11.19homework

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11.19Do you agree or disagree that: spend time alone is the truly best way to relax the stress.

We suffer various kinds of stresses from our everyday life, which must be released so as to keep our physical and mental healthy. But what is a better way to relax ourselves, spending time alone or staying with other persons like our friends and families. In my view, the latter one is my preference. I would like to list several reasons to illustrate my opinion.

First and foremost, comfort and encouragement from other people will make us feel warm and relaxed, at the same time the pressure is out of us unconsciously. According to the survey by the China Psychological Department, talking can help people to release their bad feeling such as sorrow, upset, loneliness,especially pressure. What’s more, the avarage life of the person who is open and like to communicate with others is higher than the one who prefers to stay by himself. The need of communication is one of the human instect since humanbeings are social aninals. Thus we need someone to listen to us and give us a warm hug when we are in pressure. Just a smile and several simple words can give us courage to overcome the difficulties and eliminate the pressure.

Secondly, I believe that telling your problems to others can help you to find the solutions which contribute to lessen or even wipe out the pressure. Most of our pressures come from our lack of abilities to deal with some problems, so it is the right time to ask for others’ advices and assistances when you are under pressure. For example, during the last final exam which nearly drove me crazy, I angry easily and have a low efficiency of studying. Then I called my mother and she comforted me. What’s more, she provided me some advices in going over my courses which helped me a lot by saving much time and energy.

To draw a fair picture, some people are not good at expressing their feelings or have no habits to share their secrets with others. However, no matter what kind of people you are, hiding your feelings and standing pressure alone does harm to your health.

In conclusion, after analyzing the all aspects, I claim that spend time with others is the truly best way to relax the stress for two benefits including getting comfort and encouragement and finding solutions to solve the problems which cause the stress.

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11.19Do you agree or disagree that: spend time alone is the truly best way to relax the stress.
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We suffer various kinds of stresses from our everyday life, which must be released so as to keep our physical and mental healthy(health). But what is a better way to relax ourselves, spending time alone or staying with other persons like our friends and families. In my view(和后面重了，去掉), the latter one is my preference. I would like to list several reasons to illustrate my opinion. ; _. J6
First and foremost, comfort and encouragement from other people will make us feel warm and relaxed, at the same time the pressure is out of us unconsciously. According to the survey by the China Psychological Department, talking can help people to release their bad feeling such as sorrow, upset, loneliness, especially pressure. What’s more, the avarage（average） life of the person who is open(open-minded ) and like to communicate with others is higher than the one who prefers to stay by himself. The need of communication is one of the human instect(instinct) since human beings are social aninals. Thus we need someone to listen to us and give us a warm hug when we are in pressure. Just a smile and several simple words can give us courage to overcome the difficulties and eliminate the pressure.
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Secondly, I believe that telling your problems to others can help you to find the solutions which contribute to lessen or even wipe out the pressure. Most of our pressures come from our lack of abilities to deal with some problems, so it is the right time to ask for others’ advices and assistances when you are under pressure. For example, during(before) the last final exam which nearly drove me crazy, I am angry easily and have a low efficiency of studying. Then I called my mother and she comforted me. What’s more, she provided me some advices in going over my courses which helped me a lot by saving much time and energy. . c: W4 Z+ K; a& C, E
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To draw a fair picture, some people are not good at expressing their feelings or have no habits to share their secrets with others. However, no matter what kinds of people you are, hiding your feelings and standing pressure alone does harm to your health.
In conclusion, after analyzing the all aspects, I claim that spend time with others is the truly best way to relax the stress for two benefits including getting comfort and encouragement and finding solutions to solve the problems which cause the stress.

逻辑结构不错：
安慰和鼓励（减轻压力，保持健康，社会性动物）
获得建议(考试例子)
总结也写的不错，语法错误比较少，赞

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11.19Do you agree or disagree that: spendtime alone is the truly best way to relax the stress.* H' V- C) w)

Wesuffer various kinds of stresses from our everyday life, which must be releasedso as to keep our physical and mental healthy. But what is a better way torelax ourselves, spending time alone or staying with other persons like ourfriends and families. In my view, the latter one is my preference. I would liketo list several reasons to illustrate my opinion. 开头很精练，值得我学习，我一般开头都写得很多，到底哪一种更好呢？

Firstand foremost, comfort and encouragement from other people will make us feelwarm and relaxed, at the same time the pressure is out of us unconsciously.According to the survey by the China Psychological Department, talking can helppeople to release their bad feeling such as sorrow, upset, loneliness, especiallypressure. What’s more, the avarage (average) lifeof the person who is open and like to communicate with others is higher thanthe one who prefers to stay by himself (这种表达感觉有点怪, be alone). The need of communication is one ofthe human instect (instincts) since human beingsare social aninals (animals). Thus we needsomeone to listen to us and give us a warm hug when we are in pressure. Just asmile and several simple words can give us courage (可能表达习惯有点不一样，但后面这种是不是更常见呢can encourage us) to overcome thedifficulties and eliminate the pressure.

Secondly, I believe that telling your problems to others can helpyou to find the solutions which contribute to lessen or even wipe out（这个词用得好） the pressure. Most of our pressures come from our lack of abilitiesto deal with some problems, so it is the right time to ask for others’ advicesand assistances when you (we,要一致，前面是our)are under pressure. For example, during the last finalexam which (that) nearly drove me crazy, I angryeasily and have a low efficiency of studying. Then I called my mother and shecomforted me. What’s more, she provided me some advices in going over mycourses which helped me a lot by saving much time and energy（这句分开写更好点）

To draw a fair picture, some people are not good at expressing their feelingsor have no habits to share their secrets with others. However, no matter whatkind of people you are, hiding your feelings and standing pressure alone doesharm to your health.这段写得很好

Inconclusion, after analyzing the all aspects, I claim that spend time withothers is the truly best way to relax the stress (去掉)
for two benefits including getting comfort and encouragement andfinding solutions to solve the problems which cause（causedby）
the stress.这句也太长了，分二句更好，个人意见。.

这是一篇至少25分的作文,记得帮我回改。

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