12月2日独立写作

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交作业12月2日独立写作：
12.2 It is more fun to see a movie in the cinema with other people than see a movie at home.

In the present society, seeing movie is still wellcomed by audience as one of recreation means in leisure time. Some individuals would like to see a film together with companions in the cinema. In contrast, others prefer to enjoy their favorite movies at home. My preference is the former way because I suppose seeing movie at theatre will be more advantagous for me than that at home. Next I will demonstrate it from the following two espects.

First of all, I can communicate with my friends and other film lovers if I choose to see a film in a theatre. Being a film puff, I care about everything happened in the film circle, especial for some latest news of some super stars. After seeing movie, I will take some drinks with peers to share our knowledage about one certain film in general. Sometimes we will discuss some new film technologies and exchange updated information on some actors or actress. Last month I got a piece of news from my friend that Kongfu movie star Chenglong would make a business interview in a cinema near to my house. It is very lucky for me to have a face to face talk with my dream idel.

In addition, I will have preferable audio and video experiences in a cinema because the auditorium has generally equiped with advanced facilities while it is impossible for private audience to do so at home. To be honest, seeing movie at home isnot to appreciate a film but just aware of its content. I cannot experience some specific sencious camera shots which the director designed specially for audience at home. For example, I cannot sense the magnificent scineary places in the film “Out of Africa” and breathtaking desastrous senes in the film “Juris Park”

In conclusion, despite of some advantages to see a film at home, being a single man and film puff, I prefer to make close link with friends and enjoy cinema technologies by doing that in the theatre instead of staying at home alone.

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整体结构比较好

但是最好再加一段在家看电影的好处，两者在结论段一比较，就更有说服力，又能凑字数，你看如何