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独立作文 那些保持房间整洁有秩序地学生会更成功 [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-12-3 22:10:15 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
And good habits help people making progress in their lives. That means if someone wants to be a winner in his life, he should act in a right way. Students who are used keeping their own room tidy usually show more success. That is what we usually say : to be success is something as a habit.

In one hand, to clean their room regularly helps students forming a necessary awareness of doing everything systematically.
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In another, Students will gain cool brain and pleased mood with a neat room.

Finally, holding a habit of making room up reflects the students’ attitude to life which shows a strong mind to win.

For what has been discussed above, we may arrive at the conclusion that students can be more successful in their life if they are with good habit as clean up their room. It helps students doing things methodically , keeping mind pleased and cool, and holding a strong will to win in the life. So, if someone ask how to be a winner , I would tell him : just go and clean your own room first!




没有给各段添加例子及细节,望各位大侠有兴趣的给添加上,我实在想不明把叠被子扫地之类和分论点关系,观点都是回忆以前某人跟我讲过的。非常感谢
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发表于 2009-12-4 11:33:17 |只看该作者
谢谢提供思路,这道题确实思路有点打不开

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