9月24日-luke小文

luke_003UID: 2660230

Facing with the decision of traveling in a group led by the guide or not, quite a few would claim that they prefer to being led by a professional guide, whereas others, in contrary, deem the choice of travelling themselves with friends or family as the premier one and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why I choose the opposite decision, and I will explore only a few of the most important ones here.

To begin with, one cann’t arrange the time during the trip freely. For instances, in order to earn more money by saving time, some guides even force the clients to travel as soon as possible .So few people could really appreciate some famous place of interests, not mention the spirit and history of certain places. What was worse, those whose agenda are usually under the control of a guide hardly have free time to do something adventurous, and can only be allowed to activate in certain areas, which are boring and lack of passion.
Furthermore, it is unnecessary to follow a guide when having a trip. First, more people nowadays have affluent knowledge about history and commonsense. Quite a few understand more about the place of interest even than the guide does. In addition, more and more basic and even specific introductions of place of interests are provided with the travelers, such as the forbidden city or the great wall, it is quite convenient for one understanding and appreciating them by reading the description concerning their history and development.
Finally, some travelling companies even cheat their clients by forcing them to buy extra goods at the shops of some place of interests. It is reported that travelers were subjected to such unequal treatments under the instruction of a guide who directed them into a art shop near the New Oriental pearl Tower,a famous symbol of Shanghai, where they were forced to buy something for memory, or they would not allow to leave even the lunch time had passed. So hardly can we admit that traveling led by the guide is a nice choice.

To sum up, It is not a good idea to travel in a group led by the guide, for it is not only dispensable , but lacks of passion and security. In this way,I prefer to travelling by myself or with my intimate friends rather than in a group led by a guide.

luke_003UID: 2660230

第一次限时写成这样~~~
When facing the topic of network,different people may come up with various points.Quite a few would claim that  internet brings us  too much negative infromation,however,others deem that the information network provides with makes people benefite a lot in many walk of aspects and that is also my point.
To begin with,it is internet that makes the world nowadays diverse.Hardly can we imagine that some important information can be got in such a short time.For instance,it is convenient for us to collect materials and some related knowledge through network even in 10 mintues when composing a paper,which is impossible 20 years ago.Also,there are more and more choices avalible in the internet for us to do what we enjoy do.For example,we can hunt for a satisfactory job by sending our resumes through E-mail,and it is a wornderful experience for us to communicate with those who share the similar dream with us by chatting on line or scanning certain forum.
Moreover,network is a indispensale tool for people today to process their career.It is known to all that many work cann't be done without a network.For instance,those who service in multi-national corporations  must communicate with their client by E-mail which can only be processed  by the network,and even in the hospital,doctors prescribe some medicine to the patients by computers.So it is necessary for one to master the skill of network in order to find a perfect job.
In addition,although some crime and violence can be done by internet,yet we still have more powerful strategies to solve the problems.Comparing with the negative influence exsitting in the internet, we gain more benefits from the network.

janicesaUID: 2686243

To be honest,I'm not good at grammar.I just find out a few points you have to consider.Good luck on the exam of 10-10.

Facing with the decision of traveling in a group led by the guide or not, quite a few would claim that they prefer to being led by a professional guide, whereas others, in contrary, deem the choice of travelling themselves(感觉有点小问题，把themselves去掉会好点) with friends or family as the premier one and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why I choose the opposite decision, and I will explore only a few of the most important ones here.
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To begin with, one（这个one指代的人没有明确写出来） cann’t arrange the time during the trip freely. For instances, in order to earn more money by saving time, some guides even force the clients to travel as soon as possible .So few people could really appreciate some famous place of interests, not mention（这不理解，我们要提及～～？） the spirit and history of certain places. What was worse, those whose agenda are usually under the control of a guide hardly have free time to do something adventurous, and can only be allowed to activate in certain areas, which are boring and lack of passion.

Furthermore, it is unnecessary to follow a guide when having a trip. First, more people nowadays have affluent knowledge about history and commonsense. Quite a few understand more about the place of interest even than the guide does. In addition, more and more basic and even specific introductions of place of interests are provided with the travelers, such as the forbidden city or the great wall, it is quite convenient for one understanding and appreciating them by reading the description concerning their history and development.（it seems to be some problem）0 |1 n( X7 R4 y1 @


Finally, some travelling companies even cheat their clients by forcing them to buy extra goods at the shops of some place of interests. It is reported that travelers were subjected to such unequal treatments under the instruction of a guide who directed them into a art shop near the New Oriental pearl Tower,a famous symbol of Shanghai, where they were forced to buy something for memory, or they would not allow to leave even the lunch time had passed. So hardly can we admit that traveling led by the guide is a nice choice.
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To sum up, It is not a good idea to travel in a group led by the guide, for it is not only dispensable , but lacks of passion and security. In this way,I prefer to travelling by myself or with my intimate friends rather than in a group led by a guide.

liuxiaoyinUID: 2631993

Facing with the decision of traveling in a group led by the guide or not, quite a few would claim that they prefer to being led by a professional guide, whereas others, in contrary（可以去掉，与前面的whereas重复）, deem the choice of travelling by themselves with friends or family as the premier one and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why I choose the opposite decision, and I will explore only a few of the most important ones here.

To begin with, one cann’t arrange the time during the trip freely. For instances, in order to earn more money by saving time, some guides even force the clients to travel as soon as possible .So few people could really appreciate some famous place of interests, not mention the spirit and history of certain places. What was worse, those whose agenda are usually under the control of a guide hardly have free time to do something adventurous, and can only be allowed to activate(activate是及物动词，不能这么用吧，就用take activities,move around~~~) in certain areas, which are boring and lack of passion.

Furthermore, it is unnecessary to follow a guide when having a trip. First, more people nowadays have affluent knowledge about history and commonsense. Quite a few understand more about the place of interest even than the guide does. In addition, more and more basic and even specific introductions of place of interests are provided with the travelers, such as the forbidden city or the great wall, it is quite convenient for one to understanding(understand) and appreciating(appreciate) them by reading the description concerning their history and development.

Finally, some travelling companies even cheat their clients by forcing them to buy extra goods at the shops of some place of interests. It is reported that travelers were subjected to such unequal treatments under the instruction感觉说的有点繁琐~~~encountered unequal treatments under the instruction会不会好点~~~ of a guide who directed them into a art shop near the New Oriental pearl Tower,a famous symbol of Shanghai, where they were forced to buy something for memory, or they would not allow to leave even the lunch time had passed. So hardly can we admit that traveling led by the guide is a nice choice.

To sum up, It is not a good idea to travel in a group led by the guide, for it is not only dispensable , but lacks of passion and security. In this way,I prefer to travelling by myself or with my intimate friends rather than in a group led by a guide.
论证得很充分~~~很有说服力。就是有几处语法有点小问题。写得很好，↖(^ω^)↗

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