进军美利坚作文 by晗

karen_0315UID: 2590040

15# joyceliu 谢谢~

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

刚刚回来的说, 我先占下楼的, 不好哦意思啊!!

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

With the popularity of computer and Internet, a-(an) increasing number of people begin to be attracted by computer games. At the same time, more and more people in the society, especially parents and teachers, worry about the impacts of computer games on children. Although computer games can help students completely relax and release their study pressure, in my point of view, they are still a kind of wasting precious time and even have adverse effects-good on children.

The first reason to support my point is that children who are lack of the ability of self-control are much easier to abandon themselves into computer games. When (children are) be attracted by the vivid and dazzling??不合适吧,colorful world, homework and obligations will be ignored. Education is important to juveniles because hey can not only get the basic knowledge and skill of(for) survival in the future but some vital spirits like persistence, honesty and diligence. This is a process of socialization which makes sure children will make contributions rather than (being) crimes in the future. Unfortunately, computer games deprive them from education without consciousness. Once they realize, they may encounter horrible problems such as unemployed or committing crimes. Thus, it is unjustifiable to allow children(to) spend their classes and homework time on computer games.可以解释下玩游戏怎么就犯罪了??哪些游戏导致的??

What’s more, the content of many computer games are harm for the development of children. Computer games are always full of violence and sex factors which should not be reached by children. The best university in our country published a study recently which showed people who were often exposed to violent scenes are more likely to express violence when they became adults.这个观点不如放上面解释犯罪了 This research illustrates the adverse effects of violence computer games and the unpredictable results in the future. Hence, it is not only a kind of wasting time but also damaging the pure hearts of our children.9 z( |: e% ?7 d" y+ R2 y1 v
这2段大概意思都是一样的, 表达的基本一个意思.
To sum up, I totally agree with the claim above.可以再说下你的观点是什么, 这样多少确切些 Because computer games, as I argued above, consuming prime time of children and hinder the development of them.

soarer0474UID: 2665789

13# karen_0315
Do you agree or disagree: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place. ) Z5 C1 e6 h0 {( c& i

0 R' n+ y1 ^3 v+ M; y' G+ o+ PWith the development of technology and the trend of globalization, there is a controversy over whether people should live in one place all life or not. While many people assert that people should live in the place they were born and make the whole life contribution(make a contribution to 固定搭配) to it, however, in my point of view, it is totally based on devoted but narrow thought（什么意思？google不出来）. Due to the whole world is becoming a smaller village, it is justifiable to choose people’s living condition according to their preference. I hold my opinion as follow.
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To beginning, people choose their living places based on personal development. Human nature decides people have the spirits of continuous developing and self-improvement. In this point, when grow up to a certain stage which is prior to their hometown’s level, people tend to leave their current situation(environment/circumstance更好一些吧) for better future. For instance, Marie Curie, the preeminent chemist and the first Nobel Prize owner, left her beloved country Poland to France to learn the advanced physics and chemistry knowledge which cannot be informed from her lagged hometown. Marie Curie’s intelligence and scientific capacity much outweighed the scientific level in Poland at that time. If people force her to stay at her hometown, there was not(wouldn’t have been) the discovery of polonium (named after her hometown Poland) and the invention of X-ray used in medicine treatment. Thus, rather than restraining live in one single place, it is much reasonable to allow people make decision to live according their self-development.! C2 i, |  A7 k" D( T. J% l3 X
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What’s more, high standard of education and living condition are always provided in developed places such as metropolitans. It is unfair for people who were born in a developing place get inferior education and equal education should be advocated. That’s reason of(for) students from various places go to big cities, like Beijing, Shanghai to go to universities, and it is also the reason for thousands of earnest students to look forward to study in America where the best education is offered. In turn, the advanced study can also bring benefit to their hometowns. The knowledge people learned may share with others and the money they earned could donate to build their lagged towns. Hence, it should be encouraged to live and study in more advanced places both for personal aspect and the further development of undeveloped areas./ W( }) Q$ |/ N" g2 K; F# Z7 x8 T! Z

2 r. B2 t8 }0 p& t0 A6 U- DTo sum up, the assertion above is absurd and lack of far-sightedness. It is wise for people who have excellent ability to live outside their hometowns; it’s a kind of just right and may even bring profit for(to) their original places.% `8 o$ L7 K+ p. G

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开头和结尾的一些句子很帅，
中间部分的例子也不错，正是我需要学习的地方，不知你是不是准备一些例子了？怎么准备的？
另外文章中的连接也比较顺畅。
只是整体文章脉络不是很清晰，尤其首段最后一句说“大家根据自己的喜好和来选择居住地”，我看完还以为你意思是大家可以搬家也可以就在一个地方居住，这个地方你再看看。

joyce455UID: 2614743

With the development of technology and the trend of globalization, there is a controversy over whether people should live in one place all life or not. While many people assert that people should live in the place they were born and make the whole life contribution to it, however, in my point of view, it is totally based on devoted but narrow thought. Due to the whole world is becoming a smaller village, it is justifiable to choose people’s living condition according to their preference. I hold my opinion as follow.
To beginning, people choose their living places based on personal development. Human nature decides people have the spirits of continuous developing and self-improvement. In this point, when grow（growing） up to a certain stage which is prior to their hometown’s level, people tend to leave their current situation for better future. For instance, Marie Curie, the preeminent chemist and the first Nobel Prize owner, left her beloved country Poland to France to learn the advanced physics and chemistry knowledge which cannot be informed from her lagged hometown. Marie Curie’s intelligence and scientific capacity much outweighed the scientific level in Poland at that time. If people force her to stay at her hometown, there was not the discovery of polonium (named after her hometown Poland) and the invention of X-ray used in medicine treatment. Thus, rather than restraining live in one single place, it is much reasonable to allow people make decision to live according （to）their self-development.
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What’s more, high standard of education and living condition are always provided in developed places such as metropolitans. It is unfair for people who were born in a developing place get inferior education and equal education should be advocated. That’s reason of students from various places （to）go to big cities, like Beijing, Shanghai to go to universities, and it is also the reason for thousands of earnest students look forward to study（studying） in America where the best education is offered. In turn, the advanced study can also bring benefit to their hometowns. The knowledge people learned may share with others and the money they earned could donate to build their lagged towns. Hence, it should be encouraged to live and study in more advanced places both for personal aspect and the further development of undeveloped areas.
To sum up, the assertion above is absurd and lack of far-sightedness. It is wise for people who have excellent ability to live outside their hometowns; it’s a kind of just right and may even bring profit for their original places.8 D2 ~+ [" W' p2 x8 v1 }7 O
例子很好，表达，结构很清晰，有些小的语法错误，学习了~~

karen_0315UID: 2590040

我这次写的特别没有感觉，真的特别不好，评我的同学忍受一下吧。
1012作文
Most people view success in their career as the goal of their life and also believe that getting university education is the most important factor for their success. To get access to success, people should possess many characteristics, including outstanding professional abilities and excellent spiritual qualities. All of these can be informed in universities. So my opinion is that university indeed plays the vital part in people’s career success.

To support my point, I’d like to list several reasons. Firstly, universities provide professional knowledge to students which is the fundamental part of their career. Realistically, students need both practically and theoretically knowledge in their future career. Let’s take an example. For business students they must learn the practical experience of precedence which may avoid them making the same mistakes, at the same time, theoretical knowledge which concluded by economics may also educate them with primary principles that contribute to their further success. On the contrary, people without such advanced knowledge will be easier to encounter troubles and make detours for he was never taught how to avoid mistakes and get success. And now, it reminds me millions of great people get success due to their college education: Marie Curie, Albert Einstein, Larry Page, you name it. With abundant professional knowledge, got in universities, people will undoubtedly apply them into their practical work and therefore gain success.

Also, universities besides beneficial knowledge cultivate necessary spirits which are also significant. If success is the fruit of a tree, then knowledge is fertilizer giving it required nutrition, and good spirits are sunshine proving energy and power. Good qualities, such as diligence, persistence and confidence, are as important as their practical information. “Success is one percent of genius and ninety nine percent of perspiration.” Edison’s great words is illustrated by his own life—depending on his insistence and diligence, after thousands of failure, he finally invented electric lamp and opened the door of his successful career. Universities, combining materialism and idealism, emphasizing on science and good qualities, lead students to truly success.     

There is no denying that many other factors are also important to success, like financial strength as well as luck. However, it is university education that the most important factor for success. Due o gaining great achievements in their career, people have to get two decisive characteristics: the excellence professional ability and indispensible qualities. It is university that cultivates these two fundamental factors and therefore nothing can replace its major role in success career.

karen_0315UID: 2590040

19# soarer0474 还没有准备呢，现在就是先写，可能等写一些了之后再整理吧，现在没有那么多时间呢。前面说人们根据自己喜好选择住处啊，就是可以搬家，主要是反对前面的观点。

karen_0315UID: 2590040

1013作文
I cannot agree with the assertion above that modern parents don't understand their
children as parents 50 years ago. As far as I am concerned, parents of our time are
actually, on the opposite, know their children much more than their predecessors did. To
know better about this topic, we must completely compare the social climate of modern city and 50 years ago.

First of all, social values have changed much compared with 50 years ago. There is no
denying that the development of technology, besides material achivements, also altered
many of our internal values, such as our opinion to cohabitants, to homosexuality, as well
as the way we view and treat children. In the previous time, adults always hold the
steadfast view that their children must obey their orders and resistance was restrained
even spelt punishment. However, for modern people, it is deemed to be unjustifiable
especially in developed countries and cities. Instead of blaming and punishing, present
parents prefer to encourage their children and attempt to understand their true emotions
which is the best way of education. In reality, oppression and depression lead to
unexpectable effects to childen. Psychologically, long time oppression of people's true
feelings results in adverse consequence, like lack the ability communication, lack self-
confidence, and even hard to achieve success in future career. A increasing number of
people have realized this fact, therefore, more and more parents changed their
conventional notion of education into a healthier and scientific way. Moreover, youngsters
are viewed owning the same rights with adults, which means they've been emphasized by the society.

Another important factor contributing to parents' understanding could be the added ways
of communication which also due to the development of technologies. Telephones, instant
message, online chat, all of this help communication between children and parents. For
instance, a real story published in the latest newspaper says that a wonderful mother
secretly becomes her daughter's net friend. The mom's purpose is to completely acquire the original feelings of her daughter, concerning her attitude to study, to friends, as well
as her to parents. This example strongly illustrates my point that modern parents know
more about their children with the help of developed technology.

To sum up, advanced values fundamentally allow parents to communicate more with their
children. In addition, technology give more opportunities for them to express true
emotions. With the help of these two vital factors, modern parents actually understand
more about their children than parents in 50 years ago.

zhangyzzzUID: 2615373

10.12 改的晚了，请谅解
Most people view success in their career as the goal of their life and also believe that getting university education is the most important factor for their success. To get access to success, people should possess many characteristics, including outstanding professional abilities and excellent spiritual qualities. All of these can be informed in universities. So my opinion is that university indeed plays the vital part in people’s career success.（开头很精彩，也暗示了后面的内容。）( ?; l. I' d0 m7 H3 @

7 G: W6 ?1 c" C/ w( v& _5 OTo support my point, I’d like to list several reasons. Firstly, universities provide professional knowledge to students which is the fundamental part of their career. Realistically（这个以前没见过）, students need both practically and theoretically（副词换成形容词，practical and theoretical） knowledge in their future career. Let’s take an example. For business students they must learn the practical experience of precedence which may avoid them making the same mistakes, at the same time, theoretical knowledge which concluded by economics(economists) may also educate them with primary principles that contribute to their further success. On the contrary, people without such advanced knowledge will be easier to encounter troubles and make detours(学习了~) for he was never taught how to avoid mistakes and get success. And now, it reminds me millions of great people get success due to their college education: Marie Curie, Albert Einstein, Larry Page, you name it. With abundant professional knowledge, got in universities, people will undoubtedly apply them into their practical work and therefore gain success.- N) ~0 k/ s# _$ Q* |8 `- `% E

0 h! y- q6 c  c+ L" {- L2 f7 uAlso, universities besides beneficial knowledge（提到句首比较好） cultivate necessary spirits which are also significant. If success is the fruit of a tree, then knowledge is fertilizer giving it required nutrition, and good spirits are sunshine proving（providing） energy and power. Good qualities, such as diligence, persistence and confidence（这三个非常好，还压了尾韵）, are as important as their practical information. “Success is one percent of genius and ninety nine percent of perspiration.” Edison’s great words is illustrated by his own life—depending on his insistence and diligence, after thousands of failure, he finally invented electric lamp and opened the door of his successful career. Universities, combining materialism and idealism, emphasizing on science and good qualities, lead students to truly success（succeed）.     
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- E& F; _5 P7 q$ P! PThere is no denying that many other factors are also important to success, like financial strength as well as luck. However, it is university education that the most important factor for success. Due to gaining great achievements in their career, people have to get two decisive characteristics: the excellence professional ability and indispensible qualities. It is university that cultivates these two fundamental factors and therefore nothing can replace its major role in success career.
1.整体结构很好，开头有暗示，结尾有总结，但是第二点说大学会培养各种精神，却没有说出大学和个人的性格联系，只是阐述个人性格对成功很重要。
2.词汇的运用是亮点，很灵活。
3.整体已经很不错了，加油~

daisy840228UID: 2684617

I cannot agree with the assertion above that modern parents don't understand their 5 a, o+ |8 Y! j
children as parents 50 years ago. As far as I am concerned, parents of our time are
actually, on the opposite, know their children much more than their predecessors这个词用的好 did. To ) l9 i3 K4 J3 b; O% e4 [
know better about this topic, we must completely compare the social climate这个也不错，学习 of modern city and 50 years ago.

First of all, social values have changed much compared with 50 years ago. There is no
denying that the development of technology, besides material achivements, also altered ( \; N9 @/ c5 C6 |( ~  J0 q
many of our internal values, such as our opinion to cohabitants, to homosexuality, as well , E5 S* w3 @  z. C6 H; |
as the way we view and treat children. In the previous time, adults always hold the . v5 L8 |) _: Y3 c1 P: X
steadfast－good view that their children must obey their orders and resistance was restrained 2 S5 r1 s$ K# S: v. n9 n& B
even spelt punishment. However, for modern people, it is deemed－good to be unjustifiable / P. A! d: r+ I) k& k3 O& [6 @
especially in developed countries and cities. Instead of blaming and punishing, present : i/ N' ?0 i4 K' c
parents prefer to encourage their children and attempt to understand their true emotions " F/ Q5 \7 ]4 f5 A/ Q$ \4 l7 C6 M
which is the best way of education. In reality, oppression and depression lead to
unexpectable unexpected effects to childen. Psychologically, long time oppression of people's true * @2 r* w* L  L0 s. K
feelings results in adverse consequence, like lack of the ability communication, lack of self-
confidence, and even being hard to achieve success in future career. A increasing number of ! U# g( X& l1 Y1 a
people have realized this fact, therefore, more and more parents changed their
conventional notion of education into a healthier and scientific-同一个等级会更好吧 way. Moreover, youngsters
are viewed owning the same rights with adults, which means they've been emphasized by the society.4 |, o& A) d: Q

Another important factor contributing to parents' understanding could be the added ways
of communication which also due to the development of technologies. Telephones, instant 0 F8 Q6 T1 x' J3 t3 }3 o/ ?
message, online chat, all of this help communication between children and parents. For 2 m% I' W3 `! g9 {( H- p$ R
instance, a real story published in the latest newspaper says that a wonderful mother 9 b& n8 u+ o9 q! Q* ]5 z: w9 U8 i
secretly becomes her daughter's net friend. The mom's purpose is to completely acquire the original feelings of her daughter, concerning her attitude to study, to friends, as well
as her to parents. This example strongly illustrates my point that modern parents know 3 j( s( A% T* U- [: S6 _
more about their children with the help of developed technology.

To sum up, advanced values fundamentally allow parents to communicate more with their : w1 U3 q+ E% {$ K5 E
children. In addition, technology gives more opportunities for them to express true
emotions. With the help of these two vital factors, modern parents actually understand
more about their children than parents in 50 years ago.
文章词语，句式结构变换较好，逻辑框架也很好。学习

joyce455UID: 2614743

1013作文2 b$ {7 L0 ?) n I cannot agree with the assertion above that modern parents don't understand their ' D/ D! l4 ~4 T8 {9 d3 k8 Q( t$ Zchildren as parents 50 years ago. As far as I am concerned, parents of our time are 0 J- c6 r1 ^. h/ c' g0 Iactually, on the opposite, know(knowing) their children much more(better) than their predecessors did. To + T4 N7 X- g, U* F- n4 b( @5 g) N% Vknow better about this topic, we must completely compare the social climate of modern city and 50 years ago. ) j' p2 I3 R7 v8 C$ q, O7 [5 @5 k First of all, social values have changed much compared with (it)50 years ago. There is no 7 w0 U1 X5 C8 g denying that the development of technology, besides material achivements, also altered 7 U9 L$ b' T2 U) V$ M& v many of our internal values, such as our opinion to(opinion on sth) cohabitants, to homosexuality, as well 9 F# K7 G- K, ~6 @& E as the way we view and treat children. In the previous time, adults always hold the 6 ]: [/ R0 f. D4 a steadfast view that their children must obey their orders and resistance was restrained 2 X1 U) ]  n. X even spelt punishment. However, for modern people, it is deemed to be unjustifiable ) c2 }, ]! V9 {& ] especially in developed countries and cities. Instead of blaming and punishing, present " w1 T2 q% i& ?$ a) k: W% ~" x parents prefer to encourage their children and attempt to understand their true emotions ' T$ y# o0 X4 p5 |  }0 D5 H6 Y which is the best way of education. In reality, oppression and depression lead to * P6 I8 ~4 W" H# _ unexpectable effects to childen. Psychologically, long time oppression of people's true 1 O- S; ?2 c3 l% u, @+ kfeelings results in adverse consequence, like lack （lacking后面如同）the ability communication, lack self- 2 X- z/ o/ y$ t4 i  D, ]$ q. [3 e2 ]confidence, and even hard to achieve success in future career. A(an) increasing number of ) ^" k$ [( q' t& U5 N people have realized this fact, therefore, more and more parents changed their & b- {" ~+ ~: d2 J, ~ conventional notion of education into a healthier and scientific way. Moreover, youngsters 0 w! K7 T" J& l9 T1 M4 } are viewed owning the same rights with adults, which means they've been emphasized by the society（可以这么表达吗？被社会重视？）. 9 @/ A5 K9 o! y, m0 R6 P 3 B, B9 f1 l: y# Z Another important factor contributing to parents' understanding could be the added ways 5 H3 c$ S8 U# D0 ^ of communication which also due to the development of technologies. Telephones, instant 8 l: X3 x$ \9 z) _" V' bmessage, online chat, （最好加个连词，或者改写为从句）all of this help communication between children and parents. For ! E; K; E. c& H/ {# Q' a instance, a real story published in the latest newspaper says that a wonderful mother   z- i' r* h  r0 _& Tsecretly becomes her daughter's net friend. The mom's purpose is to completely acquire the original feelings of her daughter, concerning her attitude to study, to friends, as well ( _* g8 g3 b9 ?. k: t) T" Gas her to parents. This example strongly illustrates my point that modern parents know 3 N( U5 j: u; O0 \- q5 g$ ^ more about their children with the help of developed technology. 4 a* ^' R3 O% u- b$ U- [1 l& w: ~) ^, V) Q To sum up, advanced values fundamentally allow parents to communicate more with their 7 t7 P( o! p/ Zchildren. In addition, technology give more opportunities for them(指代不明确 ）to express true 6 L6 l: Z) S2 i8 o4 d7 l: Jemotions. With the help of these two vital factors, modern parents actually understand % q4 p( s+ l' r4 Q0 Y4 H more about their children than parents in 50 years ago.

整个文章思路比较清晰，语法有些许问题，如果改正之处有何不妥，欢迎批评指正

karen_0315UID: 2590040

1026作文
10.26 In university students should take the history courses no matter what field they study.

I completely agree with the claim above that history should be widely educated in university no matter what majors students are. It is because history education plays a significant role in following parts.

First of all, history study is an irreplaceable approach of socialization, that is, students gain patriotism from history documents. What is the goal of study, or going to university? The common reasons are getting knowledge, getting competitiveness in fierce job market and having more salary. Whatever your reason is, the undoubted ultimate goal is to construct our nation, making it stronger and more capable. However, no matter how excellent a student is, without a patriotic heart, he/she will make no contribution even does harm to his/her country. Thus, the primary quality of talents is to love their own country. History education, in this respect, makes essential effects. By informing the great works of their ancestors and glorious defenses, students can usually set up honors of their ancestors and own countries. Accordingly, this kind of honor will inspire them to make contributions to their beloved country mother and be proud of their activities for building the better society. History study can lead students to patriotism, which is the important part of socialization. In this way, history education helps socialization.

Secondly, history study can teach us the ability of foreknowledge. It is often too late to cope with things when it has really happened. Then people always look forward the capacity of anticipation and what people usually blind to is history study can help us anticipation. The trends of things are usually regular, but often with a long period, longer than individual's life. As a result, it is hard for people to observe and summarize the principles of development. On the other hand, history documents always do a big favor. Studying the relation between causes and effects, scientists can summarize the general principles of specific things. Therefore, the similar occurrences could be foreseen their results and adverse ones could be stifled. For individuals, they can also get benefits from history study. For instance, biographies are always top books in sales for people indeed learn good qualities from great people. In China, almost everyone has read the biography of Chairman Mao, from the book people not only know modern histories but also emulate good characteristics of him, such as bravery, diligence and resistance. The ability of foreknowledge is necessary of success in future career, and history can inform us such ability.

Additionally, under the pressure of professional study, history courses could give students a chance to relax due to history just like story telling. It is a really wonderful thing to learn knowledge when hearing interesting stories. So why don't college students take their history classes with countless benefits? In my point of view, history courses should be required in universities.

ice--breakerUID: 2717367

27# karen_0315 我不知道我说的是否有道理。刚看了新东方的网络课堂，我的写作水平还不高，也是第一次写作，批改可能不准备，不过下面完全是我的个人评论。觉得你整个主题抓错了，有跑题的嫌疑。因为这个主要是讨论是否得一定得上历史课，而不是历史课在我们生活中有多重要。历史重要是重要但我们不一定要通过上课去学，可以通过其他方式学，我觉得应该着重写出上历史课的重要性而不是历史的重要性。

ice--breakerUID: 2717367

27# karen_0315 27# karen_0315 I completely agree with the claim above (多余)that history should be widely educated in university no matter what majors students are. It is because history education plays a significant role in following parts（强调句型吗？这句话错了）. ( ~( D" a0 Q+ N5 A' A, q
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First of all, history study is an irreplaceable approach of socialization, that is, students gain patriotism from history documents. What is the goal of study, or going to university? The common reasons are getting knowledge, getting competitiveness in fierce job market and having more salary.(觉得这句话有点乱) Whatever your reason is, the undoubted ultimate goal is to construct our nation, making it stronger and more capable. However, no matter how excellent a student is, without a patriotic heart, he/she will make no contribution even does harm to his/her country. Thus, the primary quality of talents is to love their own country. History education, in this respect, makes essential effects. By informing the great works of their ancestors and glorious defenses, students can usually set up honors of their ancestors and own countries. Accordingly, this kind of honor will inspire them to make contributions to their beloved country mother and be proud of their activities for building the better society. History study can lead students to patriotism, which is the （an）important part of socialization. In this way, history education helps socialization.
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/ \& h3 t2 E1 ?' E, f  }Secondly, history study can teach us the ability of foreknowledge. It is often too late to cope with things when it has really happened. Then people always look forward the capacity of anticipation and what people usually blind to is (that)history study can help us anticipation(要用动词). The trends of things are usually regular, but often with a long period, longer than individual's life. As a result, it is hard for people to observe and summarize the principles of development. On the other hand, history documents always do a big favor. Studying the relation between causes and effects, scientists can summarize the general principles of specific things. Therefore, the similar occurrences could be foreseen their results and adverse ones could be stifled. For individuals, they can also get（可以不要） benefits from history study. For instance, biographies are always top books in sales for people indeed learn good qualities from great people. In China, almost everyone has read the biography of Chairman Mao, from the book people not only know modern histories but also emulate good characteristics of him, such as bravery, diligence and resistance. The ability of foreknowledge is necessary of success in future career, and history can inform us such ability.
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Additionally, under the pressure of professional study, history courses could give students a chance to relax due to history just like story telling.（主要用错了） It is a really wonderful thing to learn knowledge when hearing interesting stories. So why don't college students take their history classes with countless benefits? In my point of view, history courses should be required in universities.

karen_0315UID: 2590040

28# ice--breaker 上历史课的价值就在于历史的意义本身，因为学习历史是有意义的所以才需要上历史课，这两者应该是等同的嘛。
还有最后一句你说我什么错了？主要？