concern. From my perspective, environmental issues are also very critical. Neglecting them will even lead the healthcare to a worse situation.

First of all, environmental issues have a dramatic impact on our life. Unlike health care issues, the bad consequence of environmental problems may not be easy to understand. However, it has
become a worldwide concern, and getting worse in a high speed now. The solution is the earlier actions we take, the situation will be less worse. Take global warming as an example. Since the second industrial revolution, numerous machines which replying on oil, coal and so forth become the major productivity of the modern life. Meanwhile, due to the ineffective management of the air’s discharge, the ozone layer has been destroyed, the share of carbon dioxide overpass a normal amount, and eventually increases in the intensity of extreme weather events, species extinctions, and changes in agricultural yields. Thus, to pay attention on environmental issues means keep our own lives.

Meanwhile, to address the environmental issues actually help solving the health care problems simultaneously. As we know, the pollution of air, light, sound raises many new diseases’ generation. According to a medical research, in the recent 5 years, more than 9 new diseases happen to people because their living environmental problems. At the same time, many known diseases tend to occur to younger people, like leukemia, cancers, tumors which are supposed to the cases for old people. However, if the government and citizens work together to decrease the pollution, that will effectively lower the
incidence of a disease. For example, asthma and allergy usually happen to people when the air is polluted like full of dust. Therefore, the air polluted issues are addressed, these two diseases will hardly occur to human.

To sum up, both health care issues and environmental issues are very critical to a society’s stability and development, especially to those developing countries. We should not weigh one on another, and the efforts actually will bring each other positive influence.