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周二 The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. Do you agree or disagree?
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The impact that the environmental problem on human life is undeniable. And the issue is not only complex, but also enormous. A research published on the International Environment and Development Center, indicates that the environmental issue is the global issue, and it greatly is blocking the developing of economy.  

With the development of science and technology, people in even expanding number are awareness of the complex influences that the environmental problems have brought to us. Some people might think that it can still be handled be the individual because they believe it that only if everybody protects the environment. However, most of people hold the contrary opinion, because it is too complicated. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter idea.

First and foremost, as the above statement, the environmental issue is not the one city or country problem, but the global issue. For example, there are many factories that bring tremendous toxic gas and water into our world, and may be from different countries, such as United States, China, and England and so on. So it is difficult to control these problems if just to depend on one country, not mention to one person. It is a large project, all-consuming, so that the cooperation is necessary. All of countries or people should attend to the program that protecting and rebuilding our environment. It can not do that by individual.

In addition, as all we know that the environmental issue is more complicated and serious than before, so to deal with it the advanced technology is necessary. For instance, the Carbon Dioxide contributes to the growing global temperature. A recent paper published on the Science, that is a famous journal, shows that they create a new technique but it only has a bit of benefit on reducing the content of Carbon Dioxide. Even through, their projects are sustained by the government or companies.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, the environmental issue is very complex, all-consuming, and even needs advanced technology to deal with; therefore we could safely draw the conclusion that the environmental issue can not be handled by individual.

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The impact that the environmental problem on human life is undeniable. And the issue is not only complex, but also enormous. A research published on the International Environment and Development Center, indicates that the environmental issue is the（a） global issue, and it greatly is blocking the developing（development） of economy.  7 M( X) S' U' o& P* x  Y

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With the development of science and technology, people in even expanding number are awareness of the complex influences that the environmental problems have brought to us. Some people might think that it can still be handled be the individual because they believe it that only if everybody protects the environment(这句话不是没写完，就是多写了点什么，不完整). However, most of people hold the contrary opinion, because it is too complicated. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latter idea.

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First and foremost, as the above statement, the environmental issue is not the(a) one city or country‘s problem, but the(a) global issue. For example, there are many factories that bring tremendous toxic gas and water into our world, and may be(maybe) from different countries, such as United States, China, and England and so on. So it is difficult to control these problems if just to depend on one country, not to mention to one person. It is a large project, all-consuming, so that the cooperation is necessary. All of countries or people should attend to the programs that protecting and rebuilding(环境不能rebuild吧) our environment. It can not do（be done） that by individual. % C& Q/ j$ i- R% @

In addition, as all we(we all) know that the environmental issue is more complicated and serious than before, so to deal with it, the advanced technology is necessary. For instance, the Carbon Dioxide contributes to the growing global temperature(global warming更好一些). A recent paper published on the Science, that is a famous journal, shows that they create a new technique but it only has a bit of benefit on(直接去掉benefit更好一些) reducing the content of Carbon Dioxide. Even through, their projects are sustained by the government or companies.（少了后面的话，或者加到前面去） 6 （）x; B$ _4 Z. z

All in all, from what has been discussed above, the environmental issue is very complex, all-consuming, and even needs advanced technology to deal with; therefore we could safely draw the conclusion that the environmental issue can not be handled by individual.

主题分明，层次清楚，比我的好多了！
语言上，可以再加工一下，不要老是用一些用烂的词，many,think什么的
总觉得前面的论证不是很充分，第一个分论点，例子以后就在讲该怎么做了，没有说清楚吧。
我也是个人看法，仅供参考～说的不好，请见谅