独立作文-进军美利坚 by zhengping

zhengping001UID: 2689322

11.27 Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas. Agree or disagree?

With the rapid increasing competition in the modern society, people who want to be successful sure have more competitive factors than others, such as good looks or dresses and good ideas. Therefore, there comes a question, which is the more important to people for success? Some people believe that good facial appearances have more advantage than others. However, others disagree with the point, because without good ideas people hardly reach to success. As far as I am concerned, I strongly hold the latter one, because they have a lot of benefits though possessing some good thoughts.

First and foremost, it should be noted that almost all of people who made successful had outstanding qualities and some creative inventions in the past. That is to say that people may be failure without these. Let’s take a concrete thing as an example. Bill Gates, who a famous person, are a chairman of the Microsoft company. At the same time, he is not only the founder of the Widows system, but also the richest businessman in the world. Though he has not the excellent looks, he had some astonishing achievements by creative thoughts or inventions. Beside, there are amounts of other examples, Bill gates only is one of these people by good ideas.

In addition, the advantages of good ideas outweigh any benefit we gain from beautiful looks and dresses. Let’s take myself and my classmate as a good example. I am a student majoring in chemistry and I have to finish my paper from my teacher. Firstly I need to make an accurate plan on the project. The most important is that I have to possess the new thoughts of the paper, and figure out some methods to deal with some problems on the process. After several months I can complete my paper with these methods or thoughts and practice. Compared with my classmate-Jack, he has a beautiful facial appearance and spends much time on it everyday, resulting in he can not finish his paper. As can be seen from the above analysis, the benefits of having the ideas are obvious us no excuse to vote against it.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that as important part of receiving success, good ideas are better than good looks and dresses. In other words, people are more easily to be successful with good ideas.

liuxiaoyinUID: 2631993

11.27 Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas. Agree or disagree?
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With the rapid increasing competition in the modern society, people who want to be successful sure have more competitive factors than others, such as good looks or dresses and good ideas. 感觉这句有点不顺~~你是想说有good looks的人有竞争优势么？Therefore, there comes a question, which is the more important to people for success? Some people believe that good facial appearances have more advantages than others. However, others disagree with the point, because without good ideas people hardly reach to success. As far as I am concerned, I strongly hold the latter one, because they have a lot of benefits though possessing some good thoughts.首段比较简洁，观点明确，很好哈~~~~

First and foremost, it should be noted that almost all of people who made successfulsuccess had outstanding qualities and some creative inventions in the past. That is to say that people may be failurefail，用动词 without these. Let’s take a concrete thing as an example. Bill Gates, whowho去掉吧，要不加个is a famous person, areis a chairman of the Microsoft company. At the same time, he is not only the founder of the Windows system, but also the richest businessman in the world. Though he has not the excellent looks, he had some astonishing achievements by creative thoughts or inventions. Beside, there are amounts of other examples, Bill gates only is one of these people bywith good ideas.

In addition, the advantages of good ideas outweigh any benefit we gain from beautiful looks and dresses. Let’s take myself and my classmate as a good example. I am a student majoring in chemistry and I have to finish my paper from my teacher. Firstly I need to make an accurate plan on the project. The most important is that I have to possess the new thoughts of the paper, and figure out some methods to deal with some problems on the process. After several months I can complete my paper with these methods or thoughts and practice them. Compared with my classmate-Jack, he has a beautiful facial appearance and spends much time on it everyday, resulting inthat he can not finish his paper. As can be seen from the above analysis, the benefits of having the ideas are obvious that we have （us去掉） no excuse to vote against it.! 例子举得很好~~~比较能说明问题

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that as important part of receiving success, good ideas are better than good looks and dresses. In other words, people are more easily to be successful with good ideas.总结精炼，重申观点~~~~

总评：文章写得很好~~~~很流畅，不过你好像应该注意避免一些小语法错误。词性不对，有的句子结构有点混乱。你的作文我以前改过，好像也有这样的问题，要注意哈，为了这些扣分可不值得。嘿嘿~~你的文章应该至少是good，加油哈

zhengping001UID: 2689322

11.30 children should only playsports for fun, or play sports in competition or contests?孩子参加运动，是应该只参加游戏性质的运动还是应该也参加竞技性的运动; i,
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When asked aboutthat which type of sports children should take part in, the majority of peoplebelieve that children should only play sports for fun, but other peopleconsider that they should attend those games involving competition or contests.Each coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, I strongly think thatchildren should attend own favorite sports, and these may be including simplygames just for fun or some formal sports contests.

First and foremost, the firstand most important thing is interest for people to do everything, of courseincluding sports game. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. Therefore,some kids could choose to attend ball games, like basketball and football. Theyargue that these games can offer happiness and some chances to study, likecooperation in a football game. Of course, children can take part in otherformal games just only they like them. Don’t matter what sports, interest isthe most important. To take my classmate as an example, Wang, is girl and aprofessional swimming player. Actually she is very like it, but she also isattracted by others sports, such as climbing mountains with families andplaying some minor games with friends might only for fun. That is to saychildren can play all kinds of sports if they could provide benefits to them.

In addition, every sport or gamehas own advantages or benefits to children. In order to explain the theorybetter, let’s take my friend as a good example. Micheal, is an opening mindboy, and has many favorite sports, such as swimming, climbing mountains,especially playing football, and so on. He choose to play one of these gamesmay be for fun, at the same time, he will attend some formal games like soccer.Both can provide amount of benefits to him, in the fun games, he establish fairfriendship with his friends, and on the contests he can receive some awards andhonor when he win in the games. As can be seen from the above example, childrencan accept different benefits from different sports.


All in all, from what has beendiscussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that children should playtheir favorite sports, do not for certain purpose. In other words, withoutinterest, children will feel bored even they receive awards in some contests.

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When asked about that which type of sports children should take part in, the majority of people believe that children should only play sports for fun, but other people consider that they should attend those games involving competition or contests.Each coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, I strongly think that children should attend own [their] favorite sports, and these may be including [which may include] simply games just for fun or some formal sports contests.( c1 u9 w0 y9 h! t9 e: r
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First and foremost, the firstand most important thing [有点重复吧？]is interest for people to do everything, of course including sports game. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. Therefore,some kids could choose to attend ball games, like basketball and football. They argue that these games can offer happiness and some chances to study, like [such as ] cooperation in a football game. Of course, children can take part in otherformal games just only [if] they like them. Don’t [no]matter what sports, interest isthe most important. To take my classmate as an example, Wang, is girl and aprofessional swimming player. Actually she is very like it, but she also isattracted by others sports, such as climbing mountains with families andplaying some minor games with friends might only for fun. That is to saychildren can play all kinds of sports if they could provide benefits to them.. K8 ^9 v( `! |+ A+[] l
[这段最好能点明：不管for fun还是竞赛，兴趣最重要]

In addition, every sport or gamehas own advantages or benefits to children. In order to explain the theory[这个词太大了。。。]better, let’s take my friend as a good example. Micheal, is an opening mindboy, and has many favorite sports, such as swimming, climbing mountains,especially playing football, and so on. He choose to play one of these gamesmay be for fun, at the same time, he will attend some formal games like soccer.Both can provide amount of benefits to him, in the fun games, he establish fairfriendship with his friends, and on the contests he can receive some awards andhonor when he win in the games. As can be seen from the above example, childrencan accept different benefits from different sports.) `; t4 d3 r7 U) J4 F
【这段的逻辑是因为都有益，所以都要参加？那么最好能再明确一下】

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All in all, from what has beendiscussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that children should playtheir favorite sports, do not for certain purpose. In other words, withoutinterest, children will feel bored even they receive awards in some contests.- b. N" @! ~- L) g8 H9 K' W/ {
【最后一段又在强调兴趣的重要，那么第二段呢？总结段应该涵盖全文】

另外建议楼主下次提交后检查一下，有些单词连到一起了。

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When asked aboutthat which type of sports children should take part in, the majority of peoplebelieve that children should only play sports for fun, but other peopleconsider that they should attend those games involving competition or contests.Each coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, I strongly think thatchildren should attend own favorite sports, and these may be including simplygames just for fun or some formal sports contests. , Y) C) N) _: }- e- S ) \( ?0 S& j4 Q First and foremost, the firstand most 一句话中用2次first and most不是太好吧？important thing is the interest for people to do everything (something), of courseincluding sports games. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. Therefore,some kids could choose to attend ball games, like basketball and football. Theyargue that these games can offer happiness and some chances to study, likecooperation in a football game. Of course前面用过了，可以换成It's true that, children can take part in other(some)formal games just 删only when they like them. Don’t(No) matter what sports they play, interest isthe most important. 我不知道为啥一再强调兴趣的重要性 好像偏题了To take my classmate as an example, Wang, who is a girl ,and(is) a professional swimming player. Actually she is very like it(like it very much), but she also isattracted by others sports, such as climbing mountains with families andplaying some minor games with friends might only for fun.这个例子和主旨关系太远了 That is to saychildren can play all kinds of sports if they could provide benefits to them. 9 Z$ ]! M5 c2 i# \ $ O9 H4 o3 h G# q2 b In addition, every sport or gamehas its own advantages or benefits to children. In order to explain the theorybetter, let’s take my friend as a good example. Micheal, is 删an opening mind（open-mined）boy2个地方错的一样，要么用插入语要么直接不要逗号要么定语从句，你原句这样也可以但是要删掉逗号, and不要 has many favorite sports, such as swimming, climbing mountains,especially playing football, and so on. He choose to play one of these gamesmay be for fun, at the same time, he will attend some formal games like soccer.Both can provide amount of benefits to him, as in the fun games, he establish fairfriendship with his friends, and on the contests he can receive some awards andhonor when he win in不要 the games. As can be seen from the above example, childrencan accept different benefits from different sports. 1 Z5 Q9 ^$ f, N 2 A3 y0 b6 a1 {& G8 u- m , q! s- t( p, U, IAll in all, from what has beendiscussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that children should playtheir favorite sports, do not for certain purpose. In other words, withoutinterest, children will feel bored even they receive awards in some contests.

没有空格看起来很不舒服的 该打空格的地方还是不可以偷懒啊
全文主旨不明 论点不清 在架构上要多下功夫
不知道你在写文之前有否列提纲？建议至少想3条理由 先用中文在草稿纸上写下来

zhengping001UID: 2689322

12.1 Some scientists are responsible for thenegative impacts that made by their discoveries, what do you think?

With therapid development of science and technology, people in ever expanding numberare aware of the following problem. When new discoveries or things that arediscovered by scientists might play more or less negative effects to humanbeings or the condition of the world, whether these scientists should haveresponsibility on the situation or not. Some people believe that they areresponsible for these problems. However, each coin has two sides. Others do notagree with the point, because scientists just create these inventions. As faras I am concerned, I strongly support the latter one. There are some reasons asfollows.

First andforemost, it should be obvious that scientists just only discover new things,and these inventions are few harmful to human beings. As we all know, if theseinventions were not used by people, they can not harm human beings or makepollution to environment. In other words, before scientists found newdiscoveries they did not knew that they will do harm to human in the future. Fromother aspect of the point, it depends to the purpose of the government or thepublic. If the government put them on the good side, they do only generatebenefits to people.

In addition,I concede that some discoveries may have a little of adverse effects on thedevelopment of the society, but they sure provide huge advantages to people. Let’take computer as a good example. It cost amounts of time and energy of the scientists.Of course, computer gives a lot of benefits to us not only in study but alsothe work. At the same time, it brings people with some problems, such as shortsight and radiation. In other words, the advantages of the computer outweighany problems from the negative impacts. So, could you blame scientists thatcause those problems? As can be seen from the above analysis, we cannot blameexcellent scientists due to a little bit spots.

All in all,from what has been discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion thatscientists are not reasonable for negative influences that made by their discoveries.It is little doubt that scientists should receive encouragement and honor,without their discoveries, the society hardly develop rapidly.

zhengping001UID: 2689322

12.1 Some scientists are responsible for the negative impacts that made by their discoveries, what do you think?

With the rapid development of science and technology, people in ever expanding number are aware of the following problem. When new discoveries or things that are discovered by scientists might play more or less negative effects to human beings or the condition of the world, whether these scientists should have responsibility on the situation or not. Some people believe that they are responsible for these problems. However, each coin has two sides. Others do not agree with the point, because scientists just create these inventions. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support the latter one. There are some reasons as follows.

First and foremost, it should be obvious that scientists just only discover new things, and these inventions are few harmful to human beings. As we all know, if these inventions were not used by people, they can not harm human beings or make pollution to environment. In other words, before scientists found new discoveries they did not knew that they will do harm to human in the future. From other aspect of the point, it depends to the purpose of the government or the public. If the government put them on the good side, they do only generate benefits to people.

In addition, I concede that some discoveries may have a little of adverse effects on the development of the society, but they sure provide huge advantages to people. Let’ take computer as a good example. It cost amounts of time and energy of the scientists. Of course, computer gives a lot of benefits to us not only in study but also the work. At the same time, it brings people with some problems, such as short sight and radiation. In other words, the advantages of the computer outweigh any problems from the negative impacts. So, could you blame scientists that cause those problems? As can be seen from the above analysis, we cannot blame excellent scientists due to a little bit spots.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that scientists are not reasonable for negative influences that made by their discoveries. It is little doubt that scientists should receive encouragement and honor, without their discoveries, the society hardly develop rapidly.

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

12.1 Some scientists are responsible for the negative impacts that made by their discoveries, what do you think?


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With the rapid development of science and technology, people in ever expanding number are aware of the following problem. When new discoveries or things that are discovered by scientists might play more or less negative effects to human beings or the condition of the world, whether these scientists should have responsibility on the situation or not.(这一句有些怪哦！首先前半句没有主语，然后这后半句让人摸不着头脑) Some people believe that they are responsible for these problems. However, each coin has two sides. Others do not agree with the point, because scientists just create these inventions. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support the latter one. There are some reasons as follows.


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First and foremost, it should be obvious that scientists just only discover new things, and these inventions are few harmful to human beings. As we all know, if these inventions were not used by people, they can not harm human beings or make pollution to environment. In other words, before scientists found new discoveries they did not knew that they will do harm to human in the future. From other aspect of the point, it depends to the purpose of the government or the public.（这句话没怎么说明白） If the government put （puts） them on the good side, they do only generate benefits to people. (没有太多的细节支持，还有什么叫做puts them on the good side没有说清楚)


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In addition, I concede （consider） that some discoveries may have a little of adverse effects on the development of the society, but they sure provide huge advantages to people. Let’ take computer as a good （去掉）example. It
cost amounts of time and energy of the scientists. Of course, computer gives a lot of benefits to us not only in study but also the work. At the same time, it brings people with some problems, such as short sight and radiation. In other words, the advantages of the computer outweigh any problems from the negative impacts. So, could you blame scientists that cause those problems?（注意一下语法结构，分句没有主语） As can be seen from the above analysis, we cannot blame excellent scientists due to a little bit spots.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that scientists are not reasonable for negative influences that made by their discoveries. It is little doubt that scientists should receive encouragement and honor, without their discoveries, the society hardly develop rapidly. (俩句子没有连词最好不要直接用逗号连起来)

文化能够整体结构挺好的。只是只有两个理由段显得有点单薄。当然，如果是限时作文，这样就已经很不错了。另外注意一下语法，有很多都是一些简单的语法错误。加油哦！

zhengping001UID: 2689322

12.3 那些保持房间整洁有秩序地学生会更成功。





When asked about that what importantfactors to students are, the majority of people may believe that surely includesome personality habits such as keeping room clean. Of course, it is veryimportant to them who want to be success. While other people do not support thepoint, they argue that it is only personal business not involving others. Asfar as I am concerned, I totally agree with the latter one. There are somereasons as follow.

First and foremost, it is a good way toshow oneself if he can keep his rooms clean and order. Most of people believethat it means ones personal characteristic, such as inner factor. Nobody prefersto communicate with those making their places massed up. Let’s take my friend,Micheal, as a good example. He is a boy who does not like to sweep his rooms,so his rooms always seem dusty and disorder especially his bedroom. So hisclassmates do not willing to drop by his home. And even, a few people wouldlike to become his friends. What is so pity! You can imagine how hard he reachessuccess without other help.

In addition, ones who can make his or herplaces beautiful and order receive some skills, such as management ability. Inother words, they can improve their capacities in the process. Let’s take acommon place as an example. If you want to order your domestic home, you needto desire an accurate plan that which thing should put which place. And thenyou have to learn by heart where it is. Therefore, you can find out it quicklywhen you want to use it. Actually, it will help you to save much time andenergy, and you can take advantage of the time to deal with others. Moreover,order and beautiful rooms are benefiting our health. As can be seen from theabove analysis, these advantages of it are obvious and allow us no excuse tovote against to it.

All in all, from what has been discussedabove, students who can order their places can receive a large amount ofbenefits, such as making more friends and improving management ability.Therefore, we could safely draw the conclusion that it is better to students tomake success.

zhengping001UID: 2689322

12.3 那些保持房间整洁有秩序地学生会更成功。
When askedabout that what important factors to students are, the majority of people may believethat surely include some personality habits such as keeping room clean. Of course,it is very important to them who want to be success. While other people do notsupport the point, they argue that it is only personal business not involvingothers. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the latter one. Thereare some reasons as follow.

First andforemost, it is a good way to show oneself if he can keep his rooms clean andorder. Most of people believe that it means ones personal characteristic, suchas inner factor. Nobody prefers to communicate with those making their placesmassed up. Let’s take my friend, Micheal, as a good example. He is a boy whodoes not like to sweep his rooms, so his rooms always seem dusty and disorderespecially his bedroom. So his classmates do not willing to drop by his home. Andeven, a few people would like to become his friends. What is so pity! You canimagine how hard he reaches success without other help.

In addition,ones who can make his or her places beautiful and order receive some skills,such as management ability. In other words, they can improve their capacitiesin the process. Let’s take a common place as an example. If you want to orderyour domestic home, you need to desire an accurate plan that which thing shouldput which place. And then you have to learn by heart where it is. Therefore,you can find out it quickly when you want to use it. Actually, it will help youto save much time and energy, and you can take advantage of the time to dealwith others. Moreover, order and beautiful rooms are benefiting our health. Ascan be seen from the above analysis, these advantages of it are obvious andallow us no excuse to vote against to it.

All in all,from what has been discussed above, students who can order their places canreceive a large amount of benefits, such as making more friends and improving managementability. Therefore, we could safely draw the conclusion that it is better tostudents to make success.

zhengping001UID: 2689322

12.3 那些保持房间整洁有秩序地学生会更成功。
When asked about that what important factors to students are, the majorityof people may believe that surely include some personality habits such askeeping room clean. Of course, it is very important to them who want to be success.While other people do not support the point, they argue that it is onlypersonal business not involving others. As far as I am concerned, I totallyagree with the latter one. There are some reasons as follow.

First and foremost, it is a good way to show oneself if he can keep hisrooms clean and order. Most of people believe that it means ones personal characteristic,such as inner factor. Nobody prefers to communicate with those making theirplaces massed up. Let’s take my friend, Micheal, as a good example. He is a boywho does not like to sweep his rooms, so his rooms always seem dusty anddisorder especially his bedroom. So his classmates do not willing to drop byhis home. And even, a few people would like to become his friends. What is sopity! You can imagine how hard he reaches success without other help.

In addition, ones who can make his or her places beautiful and orderreceive some skills, such as management ability. In other words, they canimprove their capacities in the process. Let’s take a common place as anexample. If you want to order your domestic home, you need to desire anaccurate plan that which thing should put which place. And then you have tolearn by heart where it is. Therefore, you can find out it quickly when youwant to use it. Actually, it will help you to save much time and energy, andyou can take advantage of the time to deal with others. Moreover, order andbeautiful rooms are benefiting our health. As can be seen from the aboveanalysis, these advantages of it are obvious and allow us no excuse to voteagainst to it.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, students who can ordertheir places can receive a large amount of benefits, such as making morefriends and improving management ability. Therefore, we could safely draw theconclusion that it is better to students to make success.

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

已经有很大进步啦！赞一个！
可以先不要限时训练，写完后先推敲一下句子。

When asked about that what important factors to students are, the majority of people may believe that surely include some personality habits such as keeping room clean. Of course, it is very important to them who want to be success. While other people do not support the point, they argue that it is only personal business not involving others. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the latter one. 下文貌似不是论证后一个观点的呀！There are some reasons as follow.

First and foremost, it is a good way to show oneself if he can keep his rooms clean and order. Most of people believe that it means ones personal characteristic, such as inner factor. Nobody preferst o communicate with those making their places massed up. Let’s take my friend,Micheal, as a good example. He is a boy who does not like to sweep his rooms,so his rooms always seem dusty and disorder especially his bedroom. So his classmates do not （are not )willing to drop by his home. And even, a few people would like to become his friends. What is so pity!(怎么看上去那么怪？用What a pity!比较好吧) You can imagine how hard he reache ssuccess without other help.  

In addition, ones who can make his or herplaces beautiful and order receive（这个搭配？） some skills, such as management ability. In other words, they can improve their capacities in the process. Let’s take a  common place （这是什么意思？）as an example. If you want to order your domestic home, you need to desire an accurate plan that which thing should put which place. And then you have to learn by heart where it is. Therefore, you can find out it quickly when you want to use it. Actually, it will help you to save much time and energy, and you can take advantage of the time to deal with others. Moreover,order and beautiful rooms are benefiting （can benefit）our health. As can be seen from the above analysis (the analysis above), these (the)advantages of it are obvious and allow us no excuse to vote against to it.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, students who can order their places can receive a large amount of enefits, such as making more friends and improving management ability.Therefore, we could safely draw the conclusion that it is better to students to make success.

zhengping001UID: 2689322

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1.4 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

According to a recent statistic taken by the China Daily, indicates that the number of people who would like to make an important decision with others are more than 90 percent in China. A few people have to choose do it alone under the especial sitting.

With the rapid development of science and technology, people will face more and more weird problems in their work or life. If they want to make a better and accurater decision on some things, as far as I am concerned, it is necessary to touch other people's advice or thought.

First and foremost, as all we known, other people could help one person when he need to make a important decision. For example, when before a high-school student will go to matriculation, he need to decide to choose which university better. Due to his limited experience and knowledge, he could not make a accurate decision for himself. If his teachers or parents can offer some advice or instruct him how to do it, he could choose one university which is more proper himself. On the side, with the hand of the other people, we could avoid to make some mistakes that would greatly affect our estimate.

In addition, there is little doubt that people are more comfortable, if they can accept other hand or suggestion when they can not deal with some difficult and important decision alone. A recent survey conducted by experts shows that more than 85 percent of people had the experience of the cooperation with others to make their right decision. With the cooperation, most of these people had said that it can help them to save much energy  and time.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, people should not make some important decisions alone when they can not deal with them only by themselves. Before they make an important decision, they should take a look around other thought or idea, because it will bring a lot of benefits to them.

shirley072UID: 2712200

According to a recent statistic takenby the China Daily, indicates (Recently, a research published on China Daily indicates,否则没有主语) that the number of people who wouldlike to make an important decision with others are more than 90 percent inChina (that more than 90% of people in China preferto make an important decision with others,觉得这样简洁一点). A few people have to choose do italone under the especial sitting.

With the rapid development of scienceand technology, people will face more and more weird problems in their work orlife. If they want to make a better and accurater (accurater的比较级是more accurate) decision on some things, as far as I am concerned, it isnecessary to touch (consider) otherpeople's advice or thought.

First and foremost, as all we known,other people could help one person when he need to make a (an) important decision. For example, when before ahigh-school student will go to matriculation, he need to decide to choose whichuniversity better. Due to his limited experience and knowledge, he could notmake a (an) accurate decision for himself.If his teachers or parents can offer some advice or instruct him how to do it,he could choose one university which is more proper (for)himself. On the side, with the hand of the other people, we could avoid to makesome mistakes that would greatly affect our estimate.

In addition, there is little doubt thatpeople are more comfortable, if they can accept other hand or suggestion whenthey can not deal with some difficult and important decision alone (deal with decision好像有点说不通吧). A recent survey conducted by expertsshows that more than 85 percent of people had the experience of the cooperationwith others to make their right decision. With the cooperation, most of thesepeople had said that it can help them to save much energy  and time.

All in all, from what has beendiscussed above, people should not make some important decisions alone whenthey can not deal with them only by themselves. Before they make an importantdecision, they should take a look around other thought or idea, because it willbring a lot of benefits to them.

总的来说，我觉得楼主要注意一下句子的应用呵呵，并且在举例子的时候，特别是第二个例子，主要是讲在自己不知道怎么办的时候别人给与的帮助，我觉得跟第一个例子的感觉有点相似，只是第一个例子更具体，而第二个就比较泛泛的谈了哦
个人意见啦

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Theenvironmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. Do youagree or disagree?
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The impact thatthe environmental problem on human life is undeniable. And the issue is notonly complex, but also enormous. A research published on the InternationalEnvironment and Development Center, indicates thatthe environmental issue is the global issue, and it greatly is blocking thedeveloping of economy.


With thedevelopment of science and technology, people in even expanding number areawareness of the complex influences that the environmental problems havebrought to us. Some people might think that it can still be handled be theindividual because they believe it that only if everybody protects theenvironment. However, most of people hold the contrary opinion, because it istoo complicated. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the latteridea.

First andforemost, as the above statement, the environmental issue is not the one cityor country problem, but the global issue. For example, there are many factoriesthat bring tremendous toxic gas and water into our world, and may be fromdifferent countries, such as United States,China, and England and soon. So it is difficult to control these problems if just to depend on onecountry, not mention to one person. It is a large project, all-consuming, sothat the cooperation is necessary. All of countries or people should attend tothe program that protecting and rebuilding our environment. It can not do thatby individual.

In addition, asall we know that the environmental issue is more complicated and serious thanbefore, so to deal with it the advanced technology is necessary. For instance,the Carbon Dioxide contributes to the growing global temperature. A recentpaper published on the Science, that is a famous journal, shows that theycreate a new technique but it only has a bit of benefit on reducing the contentof Carbon Dioxide. Even through, their projects are sustained by the governmentor companies.

All in all, from what hasbeen discussed above, the environmental issue is very complex, all-consuming,and even needs advanced technology to deal with; therefore we could safely drawthe conclusion that the environmental issue can not be handled by individual.